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By : Aten

From ANON - kat on January 23, 2005
Otogi smiled. �I�m doing the planning for Seto�s wedding. I don�t mind doing yours, too.�
*laughs* Otogi the wedding planner!

"I have to talk to Vidello and see if he will marry Aten and I."
*snorts* that's gonna go over like a lead balloon.

�Aria�s needs. Marik�s needs. Robbie�s needs. What about yourself? You still have a hard time putting yourself first.�
'Bout time someone said something to him about that.

Umi blushed as he rushed past the two kissing men. �Goodnight, my daddy�s friends!�
Umi closed the door behind him and let out a sigh. �That was�.strange.�
*laughs*

Marik snickered. �Are you a comedian?�
Bakura raised his eyebrow. �Are you incredibly sexy?�
*cackles* yes and yes.

The two hikaris watched their yamis touch each other and their foreheads started to become damp.
Ooooo the Hot Sexy Yami show is on! Woohoo

Bakura collapsed on his lover, panting heavily. �There�s�just�.one�word�I gotta�.say.�
Marik trembled and panted, his body spasming from the force of their rough yami lovemaking. �What�s��that?�
��.Ow.�
*falls over laughing hysterically* Well, someone did something right!

The yami stood there speechless when he saw the two figures standing at the door.
�Isis and Odion?!�
What?! Why?? Damn... I hate waiting.

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From ANON - anubiset on January 22, 2005
SOLO GOOOOOD. Can`t wait for more. I can`t stand the thought of Aten dying though. I hate that part. But he is loved and has loved that`s more than most can say.
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From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2005
OMG THAT'S SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT! UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!
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From ANON - Black-Butterfly on January 19, 2005
Awwww...*sniffles* Poor Aten...You're gonna kill him off in just 5 years? :"(
Bleh....I suppose a lemon WOULD make it a bit better. And yes, a bit of Robbie solo would be nice...That's so sad though...Oh well. I'm glad Malik's ok. That's good...*sighs and hands the authoress a big plate of fresh lemon cookies* Looking forward to the next chap.
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From ANON - Kat on January 19, 2005
So, if Marik can get back to his rod *blinks innocently* will it work to heal him? I'm still a bit confused on what Yami did to break it....

Marik looked in the distance and saw another legion of machines charging. �Machines vs. Machines and Warriors?�
The Winged Dragon of Ra snarled. �He�s dueling an old puppet of ours.�
Marik rubbed his sore head. He gasped and jumped back, shocked. �BANDIT KEITH!�
ooohooo, so that's how he finds out!

�Don�t worry, gramps! You�re still winning!� Robbie laughed as he yelled across the arena.
*laughs* Nice insult!

Whoa.... he really did kick Keith's ass. Way to go Chibi Seto! I mean, Robbie.

�That means that we are helpless. I can�t tap into the Shadow Magic if my Item doesn�t have any magic of its own.�
The hikari swallowed hard. �That means�..if they shoot you�you can�t heal in the Rod.�
�Exactly. The magic won�t protect us from being hit. I�m weak as it is already.�
Ohhhhhhhhhh, now I understand how broken it is. Got it.

�Malik, you could have been killed,� the yami whispered. �You would have died�..I couldn�t�.I couldn�t bear to lose you�.just like I couldn�t bear to lose Ishtar.�
awwwwwww

Ryou stepped into the kitchen. �Dr. Zira said that he had the results of Aten�s tests and he wanted to see us.�
Marik stepped behind Ryou. �We have to go, Itemri.�
This isn't going to be good....

Five years? That's it? Shit...

I need to talk to someone about this.
Someone I can trust.
Someone who won�t send me to the Shadow Realm or cut my tongue out.
*laughs* Love that last line

Robbie took a deep breath and turned to the couple. �As I said, I know we may be young, but��.I want to ask Aten to marry me.�
Woooohooo!!! 'bout time!

Oooo foursome! Lemon lemon! Yaaay.

Kat

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From ANON - Kat on January 16, 2005
�I know��but, still�.I can�t leave.�
*points at Robbie* Clingy much?? *smirks*

Robbie...the loyal friend, the rational, logical teen....was now out for more than revenge.
Wasn't this the same kid who was doing homework on a day off?? *blinks* Robbie's growing up. *snickers* Actually, it sounds more like he's going into Seto.

Marik closed his eyes tightly as he heard his child's scream ripple through the room.
wow, a truly low blow. Tsk. Yami must die.

"Because since Yugi kicked you out, I bet you're getting tired of using your own hand! "
*laughs* Oooooo bonus points! Love that.

I don't get it. Yami just let Marik go? Just like that? That's weird... what's Ol' Pointy Head up to?

"Robbie, I'm going to say this just once. Go kick his ass."
*laughs* You tell 'im, Miranda!

�I can�t have my yami missing. Besides�.we�re out of milk.�
*falls over laughing* At least his priorities are straight. Well, sort of....

Mokuba sighed. Having identical twin girls was a challenge. �Lilly, where is your sister?�
The other girl ran from a bush. �I�m Ivy, daddy! Silly daddy!�
*howls* the biological equivalent of bait and switch! *laughs*

�Girls, give that thing back to Malik. It�s not good to touch that thing. You don�t know where that�s been.�
*blinks innocently* But everyone knows where Marik's Rod has been.

You are evil. Leaving Malik hanging like that! Shame on you...

"It�s time to dethrone the Machine King!�
*snickers* Of course it is. He's gotten old, fat and was always ugly.

Damn... I wanna know what happens to Malik.

Kat
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on January 15, 2005
Konichiiwa!

GAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!! ARE YOU TRYING TO GET YO ASS KICKED WOMAN?!?!?!??!?!
Kyasairn: Chill, Cat.
Caterfree: DUN TELL EM TO CHILL, BIZATCH!!
Kyasarin: 7_7 Anyways, bakurasgirl-sama, you do realize Cat-chan
Caterfree: SAMA TO YOU, BIZATCH!!!!!!
Kyasarin: Whatever, does NOT like cliff hangers, *Runs to another dimension and gathers the Dragon balls (DBZ)* I WISH FOR WEDNESDAY TO COME SOONER!!!!!! *Nothing happens* DAMMIT!!
Caterfree: Update soon!

Ja Ne! ^_~
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From ANON - Star on January 15, 2005
cool thanks . I hope Milik will be ok.see ya
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From ANON - Shadow on January 15, 2005
I thiink this is greeat and I vote for the ncs and have marik wake up while yamis raping him are you going to haaave yami kiddnap Bakura to? thanks
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From ANON - Star on January 15, 2005
Hi its me I like this chapter / sorry for not updating much plussse my birth day is 1-19 and I was wonderiiiing if you would grant an authorist wish just kidding anyway i think it would be cool if Marik woke up in the middle of of yami taking advantage of him.
ps on the side since yamiii tech owns Bakura is he gooing to go after him next just wondering it would be cool if yoou had them both therre not neesarly bbeing malisted though or beatin. thanks see ya
star
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From ANON - setsuko on January 14, 2005
Muwe... I think yami should rape him while marik is unconscience.. and wake up in the middle of all of it.
I'd like to see what happens from there... hehe... HAHAHA! **dies**
Robbie and Aten... sooo KAWAII! **dies yet again** **hugs ryou and bakura plushies**... mine.. **sighs**
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From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on January 14, 2005
*cuddles the plushies* I voye for the NCS but have Marik wake up half way through.
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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 (Again) LOL on January 14, 2005
I was in a rush l when I wrote my last review, so now Im going to do a real one. LOL
*thinking*
Oh, Asher, LMFAO! That dude is creepy! So why do I love him to death? hahaha......man, he sounds like something straight out of one of my dad's old monster movies. *shakes head and laughs* I hope he does burn up Srgt. Dickhead and his shallow side-kick son. THEY SUCK! *pelts Barnes' cruiser with rotten eggs*

I really like how you've made Yami so evilly. Reminds me of the early mangas^_^ I like him better evilly, how weird is that now? He really needs to have his way with Marik, that would be so frigging' HOT! Like I said in my last review, (the dorky short one) I vote Marik stays knocked silly. He'd probably like it either way though...that kinky freak. LOL (I love him, he's so cool.) Anyway I look at it, I keep seeing Yami looking like a jackass in the end. Maybe I'm thinking too much, yeah, thats has to be it. I must be in a zone again.....*goes back to her new obcession....online dueling*

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From ANON - Caterfree10 on January 13, 2005
Koncihiwa!

NYUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!! MARIK-KUN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Runs into computer moniter in an attempt to save MArik, but falls flat on her face* Ow.. *Twitch* *twitch*
Kyasarin: 7_7 Cat, you do realize trhat no matter how many times you do that, you'll NEVER get through into the internet?
Caterfree: TOJIKOMERU!!!!!! *Whacks Kyasarin*
Kyasarin: X_x
Caterfree: Anyways, I personally, don't want a Marik/Yami NCS, but if you insist to have one, PLEASE keep Marik-kun asleep, I don't want him to know anything about Yami doing anything to him until after Yami's done with him... Anyways, i have to go now!

Ja Ne! ^_~
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 12, 2005
NO!! nonononononononononono!!!!!!!!!!!! ooh i rather have-have yami locked in a closet with anzu wiht him stripped of everything (power and rank) and i would totally love it if his dick was cut off and shoved up his ass but please!! when bakura went through it i didn't think he was gonna make it!! Man oh man and hte duel monsters!! no they deserve to have anzu wiht them, nagging them to hte brink of death and insanity!! how dare they!!! *goes on a rampage* please i am on my hands and knees, groveling at your feet, please let ansher burn the entire burns household down!! that... that...! that sick, narrow minded, family!! *shudders* they bring a bad name to humanity itself!!!!! *takes a deep breath and calms* okay i got that out of my system. aten and robbie are the sweetest couple i have seen. they belong together and yami better not harm glen!! he's a sweetheart!!
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