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Reviews for Affectionate Thoughts In A Disturbed Mind

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - angelkawaii on January 26, 2005
    Gomen I hadn't reviewed earlier but I hadn't been on in the longest time. I love it! Please update soon!!! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on January 24, 2005
    OMGoddess!!! You have to update this!!!! It is just too good!!! Please!! I can't wait to see how Kura handles Ryou's dad!! XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2005
    What can I say other than this is a complete masterpiece? It ties in the simplicity of humor with the complicatedness of a mind that wanders down a path of confusion caused the four letter word that give off so much intense yet intimacy, love. APHORDITE RULES ALL! MUAHAHAHAH! Hell, right now, I love this story because I can do all too much real life relating with it. I know exactly how Bakura feels, which is fact. Basically, I absolutely adore the story. I hope you update really soon.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on January 17, 2005
    Once again, this rocked! Bakura gets to meet dad now, eh? Yikes!
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on January 16, 2005
    You know, I think I'm liking this one more and more each chapter. Poor Bakura - he gets to meet Ryou's dad, and try not to send him to the Shadow Realm for terminal annoyance! Love it!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on January 16, 2005
    Nothing like the pov about love from one twisted, seriously messed up spirit!

    Doing good!
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  • From ANON - Ralphiere on January 14, 2005
    OMFG!! This is absolutely beautiful... I mean BEAUTIFUL!! You've captured brilliance and broke my heart. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on January 08, 2005
    Oh, look, it's working again. So, the rest of the reviewers get to read my ramblings too now. This is very good writing, Drac, and I get why you'd say it's hard. The format seems pretty hard, it's not narrative like most people are used to. Oh, and AAAAWWWWW.... 'Kura loves him. I'm not sure I've ever read such a good description of what it would take for 'Kura to do a complete 180 of his emotions towards Ryou, but you're capturing it wonderfully. Oh, heh, and "second-hand alcohol". Hee, that was cute. All right, ja ne, oh and to anyone who hasn't read her other story, Redemption, which is on her website, GO READ IT! Like I told her earlier, just cuz it's not yaoi doesn't mean you can't imagine the yami/hikari relationships "off camera" if you need to. Another great DracOnyx treasure. Okay, ja!
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on January 07, 2005
    Hello! Can I print this out and obesess over it when you finish it? I know it's hard to write (and I know what it's like to discover you're comfortable in the head of a psychopath) but it is excellent! I love how the actual physical act became a distant second to the emotions Bakura was going through. Wonderful work, some of your best!
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on January 07, 2005
    Holy shit, I'm at a loss for words. WOW is all I can think! Such turmoil in that yami's pretty lil' head! GREAT CHAPTER!!!

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  • From ANON - Shinshin on January 07, 2005
    Shit! Do you realise you've made old Shinigami cry?! I don't know how, but I was crying!!! Ahhhhhh, shiiiiit! But the story's cool, gimme more! And DON'T hurt poor Tomb Robber even more, or I'll have Malik on sugar high running amok after you! :)
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  • From ANON - AngelKawaii on January 06, 2005
    *gasp* Come on you gotta continue! I love how he thinks he's tainted his hikari! Its soo cool please continue! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - aspiker on January 05, 2005
    Wow... this was great. I especially love your descriptions of the conficting feelings of Bakura with being both visited by an angel and yet being damned by the same.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on January 05, 2005
    The second chapter is even better than the first! You certainly have a magical way with words.
    Very nice!
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on January 04, 2005
    Hello again. This is a really great beginning to what I know will be another great story. I'm really happy you're writing again, and as always I look forward to another chapter of anything you've got -- I'm off to your author's page to find out how I missed that other story you mentioned, and find your web page. Oh, and I'm supposed to tell you Lanie really likes this story too. I'm beginning to think she was related to 'Kura at some point... ah well. Ja ne!
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