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By : Aten
  • From ANON - Black-Butterfly on January 12, 2005
    -_-: I knew I hated cops...bleh...*busy stabbing the crotch of a tiny eric voodoo doll* Ehem...Well, i'd have a lot more to say about this chapter if I wasn't very wasted on pain meds. Sooo, First off, I vote yes on the poll. It sounds like an interesting idea. Second, I pity you. Viruses suck. >.< *passes the authoress a plate of lemon cookies to cheer her up.* heehee. ^^ Great chapter, as all of the rest were, and will continue to be, i'm sure. May the gods bless you with an eye for inspiration in every thing you see, and so on, and so forth. Looking forward to saturday
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 12, 2005
    "I'm sure that guy wouldn't go and INTENTIONALLY hurt someone who has just had a near-fatal heart attack."
    *cackles* awww, such naivete...

    "The only think I've killed recently is the mildew in the shower."
    *laughs* I swear he just channeled Otogi...

    “Yami Marik is vulnerable……perfect. Time for me to take advantage of this.”
    I swear, he's developing an obsession for Marik. Seriously, he's fixated on him.

    Two words can describe Barnes: Napleon complex.

    "Then this is a pity, isn't it?" the teen said. "Poor Aten....Poor baby Aten.....Going to die...Boo-Hoo," the teen mocked.
    A slow death would be too kind for this brat.

    "He told me Joey picked the colors and he hasn't told me anything about what colors he picked. So, let's hold off on that."
    Ooooo is he and the puppy in for a biiiiig shock! *laughs*

    "Go grab Asher.....he has a job to do."
    Ooooooo make evil pi... cop burn! Crispy! *cackles*

    “MAN BURN NOW!”

    “No, Asher! Bad!”
    AWWWW, ruin my fun. *pouts*

    “Yami will be proud,” Gaia said. “The Spirit of the Millennium Rod belongs to the Pharaoh once again.”
    *points* SEE!!! I told you! He's obsessed!

    The pharaoh removed Marik’s belt and ran his hand over the front of Marik’s jeans.

    ‘All mine.’
    Ew... just ew. Yami's just got issues... and a blonde fixation.

    I vote no, but I know how much you love to torture everyone. *smirks*
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on January 12, 2005
    my vote: Marik stays unconscious. Talk about a blow to Yami's ego, yunno? LOL
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 09, 2005
    *growls* trying this again since AFF.net just barfed on my first review.

    Kat: *dodges pointy
    *snickers* I'm sure pointy didn't do any damage...

    “We’re having a difficult time keeping Aten’s heart beating. It is your choice.”
    Ooooo hardest choice to make.

    “Aten, I love you! Please don’t die on me!”
    Silence.
    I've always wanted to do this... *drops pin*

    Ryou’s crying stopped. Miranda’s eyes widened. Aria looked down at Robbie, her hair spiky and twitching. Bakura’s jaw dropped. Malik and Marik’s faces bore the signs of shock.
    I know, serious moment, but that would be the funniest damned picture. I just wanna know one thing: Why the fuck are they shocked?!?! I mean, really.... it's as obvious as an elephant with a hard-on.

    “I love you, Aten Bakari Ishtar…..with all my heart.”
    AWWWWWWWWWWWW

    “I’ll sleep in the waiting room. I am not…leaving.”
    *laughs* Someone just channeled Bakura and Marik.

    Seto growled. “It’s helping me….but Aten needs a heart or he will die.”
    Well, he was told that throwing money at it wouldn't help. Who knew he'd actually think of using Zira's. *snickers*

    The white-haired yami's gaze shook Umi to the core, but to his surprise, the yami stepped aside. "She's upstairs. No spawning...and I mean it this time, Tsunami."
    "Yes, sir."
    oooo it has been a bad week!

    "I was a stubborn little bitch."
    ummm *nods*

    "You're my Angel of the Sea...."
    *groans, breaks out into a sweat* I must do this.... If she were a coward, would she be his Chicken of the Sea? *runs away laughing*

    [[The suspect responsible for the Domino Museum Break-in and the string of murders has been identified as Malik Ishtar.]]
    Dude, you are so in trouble....

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  • From ANON - Black-Butterfly on January 09, 2005
    Oh holy shit...Wow...I'm truly speachless. Damn. I swear my eyes were popping out of my head when i read that last part. Heh...aww, I hope Aten's ok. >.< I'm enjoying this fic too much for you to kill him off! *cries* and now Malik's been framed. Fabulous. Oh well, great chapter. I did enjoy it, even if i was nearly sobbing while reading it.
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  • From ANON - Broken Time on January 09, 2005
    Holy poo on a stick! I cried so hard when I read this. Aten and Robbie, confessing thier love! *Blinkblink* Yami is a sick bastard, then again.. he always will be, won't he. I pity Yuugi, he's going to have a hell of a time with Glenn AND Yami.. *Dun Dun Daaaa* And then will come the time when Yami get's his revenge on Yuugi!
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on January 08, 2005
    Konichiiwa!

    *Like Otto Lenenthal er something like that... from ROD the Movie* YOU WITCH!!!!! WITCHES SHOULD STICK TO THEIR BROOMS!!! *Attacks bakurasgirl with a scythe* DEATH AWAITS YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Kyasarin: *Sighs* Cat, did you forget your Zoloft?
    Caterfree: DEATH AWAITS YOU!!!!!!!!!! DEATH AWAITS YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Atacks Kyasarin with Sword in one hand and attacks Bakurasgirl with scythe in the other*
    Kyasarin: Damn! She's too talented! I REALLY don't think you should've done that, bakurasgirl-sama!!!!! Not a smart thing! HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Caterfree: HAIYAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Attacks bakurasgirl with both the sword and the sythe*
    Kyasarin: *Takes cover underneath sofa* Help me! Make Sunday come faster!!!!!
    Caterfree: IT'S DOMINGO, DAMMIT!!!!!!!!!! *Looks around relentlessly for Kyasarin*
    Kyasirn: EEP!!! *Cowers and goes into fetal position*
    Caterfree: DIE!!!!!!

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 07, 2005
    "Just sit here and let Daddy Keith do his thing.”
    ew ew ew ew ew

    Yami Aten sliced Jason’s penis with the blade, allowing half of it to hang detached from the rest of his body.
    ooo the unkindest cut of all! *cackles*

    Yami Aten let out a cry of pain and hunched forward, grabbing his chest.
    ///I can’t keep this up……it’s…too much on the heart….///
    Uhhhhohhhh

    “I have to go, mother. I have to hand in an essay to the teacher and I can’t miss another day in English. If I do, the teacher will fail me!”
    Tsk... school isn't _that_ important!

    Aten had died before he hit Robbie’s arms
    You... are soo dead! *grabs large, sharp objects to throw*

    Well, at least you let us know you haven't killed off Aten... Otherwise, you would so be in hiding!


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  • From ANON - Setsuko on January 06, 2005
    My friend Mallory showed me your stories... and I fell in love with them. I LOVE THEM! I especially love Aten x Robbie...
    they are so KAWAII! I'm really hoping to reading a lemon with both of them... hehe. I can't wait until you update... I can't! I almost cried
    when I read that Aten died... but I'm glad that he doesn't die completely. **cheers** **death hugs Aten and Robbie** I love your writing!
    **sighs in happiness** urm... sorry if i'm babbling here... just so... HAPPY! hehe... urm... thank you for taking the time to read this... hehe!
    Have a great day ^_^ Buh bye!

    ~§etusko
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  • From ANON - Broken_Time on January 06, 2005
    OH NOOOOOOOOO! Aten Died.. sort of(Says you). I hope he's going to be alright! And Keith... Oh Keith.. Is.Going.To.Die! *Insert battle cry here* Frying pan of doom for you bandit-boi!
    (Bwahahaha, You didn't think ya'd get rid of ME so soon, did ya? I found a way to review with out evil Media Miner, until it fixes!)
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  • From MarikIshtar77 on January 06, 2005
    High-fives to Aria and Aten for kicking butt on those jerks! The way Keith was talking to Aria....what a rude mouth! damn! He needs his tongue cut out! *sends both chibis flowers and ballons*
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  • From ANON - Uke Kit and Uke Io on January 05, 2005
    ^-^ hello! We really love this story.

    Uke Io: Ne, I was just wondering. When are you going to have a Robby/Aten lemon??????
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 04, 2005
    Ryou sighed and staggered to the couch. His shoulder sagged and he started sobbing.
    awww, poor Ryou...

    “We should ask Miranda to come talk to her.”
    Awww, Aten the brain! Smart boy.

    “Trigonometric formulas.”
    fucking a... how does he not sprain his tongue saying that??

    “I mean it, Itemri! You are not going to sex your way out of this! "
    I know it's a serious scene and all, but this part was funny.

    ‘At least he’s not pulling my pants off.’
    Not yet anyway....

    Marik felt Bakura trying to pull down his jeans.
    SEEE! I told you! *cackles* okay, okay... I know it's supposed to be serious.

    “Prove it. Go home and be the father that your child needs right now, Bakura.”
    Yeah, so there! *sticks tongue out*

    Malik narrowed his eyes. “Who do you think you are, Bakura Itemri?! Punching Ryou and storming off like that! You had the tantrum of a two year old!"
    Ooooo Malik's got claws!!!

    Awwwww cute father/daughter reunion...

    Before I knew it, I was alone in the night.
    My opportunity to tell Aten how I felt was gone.
    awwww, poor Robbie.

    Wow, Seto and Joey have been together for that long? Damn, they're getting old. *ducks*

    Damn... Seto lost another person. Not good.

    Awwww Poor Asher... I keep forgetting how childlike that guy can sound.

    Geez... guns and bombs. Isn't this called overkill???

    Seto ran to his desk and saw the three year olds sitting around Seto’s jars of candy.
    *laughs* Oooo many kids on sugar high now!!

    “Awia sowed us,” Ivy said with a giggle.
    Seto shook his head. “I’m going to have to talk to her…….again….about this.”
    Seto took away the bowl of candy from Xiao-Shen. “Xiao-Shen, this is the sugar free candy! Who showed you where this was?”
    “Aten-kun sow me candy wif no sugar.”
    Seto sighed. “Looks like I’ll have to have a few words with him, too.”
    *laughs hysterically*

    “Great…..I was shot at, my building nearly blown to kingdom come, and I just realize that we are living with not one, but two Chibi Arias.”
    Yup Seto, it's Monday.

    The child snickered. “Two men kissing…..funny.”
    *laughs* that's just too damned cute!

    *pulls out personal impliments of destruction* Okay, I'm all set for Thursday.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on January 03, 2005
    Happy New Year, huni!!! Great chapter! I knew Bakura would come to his senses! It was amusing picturing him groveling infront of Ryou. *Hears Ishtar's snickering in the background*
    Hugs to Aten and Aria!!!
    I can't wait to see what you're cooking up in hell's kitchen for the next chapter!
    *Hugz*
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 01, 2005
    “Do you think he took the news okay?”
    Aten looked around. “Seeing as the school is still standing and both of us are still alive, I’d say ‘yes’ to that.”
    *laughs* Scary part is, he's serious!

    “I heard your sister has a ‘bun in the oven.’ Too bad I couldn’t stick something into her and watch it bake.”
    ew... he's already the product of inbreeding!

    “Keep your eye on this one, Jenny. This one is a sweet-talker like his daddy.”
    *laughs* Boy ain't that the truth!!!

    “Make him an appointment, Jenny. This way Mr. Sweeter-Than-Honey can be on his way.”
    *howls* sweeter than honey... That's so cute!!

    “So! This is your meeting with Gabby! I didn’t know Gabby was old and hairy!”
    *shrieks* OOOO 10 points!

    Aria just watches her brother get roughed up?!?! Stupid stupid stupid!!!

    "I thought my sister would have more brain cells in her head than to think that he loves her."
    *snorts* Dude, she's not thinking with her brain cells

    I walked in and saw Robbie put a pillow over his German textbook.
    *laughs* Other boys hide their comics or porn... Robbie hides his schoolwork. Gotta love that

    “But, I want that fish, Robbie. I want Aria. I want to be with her.”
    awwwww, poor Umi.

    “This is my bitch. My good bitch.”
    Oy... good first impression. Numbnuts

    Ryou rolled his eyes. “Yes, he’s gotten older and fatter! Aria, please! Listen to me!”
    *falls over laughing* Old, hairy and fat. OOOOO Keith, you've really let yourself go to pot. *snickers* Calling Marik 'Pops' and then having the audacity to looking worse that a guy who is 5000 years old? Dude, you really do suck.

    *snorks* Stubborn as a jackass, Bakura and Aria... yep! That fits!

    “Father didn’t want me going out with nice guys…..so I chose to go out with scum.”
    yeah... that's a really good excuse. *rolls eyes*

    “I won’t need you to protect me, Aten! I can take care of myself! I’ll never need you!”
    *snorts* famous last words....

    “She’s going to be fine, Aten,” he said flatly before returning inside.
    Ohhhh even Marik knows what's coming...

    “I felt…..angry. I blacked out. I didn’t realize I did it. Forgive me, father.”
    Oooooo.... I wonder who he really wanted to hit; Yami Aten or himself?

    Okay I sort of feel sorry for Aria.... I feel worse for Umi though. *shrugs* Strange but true.

    The teen curled up on the couch and put his head on his father’s lap. Marik ran his fingers through Aten’s hair slowly.
    Awwwww, such a cute picture.

    “Ass-rammer Seto Kaiba"
    I still say this sounds like a wrester's name! *snickers*

    Eric cracked his knuckles. “That Morgan kid is mine! Mr. Know-It-All going to get a bullet in his brain if I have anything to say about it.”
    I hope Eric dies first. I'd like to see some Eric origami!

    Sheesh as if Seto hasn't been through enough...
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