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Reviews for Twelve Days

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2004
    "Five million years"? A millennium is one thousand years. [Egypt didn't even exist five million years ago.] If you go by the original manga/anime, then Yami's reign was three millennia, or three thousand years, ago. If you go by the dub, then it was five millennia, or five thousand years (which is before the time of the pharaohs, but, whatever).

    So you may want to change that "million" to "thousand." ;)
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on December 30, 2004
    Yay! They're together! Nice lemon, BTW...very romantic, and I love the game aspect of it. (When you see that in my lemon, I didn't copy you, I swear.) Anyway, thanks and I'm waiting with bated breath for the final chapter!
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  • From ANON - ken-z on December 30, 2004
    Hello I love you story even more so now ^.^
    I can't wait for tweleve (sp?)
    anyways I love your fanfics I look forward
    to your future fanfics after when this is done.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on December 30, 2004
    Ooh baby! Hot hot HOT lemon!!!!!!!! If that chapter was a duel monsters card, it would have been a 12-star monster; since it kicked complete ass!!! You're so gifted with words!
    I think I should apologize again for getting behind in reading again......I've had no time for ficcage since the kids are off of school for the week. I'm surprised the PS2 and the Xbox aren't smoking from over use.....*snicker*
    *points at Millennium Ring hanging on wall behind her desk* Cool, eh? Took me 3 months to make this thing.....We should go into business together making these things and auction them off on ebay. *silly grin*
    Thank you so much for staying up late to finish this chapter. It was primo-ficcage!! I'm looking forward to the final chapter, and I swear to Ra I won't let video games get in the way of reviewing again!
    *hugs*
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on December 30, 2004
    Aww, they're so kawaii. I should be off to bed, but I had to read the three chapters I missed -- I blame you if I fall asleep on my date later! And I haven't had a good date in a long time, so that just proves how addicting your stories are. Oooh, a story for me? I'd love that, let me think about it a bit. As always, tho, updating all your other stories (and this one!) is great by me. There were a lot of good lines in these chapters (9-11) but the one I saved was: "Sighing, he tapped into the Ring to track the Puzzle . . . which, of course, would be a great big ‘The Thief Is Following You’ sign to someone as sensitive to Shadow Magic as Yami was." I was crying, I was laughing so hard. Ja ne, luv you too, you're 27? I'm 25. Hokay, bye!
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  • From ANON - Deb on December 29, 2004
    Great chapter!!!!!
    I hope bakura and yami sort it all out soon! ^_^
    Poor Yams with hypothermia! -___-
    hope he gets better soon!
    Please update again soonies!
    Much Luv
    Debs xxx
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  • From ANON - Kittu_Paladin on December 29, 2004
    Seriously can't wait until an update
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on December 28, 2004
    oooh, you left us with a cliffie! That was HOT!! *fans self*
    Twently seven years is disturbing.......I'm the same age......*shivers*
    I don't think age matters to Bakura though, right? *grin*


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  • From ANON - LPGurl on December 27, 2004
    LPG:*sniff*
    YLPG: Oh please don't be such a baby.
    LPG: It soo sad for him to think that but i guess that would cross my mind too.
    YLPG:Say this is a really great story. When are you updating?
    LPG: Yes yes when are you updating? New year's almost here and you still haven't finished! Come on don't keep us waiting like this!
    YLPG: I guess that's a start at showing anger...
    LPG:... Anyway please update! I love it! and so does my yami!
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  • From ANON - ken-z on December 27, 2004
    NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!
    they were just so close Ra samn you for making yami do that.
    Well In any case it is good ^.^
    More yaoi for me please!
    hehehehe
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  • From ANON - Deb on December 27, 2004
    OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!
    update!!!!
    *falls down to knees begging*
    Whats gonna happen?????
    Damnit bakura wake up and tell him you love him!!!!
    Gaaahhhhhhh
    LOVE this huni!!!!
    Much Luv
    Debs xxx
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on December 27, 2004
    Hi, me again. That was a truly amazing chapter, and not just because of the lemon. (though that was excellent) No, what got me was the tone and the moon, exquisite. You are a vastly talented writer.
    I almost started to cry at the very end. Poor Yami...he thought it was just the tequila. And poor Bakura, when he has to convince the Pharaoh that it wasn't!
    Looking forward to the next three chapters...je ne!
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on December 26, 2004
    MEEEEEEPP! Err, sorry. Still haven't gone to bed. All right, awesome (two) chapters, I absoulutely adore this story as well. Like I said before, any story that has me as obsessed with a non-yami/hikari couple is tops in my book. That was a great line too: "Okay . . . that laugh simply had to go. It made him sound so girlish it was frightening." What are you doing, Drac?! I mean, I know Ryou is fem-ie but wow! Great line. Great story. Great writing. Great... erm, I'm going to sleep now. Ja ne, ashiteru, au revior.
    ~~,~LadyGrey~'~{@
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  • From ANON - Deb on December 24, 2004
    Aww such a nice chapter i could cry!
    Bakura and Ryou getting along, its sweet. *wipes a tear away*
    Cant wait for the party!
    Bakura and Yami will....hit it off....i hope...along with there being some obstacles beforehand obviously hehe
    Please update again soonies huni!!!
    And have a wonderful christmas!
    Much Luv and Huggles!
    Debs xxx
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  • From ANON - ken-z on December 24, 2004
    Hey don't tell me you really gonna darg it out to 12 days man taht'll be a painful story I mean they
    have gon through enoudh am I wrong but besides that can't you make them fall for eachotehr in chapter 9 and let them screw liek bunnies
    for the last 3 chapters........pwease
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