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Reviews for Nazo no Kisu (Mysterious Kiss)

By : Naye025
  • From ANON - Horizont on January 14, 2005
    Hi there!

    Wow, I can't help it, I love how Yugi is so helpless about his feelings for Atemu! ^_^x

    A THIRD language? *lol* Which for god's sake, I can't think of a character of YGO that... hey wait! There's that guy from Germany... his name is written in some funny way I can't remember. :P Wagner's "Ritt der Valkyren" is his bg music whenever he plays a card... or sth like that.

    Okay, gotta go to bed now... tomorrow will be a qualify tournament for the german championships so I have to get up quite early. ^^x

    Thanks for updating!
    ~Horizont
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on January 14, 2005
    You should be commended. This is one of the few fics I've read were Jou is intuitive, intelligent and even wise. He's still Jou, but you've emphized the qualities in the character that most people downplay or ignore. Well done!
    In a funny way, you've done the same with Yugi- I always knew there was a cynical, hentai mind behind those big eyes. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2005
    Oooh, interesting, very interesting, never seen a Atemu/Yugi relationship like this. It's great, please update it again soon! ^.^ And hopefully There'll be more lemony goodness, is Atemu ever gonna fuck Yugi?
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  • From ANON - Horizont on January 10, 2005
    Since I've been reading all six chapters in a row I guess it's time for a review. I didn't read it for nothing after all.

    I love stories with ukes, that desire their semes physically but deny that and try to get away from them - w/o success.
    That is sth you write beautifully!

    But. And there's a big but, so beware! ^_^x

    Please decide which language you're going to use. It's nice to see that you know Japanese and even the original card names, but it's horrible to read a text that consists of two languages and is filled with translations. Your story would be so much better if you'd stick to English!
    One more thing: You got all the time you need and want to tell your story, don't get hasty! It seems to me that sometimes you try to get to some point extremely fast and the plot suffers from that.

    Well, last thing is personal, I can't stand Anzu and Yugi/Anzu is like one of the worst pairings I can think of... but again, that's just my personal liking. Get her out of the picture and I'd be sooo happy!

    To sum it up: I wouldn'd have read it all if it wasn't worth my time. But as an author I think that you can still improve yourself!

    Keep up the good work!
    ~Horizont

    PS: Hope you don't feel offended or so. This isn't supposed to be a flame! ^_^x
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  • From ANON - Camille on January 07, 2005
    Atemu is a horn dog! YEESH! Does he want a threesome with Yuugi and Anzu??

    You have to write a separate story with Ryo and Akeifa (I think that is how it spelled...is that really Bakura's name?? Yuck!). You can have Ryo smacking him upside the head everytime he says something vile...;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2005
    this is different and I love it.
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  • From ANON - kit on January 06, 2005
    Really good start. This story has really caught my attention.
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