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Reviews for An Egyptian Love Story

By : AutumnRose

From ANON - tina on January 08, 2005
omg that was such a wonderfull story!!! i really want you to continue it and update soon. i cant wait to find out what happens next. there just arent enough past egyptian stories. you know with yami and seto as there past selves. it was truly wonderful and well written and had a surprisingly large vocabulary. pls continue!!!

~tina~
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From ANON - Serin on January 03, 2005
This story is awesome! I loves what you have so far. Keep it up! Oh, and justa wondering one thing. You said that you would email a piccy of Bakura to people who haven't seen one. Can I be one of those people? :smiles: I beleive my email is attaced, but if not, here it is. Just take out the spaces:

Ken Ken_Lover@ hotmail.com
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From ANON - PainfulRememberance on January 02, 2005
Update Update UPDATE!! Yugi and Atem lemon! Wonderful, I love it. I'm actually not a huge fan of Seth/Jono but I'll make an exception for your fic since its so great : ) so update please.
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From ANON - Joy on January 01, 2005
Great chapter!!! Please update soon, with the lemon Jono/Seth. PLEASE!!!!!! Oh by the way, you asked to the readers to tell you about any mistake that the story could have. So after reading for the second time the three chapters I found a error and only one on the second chapter. You could find this error on the last paragraph in the sentence � Atemu couldn't...between his friend *THE THE* youngest roma boy.� You are a great writer! Ja ne.
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From ANON - Juuni on January 01, 2005
Oh my god!!! Great chapter!!! Please update soon. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!
Ja ne.
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From ANON - Ashley on January 01, 2005
I really love this story, honestly.

But hear and fear, I've read ALL your stories (at least presented on mm.org) but NEVER got myself to review! (shame myself)
I finally got myself into doing so, and I am really glad to here say myself, that you are a GREAT author! Heard me right, Gotta love you and your stories ^^ keep on!
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on January 01, 2005
RD:hehe poor yugi dont you just hate it when ppl misjudge what they first see when they look at yugi and yes i did see the little situation between seto and mokuba coming hehe course jous gonna be in trouble if he messes with yugi again mister kitten can easily turn himself into a fierce siberian Tiger quite easily hehe Go yugi its your birthday were gonna party like it ya birthday hehe and pls make a atemu/yugi lemon soon pls i MUST SEE AN ATEMU/YUGI LEMON hehe sry dont mean to be loud but i love that pairing to no end now were was i oh yes * turn into her celestial form large blood red wings with a blood red silk shirt, blood red leather jacket,pants,blood red high heeled leather boots,and blood red leather fingerless gloves and an anger like a thousand mt st hellens and unleashes a fire comet at the persian lord and the slave traders til there burnt to a sinder*almost forgot one other reason for hating you two thats for actually thinking that seto would make A KID let alone is own brother a concupine PLEASE the mans bordering on obssesive with how protective he is of mokuba not that thats a bad thing mind ya yamis no better really well Autumn looking forward to an update soon JA NE and dont forget to keep up the great work and update ^___~
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From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2005
i enjoy ur story very much... i would be the last to complain about a lemon in the next chapter...please update asap!!
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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on January 01, 2005
Happy new year!!!*blows party favors and glomps you*

aaaawwwwww. this is so great! I cant wait to read more! And yes! of course we want a Seto and Jou lemon!!! they're like the next cutest pairing after yami/yugi!! ohhh and can i get that pic of Kurah (see i used kurah not bakura :hint hint:) in his ancient eygpt getup? i'm sure it's uber drool worthy just because it a picture of bakura. i'm sooooooo happy that you haven't decided to change bakura's personality too much. i mean, bakura just isn't bakura without a few homicidal/insane moments. not that it would matter. i'd love him either way. it's just that i happen to prefer the insane/ homicidal side of him a little bit more. *big evil grin* anyway, looking foward to your update. so until then, ja!
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From Yamima on December 31, 2004
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!
You put my stories to shame (snif) That's ok, I'm gonna read this again, and again again, and again and agian and again and again, and again, again, and agian ect

YUUGI AND ATEMU FOREVER! OXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXOOXOXOXOOXXOOXOXXOOOXOOXOXOXOOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXOOXXOXOOXOXOXOXOXOXOOOOOOOOOOXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXOOOOO!
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From ANON - Sushi on December 31, 2004
This is a good story. I can't wait to see what happens. Lemon's are always good, so I vote for one. =D
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From ANON - Gaia on December 31, 2004
GREAT!!! I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON, PLEASE!!! Ja ne.
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! ^________________________^
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on December 31, 2004
WOW!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!! Please update soon. Kurah can be the new name of Bakura and put the Seth/Jono lemon in the next chapter, Please!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!

Happy New Year!!! Ja ne.
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From ANON - Ree on December 31, 2004
Yay!!! Seto/jou fic!!!!!!^^

Ahem, now that that's out of my system, *looks hopefull* can you please write a seth/jono lemon for the next chapter?^^
And send me that pic of Bakura that you mentioned.

And the chapter wasn't boring! It was sweet.
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From ANON - Araki on December 31, 2004
The outfit? Well, when my father brought home one for my siblings, upon the outter wraping would always state "Garb" only, course, many have named it a 'kilt'. However, personally, when you say 'kilt', I'm thinking Irish....Bah, just garb though is most through the mideastern, upper africa outterware. From what I understand (doesn't listen in history).

Anyway, I'm enjoying this, and awaiting more chapters. ^__~
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