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By : Aten
  • From Pussycat on February 16, 2005
    Robbie carried the laundry into Aten’s dark room. “Morning, Aten.”
    Aten pulled the covers over his head with a moan.
    *snickers* He did it wrong. You're supposed to snarl obscenities and demand coffee.

    Aten leaned over and started to cry on her shoulder. He wrapped his arms around her and held her tightly.
    Poor kid...

    “I’m sorry, Katie. I guess….I guess I’m being too hard on myself.”
    *snorts* fucking duh!!!

    Marik grinned as his eyes skimmed Katie. “Sure thing, beautiful.”
    “That’s it, Marik Ishtar! Goodbye!” Katie smiled as she grabbed the file. “Your son is just as bad as you.”
    Marik licked his lips. “Well, what do you expect? He’s my son.”
    “Marik, what am I going to do with you?”
    The yami grinned, his canines showing. “Use your imagination, gorgeous.”
    *laughs* Nice to see Marik's mood has improved!!

    Red silky curtains decorated the windows. Similar colored table cloths covered each table. The walls were decorated with white and gold trim.
    In the middle of their table was a single burning candle and a rose.
    In the corner, Aten could see the fireplace blazing.
    oooooooooo swanky!!

    I have to….use the little boy’s room.”
    “You can say ‘bathroom,’ you know.”
    *cackles* Yeah, at his age he could at least call it the 'Big Boys' Room'

    “Dinner Time!” Robbie smiled as he bounced excitedly in his chair. “Dinner Time makes everything better!”
    *laughs* Okay maybe he should stick with calling it the little boys' room....

    “Aten Bakari Ishtar, will you marry me?”
    Well? Answer the boy!

    “Aten, will you be my husband?”
    Sheesh, don't leave him hanging!

    “Of course I’ll marry you, Robbie.”
    *throws hands up* It's about time!

    “Oh, I will, Aria, don’t worry.”
    “Or I will take care of you,” Aria added with a snarl in his ear.
    *laughs* What a good sister.

    /I am not wounded!/
    Denial Central....

    Wow... hell of a flashback.

    Aria yawned. “The lid wouldn’t close, so I sent it to the Shadow Realm. Then I thought about how pissed my fathers would be without the milk for the coffee, so I went into the Shadow Realm to track it down.”
    “Where did you find it?”
    “The Helpless Child drank half the damn bottle!” Aria grumbled loudly.
    Robbie laughed. “He’s only a kid.”
    *laughs* I can just see that.

    Those letters are something else.... Saturday huh? Okay.

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  • From MarikIshtar77 on February 15, 2005
    Aww, Aten manages to get to me everytime! The proposal was so sweet! I can't wait for their wedding now!

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  • From ANON - Marikishtar77 on February 13, 2005
    That Yami....he's such a bastard! I'm glad Glenn is okay. I feel I need to do this... ***slaps a banana cream pie in Yami's face*** Okay...a little better... Will the Pharaoh ever learn to be nice??
    Thanks for the update! Question...how did the thing you told me about go? Got good news for me?
    *big hugz*

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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on February 12, 2005
    Konichiwa!

    Couple of things. First, Sorry for being late in reading! ^^u I've been terribly busy lately! And my sister and my best friend, who both have their heads buried in the gutter, are not helping much. *Sigh* Second, HOORAY!!!! I got a Gold rating on my solo and I was ONE half a point away from a perfect score, too! ^_________________________________________________________________^ Happiness! Anyways, back on topic (Jeez, way too many Message boards for me...). Yahoo! Robbie and Aten are gunna get married! WOOHOO!!!!!! And... and.. Aten's out of the hospital! YAAAAAY!!!!!! And Seto's out of Jail! YAY!!!!! *Throws so much confetti, the house is covered in a five foot layer of confetti* W00t!!!! Now, let's see if Vidello will MArry Aten and Robbie or not... I somehow doubt it... Anyways, I gotta go now! Krys-san said that she updated her stories just recently! ^___^ More stories to read, today! WOOHOO!!
    Kyasarin: Fanfiction junkie...
    Caterfree: Arigatou gozaimasu!! Gracias!!!
    Kyasarin: And You've been in Spanish class too long...
    Caterfree: That's clase de Espańol!
    Kyasarin: Whatever...
    Caterfree: See ya wednesday! Well... More than likely Thursday at the earliest. My sister has school Monday thru Wednesday night and I rarely get to get online while she's gone... Well, see ya when I see ya!

    Ja Ne! ^_~

    PS. Gomen nasi ifd I re-reviewed. My comuter's a piece of shit. *Breaks into song* I gotta piece of shit computer! It's a piece of shit! It's a piece of shit!
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  • From Pussycat on February 09, 2005
    He’s not backing down!
    Is he not afraid of me?
    *knocks on Marik's head* Umm, duh! He's faced Yami Aten more than once!

    ‘Robert Allen Morgan-Ishtar.’
    Dang, I'd hate to have to do those monograms! *smirks*

    Marik raised an eyebrow. ‘Persistent little mortal, isn’t he?’
    *nods* Yup and you're stuck with him as an in-law! *snickers*

    “Well, Ryou, I’d have to discuss that with Miranda. I have some negotiating to do tomorrow,” he said with a smile as he licked his lips.
    Malik stopped bouncing. His body sagged. “You have to see Miranda tomorrow?”
    The blond yami’s predatorial eyes narrowed and he licked his lips. “Why, yes, Malik. I have to do some negotiating.”
    Malik rolled his eyes. “Great….another day I won’t be able to walk.”
    *laughs* Someone's gonna want to stand for a week...

    “This time, Yami Marik Jibade Ishtar, you’ll have to handle yourself after seeing Miranda….literally.”
    *cackles* a rod in the hand is worth..... umm, something.

    Odion shook his head in dismay. “Marik Ishtar, what are you doing?”
    *tilts head to the side* Lesseee... hands down Malik's pants? Umm, I'd say... groping? *blinks innocently*

    “He has been taking the appearances of people in our family to undermine our loyalty to each other.”
    'bout time someone figured this out!!!

    The four men dropped their jaws and their eyes widened.
    Bakura groaned. “Aria….pregnant? Again?!”
    *snorts* wow, she delivers news well, doesn't she?

    Isis held Ryou’s arm. “Your daughter was raped, Ryou. That is what caused Aten to go yami….and which caused him to have his heart attack.”
    yeah... she delivers it with a wrecking ball. Damned good thing she's not a doctor....

    “Bandit Keith is a dead man….a fucking dead man!” Bakura snarled.
    *starts singing in a strange voice* Blood blood, lovely lovely blood. *blinks* What? He needs to die!

    *snorts* Vidello is gonna shit bricks when he figures out that Robbie's sweetie is a guy.

    “I’ve known you for twelve years. Nothing you can say can shock me anymore.”
    *smirks* Wanna bet?

    “Have you heard the news? Your son asked me permission to marry Aten.”
    Miranda put down her coffee cup. “He what? I don’t think I heard you right.”
    *snickers* You lose!

    “What kind of benefits?” she asked with a smile. “Hot……wild…..steamy…..hard…..
    bulging….benefits?”
    *snickers* You know, I think she's a bit of a tease...

    “Would they be……..deep benefits, Marik?”
    I really do think she might be a bit of a tease...

    Miranda grinned. “It depends on how rough…you wanna slap it.”
    Yup... she's a tease

    Miranda leaned up and kissed Marik’s lips.
    The yami blushed beet red. “Why…Why did you do that?”
    *laughs hysterically* She won the game!

    His head swooned as he felt something flood the mindlink to his yami.
    Then….it hit him….
    Burning lust.
    ‘Oh shit.’
    RUN MALIK RUN!

    The front door opened quickly and Marik appeared in the doorway to the kitchen. His eyes were dark and sweat covered his forehead. He panted for breath. A low, lust-filled growl came from him.
    whooopsie, too late. *smirks*

    “I’ll have to talk…..*pant* ….to Miranda….*pant pant* ….about this.”
    I'm sure she'll enjoy hearing every steamy detail too! *smirks*

    The Egyptian shrugged and wrapped his arms around his now snoring, drooling yami.
    ewwww, yami drool. Ick.

    *snerks*
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on February 08, 2005
    “When you find him, I want the shit tortured out of his ass! I want him stabbed, shot, drawn, quartered, hung, castrated, flattened, dismembered, disembowled, raped, his tongue cut out, heart ripped out, brains scraped out of his skull, and I want his fucking insides placed in jars and I want his fucking body incinerated!"
    Whoo-Yeah! Go Kura! I just love when he gets all nasty!
    Malik clipping coupons...that is a vision I never imagined, but dude, I love it! hahaha Very cute *grin*
    Did I mention thta lemon was awesome? Not much beats that hot Ishtar sex. *wink*
    Congrats Robbie and Aten!! *sends the boys a toaster* (Don't let Aria around this one, m'k? *giggle*)
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on February 04, 2005
    Konichiiwa!

    OH MY GOD!!!!! WHY DO YOU TORTURE ME SO, WOMAN?!?!?!?! AAAAAAGH!!!!!!!!!! *Bangs head on copmuter desk* DAMMIT!!!!
    Kyasarin: TAKE COVER!!!!! *Hides in a foxhole*
    Caterfree: *goes KABOOM ala Battle Royale style (SakuraMB RPG)*
    Kyasarin: *Sigh* I think you know what cat has to say aboiut this, uypdate sooner than you normally do or she'll die... *rolls eyes*
    Caterfree: *Head comes alive* I dun wanna wait until Tuesday, dammit!
    Kyasarin: AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Runs and rides in China*
    Caterfree: =D Anyways, wish me luck at the solo and ensomble contest tomorrow! I'm gunna need it....

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From Pussycat on February 04, 2005
    Umi’s jaw dropped. “You’re….pregnant? Again? How?”
    *blinks and bites tongue*

    ‘Royal Magic! The pharaoh’s presence is here.”
    'Bout time someone figured that out!!

    "The files they took are my ‘Dummy Files’. They contain nothing but legal documentation of every transaction KaibaCorp has made with other companies."
    *laughs* sneaky!

    " He can kiss my ass for ten million dollars."
    *waves ten million dollars* bend over, baby! *cackles*

    [Marik, can you watch these for me? I have a phone call!]
    *jaw drops* Mark is actually working for one of those bastards!? Sheesh, poor guy!

    “You are a dirty liar! You were a liar in the past! You will always be a liar! You’ve always used money and power to get what you want, even at Duelist Kingdom!”
    *snorts* that is so not Yugi. Even angry he doesn't talk like that.

    Isis narrowed her eyes and slapped the pharaoh across the face.
    WOOHOO! Nail him again!

    Odion punched Yami in the stomach, making the pharaoh fall on his knees, coughing.
    Wheeeeeeeeeee cool!

    ‘Mr. Yami Marik Ishtar?’
    Oh hell, what do I call him?!!!
    *snickers* I still like that.

    “Marik, I would like permission to give a marriage proposal to your son, Aten.”
    Okay, this cliffie I can live with! *smirks*

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  • From Pussycat on February 02, 2005
    Barnes turned to the guard. “Thank you for all your help. Let’s go, son.”
    They need to die. I've got the marshmallows ready just in case Asher gets to them.

    Every morning for the past month it was the same thing. Wake up. Run to the bathroom. And, well…you get the idea.
    uh oh.... Sounds like someone may be "baking"

    Oh good. You can live. Ryou will really be okay. *nods* That's good.

    Robbie smiled. “If you can’t take it, Eric, I think you should go home!”
    *laughs* His taunts are improving!

    The insect appeared on the field, its antennae twitching.
    Ew, bug. They need to make a giant foot card that smooshes the bugs. *smirks* I can just see Weevil Underpants throwing a hissy about that. *blinks* Oh yeah, off on a tangent. sorry.

    “I summon my ‘Great Angus’ (1800/600) in attack mode!”
    *reads, rubs eyes, cleans glasses and reads again* ohhhhh I read Great Anus... I had this sudden image of a giant butthole showing up on the playing field. Scared myself sick for a second.

    The monster exploded and Eric was thrown back by the force.
    His Life Points dropped to 0.
    *throws confetti* Woohooo!!! Way to go Robbie!

    “You first, Aqua-Man.”
    *cackles* I remember that cartoon!

    Umi grinned. “Not anymore! I activate ‘Neptune’s Rage!’ It takes 500 points for each monster in your graveyard and your hand! And I count your two Ookazi, your Thestalos The Fire Monarch, and your ‘Spirit of Flames’ That makes 2000 just in your graveyard alone! You have 4 cards in your hand. That would make another 2000 points. You’re all washed up!”
    A torrent of water sprayed from the card and washed Jason and Eric several feet away.
    Jason’s Life Points were extinguished.
    *jaw drops* WOW, sweet move!!

    “What about our…..sweet Isis, I hate this…..Silly Sea Sandwich? It’s so silly…it’s…..oh, fuck it. Is that it, Robbie?”
    *falls over laughing* Poor dear...

    ‘Captain Happy Buns….where our Buns are always happy.’
    *laughs hysterically* I'll say!

    “Of course, if I fall forward, you do realize you’ll be under me.” Aten gave her a wink.
    “Watch it, Son of Marik Ishtar…..”
    *snickers* Yesss, like father like son.

    “I was conceived by darkness, you know. What else do you expect?”
    *snickers* Exactly this!

    The way to Robbie’s heart was his stomach…and Aten knew it was Robbie’s weakness.
    LOL like Tristan!

    Robbie stood there silent.
    *edits*... as all the blood in his body headed to his crotch. *falls over laughing*

    wow... nice shower!

    “How are you, baby?”
    Umi placed a kiss on her forehead. He saw a box in Aria’s hand.
    “How am I? I’m pregnant.”
    SEE! I said she was baking! She's got a bun in the oven. *snorts* Bakura was a leeeeetle late with the no spawning comment!

    Okay, now I'm done reviewing. *smirks*

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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on February 01, 2005
    Okay, I am getting so upset that Sgt. Barnes is turning everything aganst Seto. I swear, if I could I would do something to Yami and Sgt. Barnes for this. *sighs* Maybe I'm just a bit too into this fic series...

    I love how you have this going together. Oh, two questions though: 1. Seto will get out soon right? 2. Keith isn't the father of the child is he? *sigh* I'm so into this series like my mother is into her soap operas...
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  • From Pussycat on January 30, 2005
    Seto’s head fell back against the chair. ‘Mokuba, I am going to kill you…..not again.’
    *hands Seto a 'do-it-yourself vasectomy kit'* Think Mokuba'll get the hint? *blinks*

    One of the women stepped ahead. “What was that bandage doing on that little girl’s leg?”
    Oy, stupid bitch.

    “Haven’t you ever had a three year old? They trip, they fall, they scrape their knees. You must not be a parent.”
    *snorts* He's close. She's obviously never been around kids.

    Asher’s left eye twitched. “Man………….needs……..fire………..now.”
    *hands Asher matches and a gas can* Dude, go get 'im.

    Bakura held Ryou’s hand. “Love, you are going to give yourself your own heart attack if you don’t slow down. I can feel how tired you are. You’re exhausted.”
    He's right. Ryou's gonna keep giving everything of himself until there's nothing left.

    Asher sat in his chair and pouted. “I only want to see someone die.”
    *pats Asher's head* Me too.

    Bakura ran to Ryou’s unconscious body and pressed his fingers to Ryou’s neck. “Oh sweet Isis……”
    *glares at Bakurasgirl* You are is so much fucking trouble.
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  • From Pussycat on January 26, 2005
    “The dead must remain dead. Do not think of bringing your dead child back to life.”
    *snort* like that's gonna be an easy thing to agree to. Sheesh

    Seto watched as Otogi pulled out a pink and brown table cover. Around the edges were yellow lace and frills. The CEO covered his mouth in surprise.
    *makes noise akin to coughing up a hairball* ewwwwwwww nashtay

    *blinks* bull-poop?

    “No! I have to go home and bake blueberry muffins and a chocolate cake!”
    Oooooooooo Seto fucked uuuup! *snickers*

    “You won’t get him until tomorrow. Tristan’s going to eat his little heart out tonight because Otogi’s going to bake all day.”
    Yup, the way to Tristan's libido is straight through his stomach. *smirks* Ooo ooo oo Apron time! *falls over laughing* Thought I forgot about it, didn't you?

    Seto looked down. “The doctors….what?”
    whoooops

    Robbie was intelligent….and trustworthy. But could be trusted with confidential Kaiba-Corp information?
    *snickers* that's a big fricken duh!

    Robbie watched Seto leave. ‘I know I have something to offer. I just have to figure out what it is.’
    awwww

    “My, have you grown, Aten Ishtar! You’ve become so handsome! It’s not hard to see that you are of Ishtar Blood.”
    *laughs* he charmed his own aunt and the kid's not even trying!

    Umi shook his head. “Man, I think it’s a bad idea to ask your priest. I’m warning you that this may be too……….extreme…for him to grant you any type of marriage.”
    extreme... that's a nice way of putting it.

    Odion narrowed his eyes as Tristan ran out of the room. ‘I sense evil……that man was not Tristan.’
    *throws up hands* and yet he says nothing to anyone!

    Shiiiiit evil way to end the chapter! Gods... Poor Glenn.

    Kat
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on January 26, 2005
    Konichiiwa!

    RAWR!! I SHALL KILL YAMI!!!!!! RAWR!!!! *Gets out HEr sister's firend's spellbook and hunts for anykind of portal spell* I SHALL ENTER CYBERSPACE AND KILL YAMI!!!! PH34R M3H!!!!!!!!
    Kyasarin: 7_7 Here we go again. Prepare for various concussions. Cat may be in the hospital soon. *Sigh* And it hasn't even been a year since that ordeal... Anywise, I think you konw what Cat wants to say: Learn to update quicker and Yami's death awaits him. 7_7
    Caterfree: DEATH TO THE PHAROH!!!!! DEATH TO THE PHAROH!!!!!!

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Uke Kit and Uke Io on January 24, 2005
    Kit: I LIKE IT! ^-^ I can't wait until the next chapther.
    Io: I liked it too!!! And I had an idea for you~!! ^-^ You should do a Tristen Otogi fic. About when Tristen was dating Serenity, and what Otogi went though when Tristen was gone. ^-^ I would read something like tha.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on January 23, 2005
    LOL! Sweeeet.....a cliffie! You write those so well, hun.

    OOOooHhh....and that lemon was simply divine! WONDERFUL job! I know how hard they are for me to write, so considering how long it was and the fact that there were 4 dudes, you never cease to amaze me with your writing skills! *bows to you*

    Robbie is so good to Aten, Marik owes that kid alot! ^_^

    Greatness as usual! Thanks for the quality reading!

    *Hugs n' Kisses*
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