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  • From ANON - Saelbu on March 02, 2005
    I found those chapters to be quite entertaining. Update soon. ^__^
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  • From Glue on March 01, 2005
    (waves) Hello! (grins) Me likes. Rather muchly. And Jou seems rather confused about if she likes Kaiba or not, ne?

    When I first read summary, I didn't expect it to be anything remotly to this.

    BTW, what day are we on? Still in the first two weeks? I'm confused time wise. Or did Yami case the spell so many times that its irreversible? That confused me a bit.

    I did enjoy the whole selling of the roses for 100 yen a piece.

    So...Kaiba likes both forms of Jou, correct? He just happens to like Girl-Jou a bit more. (guessing, since he didn't swoon over Guy-Jou.)

    Ner...is Jou's bike really -that- impressive? (I don't know anything about cars...I've only just learned how to use the back window defroster...)

    Hmm...(re-read a bit of chap 11.) Is that really Kaiba's intent with the snacks? (And does it actually work out for Jou as she says it does? Geesh. Lucky girl if so...)

    (grins, waves and glomps)
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 01, 2005
    Awesome, awesome, awesome! XD I'm lovin' it! This is like the best of this plot I've read yet. Totally great. Lol. And..

    "And all of a sudden, they heard a familiar voice shouting words, that made Yami’s hair stand up straight."

    Doesn't most of Yami's hair stand up straight anyway? 0o;;;
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  • From ANON - katsu kaijou on March 01, 2005
    this story has to be one of the best out there.
    the only ones better or by maggiemay.
    please keep writing on this.
    thanks
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  • From mistryl on February 25, 2005
    *roars in laughter* beautiful, absolutely marvelous. This had me near tears cause I was laughing so hard! More Bakura! He's hilarious but glad Kaiba finally got some and some more trouble!
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  • From ANON - chikky on February 24, 2005
    Poor Kaiba-kun. May I help that bulge by any chance?
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  • From ANON - mofaf1 on February 24, 2005
    now that the feelings have been discovered and/or confessed...what would happen if things were getting very hot and heavy and Jou suddenly changed back into a guy ... with all guy parts ... would Seto really care? would Jou?

    what of Bakura? will he be too busy ranting over losing Jou to notice when Yami casts the spell the spell next time and will Bakura be a pretty little princess of thieves trying to steal the hearts of the boys in the school....? (who knows...Yugi might find that Yami's heart can be stolen from him afterall by that little thief...hahaha...at least for a short while)


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  • From ANON - nicky on February 24, 2005
    Awwwww, I loved those two new chapters!
    The lime was soooooo yummy! (even though I'm still having a hard time imagining Jou with female body parts...)
    But especially since we now know that Jou really is attracted to Kaiba... I'm really eager to see him turn back into a guy again and what's gonna happen then.
    Anyway... the kissing scene was great and I liked the iddea of Kaiba looking forlorn... and I liked his confession. Soooooooo cute.

    There was just one thing I didn't really get... the principal said: "today I find you indulging in adultery?!"... Adultery means that someone cheats on his or her husband/wife, right? So, since neither Jou nor Kaiba cheated on anyone.... and none of them is married... that didn't really make sense to me.

    But still. I LOVE your story! I can't wait for the next update! (oh, thanks a lot for updating so eagerly btw.!)
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  • From Pussycat on February 23, 2005
    *cackles* Didn't I just review a chapter today???

    “I asked you here because I have a confession to make. Jounouchi Katsuya, I think I-I fell in love with you.”
    *lets out fangirl squeal*

    Revenge was in immediate reach and sweet indeed.
    *laughs evilly* Ooo this is gonna be good!

    "Apologize.“
    Kaiba inhaled sharply, then slowly, hesitantly, lowered himself to one knee.
    “On both knees” demanded Jou smugly.
    *laughs and applauds* Wait... school uniforms... Ano.. Jou?

    and then his eyes widened, when he realizied that his position gave him perfect sight on Jou’s silky panties.
    I KNEW IT!!! *falls over howling*

    “I-I-oh gods, Jounouchi, I’m sorry for everything I ever did to you, every bad thought I ever had about you, every negative feeling I harboured…”
    mou... why is it he's the only man who apologizes like this?! *fans self*

    “That’s exactly the problem, you think too much. Now get back here and finish the job you started.”
    *opens the windows to let the winter air in* Oh my...

    There were no excuses anyone would have bought anyway, not with Kaiba sporting a flourish, still-hard cock in his hand and Jounouchi clutching her naked right breast, fisting the brunet’s hair with her left hand.
    *curls up on the floor in hysterics* Oh my god... that picture! It totally cancels out the one from the previous chapter. YAAAAAAAAAAAAY no nightmares for me!


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  • From ANON - saelbu on February 23, 2005
    That was great!!! ^__~
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  • From Pussycat on February 23, 2005
    Nursing his cheek, Kaiba at least found his suspicions confirmed; Jou didn’t wear thongs on a daily base.
    *falls over laughing* What, he couldn't wait for an errant gust of wind?! This new Jou has really turned him into a total perv! I LOVE IT!

    “I hope you got a testament on that harddrive of yours aswell, ‘cause you’re not likely to see another day, moneybags.”
    *giggles* YEah, I'd kill him too over that picture!

    but Jou felt bad about the shoulder, besides, the CEO was in no condition to last that long without immediate medical attention.
    Awwww, puppy does have a soft spot for Kaiba. Just not the kind that Kaiba wants. *blinks innocently*

    “Oh bother, look who’s back from the asylum. What’s the matter Bakura, already killed all of your guards?”
    Beauty line! I love it!

    He stuck out his tongue and, giving Jou the ‘come hither’ look, mimicked a french kiss.
    *slaps hands over her eyes* Ew ew ew ew ew ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

    *peeks between fingers*
    Nobody could contain their laughter, when Bakura came to school the next morning, sporting tire marks on his face.
    *laughs*

    I must admit, the image of Bakura doing the ‘tongue dance’ freaked me out-and then I thought, hey, why not share the yuckiness?^^
    It's gonna give me nightmares! *shudders* ew ew ew ew ew
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  • From ANON - nicky on February 23, 2005
    yay, nice one!
    But I want more... this is not enough... *begs*
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  • From ANON - Saelbu on February 23, 2005
    That was hilarious!!! I loved it! Update again soon! ^__^
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  • From ANON - nicky on February 16, 2005
    "French kiss" is a drink as well?´Just to make sure I didn't miss any real french kissing here, hehe
    Anyway. I loooooved Kaiba's reaction.
    But I really, really really wanna know (BADLY) what's gonna happen between the him and Jou... c'mon... let's see!
    pretty please
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  • From ANON - mofaf1 on February 16, 2005
    wonder how Jou would react if she really was attacked by a couple of drunks who wanted to have their way with her...and Seto manages to come to her rescue because he was tailing her...or leaving the bar after a business meeting...that would be interesting

    of course Jou might think that it was a set-up to make Seto look good...unless Seto got really hurt bad...

    but that would be interesting to see her reaction (especially if her attackers were members of the gang she used to hang with before became Yugi's friend...and before she became a female)
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