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Reviews for Yami's new Game

By : Yamima
  • From ANON - -_- on April 10, 2005
    weird story, kinda fast but it's okay
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  • From FlufftheMagicPharoh on February 18, 2005
    SICK! Well just sick, the ening seems rushed though, it was good in it's own sense...
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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on January 13, 2005
    Good One! Yami having a dark side!!! But I don't like to see Yugi hurt like this but was interesting to read it. Keep up the good work. Please post more stories. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - Yana on January 13, 2005
    awwwwwww damm
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  • From ANON - Yana on January 08, 2005
    hahahaha poor Yugi
    are they going to get together again
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  • From Yamima on December 31, 2004
    Haven't you ever seen a porn? It's the same thing, review anything else I wrote, they are good, except Sex, drugs, rocknroll, I was having a little fun with that story
    Seduction of Evil is an awsome story, try reading that one!
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  • From ANON - Kanki on December 31, 2004
    Dude. That was retarded. Seriously. It had little to no plot whatsoever, lacked so much detail, and the mistakes in grammar and spelling were atrocious and quite annoying after the third once.... ⌐_⌐

    Next time you decide to post something, make sure it's at least WORTH the effort.... y'know... Actually posting MORE than maybe 300 characters an update? That'd be a great start.

    If you aren't gunna do anything to improve yourself, quite writing; it'd be doing this site a favor.

    Ja. Much love,

    Kanki
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  • From Yamima on December 22, 2004
    Sorry, I was writing this while being rushed off the com so my bonehead sis could check her damn E-mail. but trust me, Seduction of Evil is a better story cuz I had time to wright it. As for my spelling same problem, and I had a plot but that bitch sis of mine threw me off my train of thought. It was written like a bad porno I admit it, but read my second story, you'll like it. trust me.
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  • From ANON - Bitch Of Darkness on December 21, 2004
    *blinks* er...what was that?
    Joey: It was called a fanfic
    Cloud Strife: yeah...
    Reno: Damn that was the..shit *holds up sign saying learn to write*
    Yami: Good Ra...Aibou!
    Yugi: *sniffs* I don't know if I should cry what Yami did to me or how this was wrote

    You really need to get a plot going it seems you just rushed this. I'm not flaming your skills I'm flaming the plot/
    WTF WAS THAT oO

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  • From ANON - MaggieMay on December 21, 2004
    Ummm....eeeep....where was Yami when his light was being hurt...and why didn't Yugi know it wasn't Yami? They know each other's soul. Good idea...just had a few questions
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