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By : Fel5

From Pussycat on February 15, 2005
“Fine, you got a deal. Damn, you look like a bombshell but bargain like a man.”
Jou flashed her sharkiest grin, as she was handed part of her money.
*falls over laughing* Dude, you don't know the half of it! *cackles*

She would have paid serious money for being back at the gynecologist
Oh this can't be good....

Hell, she would have rathered the dog suit instead of this get-up.
Ohhhhhh this is baaaaad. *grins evilly* I'm gonna have fun, aren't I?

There could be no other explanation to this vision in a carnaval’s costume-Rio style-all lamé and glitter and-skin.
*falls over laughing* Oh yeah, this is fun!!!

And then her sight fell on the CEO.
*giggles* And it gets better!!

“Why, Kaiba-kun, am I correct in the assumption that your favourite drink is ‘Pussy Foot’? Or do you rather ‘Angel’s Tit?’
*shrieks in laughter, falls over and kicks feet* oh my god! I love it!!!

“I-I swear, for five seconds all was dead-dead silent, and then Kaiba goes like: Pu-Th-pu-‘French Kiss.’”
*stops laughing just long enough to gasp for air*

“They made me watch Kamikaze Jeanne, Wedding Peach and Sailormoon for three days straight. I think it only fit, that you shared my suffering, ne?”
Awwww poor 'Kura!

as the opening theme from ‘Digimon’ blasted through the living room.
*gasps* That's beyond cruel! *smirks* I like it!

But his insane yami had long fled the house and, cackling madly, made his way to one of his many secret hideouts, where he could continue his plot on claiming a certain blonde.
*laughs* This is really going to be fun!

And if you do try them, leave the car at home and take the cab or bus-better safe than sorry.
Yaaaay, good for you to post this disclaimer!

Real drinks huh? Ohhh, I can't wait to find a place that serves those.

Kat
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From Pussycat on February 15, 2005
They would never be able to look at Jounouchi the same way, especially the pharao.
Yeah, I hear nosebleeds can do that to a guy.... *smirks*

“Sheesh, virgins!”
*chokes on her rice* Ol' Pointy Hair too?! Whoa....

“Say, Jou, do you think Kaiba likes big boobs?”
Somehow I don't think he's after Jou because of this "understanding" smile....

Return of the maimed mochi, as the blonde spat it clear across the table, almost hitting the brunet in the face.
*laughs* Pity he missed....

She attempted to nudge some sense into her friend, even as this one struggled against the hold-and then both teens froze mid-move, when they realized the awkward position they were in.
*falls over laughing* Compromising much?

“Ja, what’cha say? Once more, for old times sake?”
Uhhhhh, grope fest? *blinks* This ought to be interesting.

To say he was furious would have been about the same as calling the K2 a mere hill.
*howls* Great analogy!!!!

“You mean..he was not trying to rape you?”
Apparently not, considering the face-faults.
*laughs* and the genius strikes again! Well, strikes out rather.

“I have to break this habit before it breaks me!”
*snickers* Poor Seto *cackles*

I'm so glad all of our blackboards hung on the walls.

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From ANON - mofaf on February 15, 2005
love this fic....soooo wanna see Seto be an impromptu hero and save Jou when he least expects it and most needs it....just to see Seto stop being a jerk and have Jou see Seto in a slightly different light (he ain't all bad...he just happens to be a jerk most of the time...lol)

anyway...the executive dinner party with Seto getting tongue tied was great.
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From ANON - Yami_joeys_dog on February 14, 2005
Fucking great story, funny as hell! I love it, update soon!
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From ANON - nicky on February 13, 2005
So, that means, neither Honda nor Jou really felt anything emotionallly, right?
Let's see what Jou would feel with Seto! Please, please, please!
He was so cute trying to save Jou... hehe
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From ANON - Chikky on February 12, 2005
OMG!!!! FUNNEY! Anyways... yes I loved this chapter and all of your other styories too. Please keep writing~!

~Chikky
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From Pussycat on February 07, 2005
“Damn, that was close! I swear, one more day with that woman and I would have gone nuts! "
*laughs* I can see him coming unglued about all of that.

“But Anzu-a gynecologist?!?”
Oh my god... you *are* evil! *snorks and begins to laugh*

“It would be so great, we could have slumber parties, coat our nails, gossip about the other girls, switch make-up...”
*falls over laughing hysterically* Evil, EVIL puppy! Beautiful move too!

tying the towel around her waist and opening the door.
Umm, around her waist? oooo this is gonna be fun *chuckles evilly*

Then Yugi’s eyes rolled back in his head and he fainted dead away.
First one's down for the count! *laughs*

The pharao’s eyes bulged, along with his pants, and then he joined his hikari on the floor.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand Pharaoh's down for the count. *rolls on floor laughing* Just added a whole new meaning to the term 'head rush'!

Kat
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From ANON - katus kaijou on February 07, 2005
this story is grrrreat.
it so funny and animeish.
love the kaiba/jou interaction. so many writers would have
jou already in love and in bed with kaiba. glad to see
that although jou is in a girls body it's still jou.
hope you do at least have them kiss or come close to it.
i hope you are thinking of a sequel.
thank.
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From ANON - nicky on February 05, 2005
I really like the way you bring along this whole Jou-turns-girl issue. I usually can't stand that subject, for most writers turn him into a girl completely, like... even his mind and thoughts... you don't. you keep him the same old Jou... and that's great. It's so much fun to read this. Keep going! Anyway, I really hope he won't end up as a girl (like forever, I mean)
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From ANON - Saelbu on February 02, 2005
This is so funny! LOL I especially loved Chpater 8, LOL. ^__^
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From ANON - Kathryn (who is too lazy to sign in) on February 02, 2005
Oh my god... when I asked who else besides Kaiba wanted Jou, I had no idea... BAKURA!? *falls over laughing* Ohhhh this is gonna be goooood!

“Out of all the women I have met in this era, you are the only one fit to become the queen of thieves, and I would be a fool, if I didn’t care for you accordingly.”
You know, a romantic King of Thieves is just kinda.... scary!

AND HONDA!?

“Ja, ain’t that just the cutest thing ever!” came Jounouchi’s voice from behind them.
Turning around, the three males blanched at the somewhat crazed grin on the blonde’s face.
*gulps* This can't be good...

“I-I’ve never seen such a fake, cheerful smile in my life!”(A/N: Check your mirror! ¬ ¬)
*falls over laughing*

“You mean to tell me you actually know what hit you? I did not even see that fist coming.” He drove his tongue over his teeth in order to check if he still had a complete set and added:
“Or the foot either.”
*laughs hysterically* I'm thinking he's beginning to like the pain...

“She’s-perfect! I’ll begin immediately with the wedding preparations!”

Kaiba balled his fist and ground Bakura’s head back into the pavement, rendering the thief unconcious for good.
*howls*

“Red roses, beautiful, romantic red roses! Come on guys, buy your koi a little present to win her heart over, just 100 Yen a piece!”
*applauds* I love that! Best idea ever!

Bakura all the time baring witness with a teary, downhearted expression on his face.
*snickers* awwww, poor *snorks* Bakura... *curls up in the fetal position and howls*

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From Pussycat on February 02, 2005
*pauses to listen to numerous thuds* Ah yes, the sound of males fainting when face with the truth of female "issues". *cackles* Bless you my dear!

*falls over laughing* Kaiba's got some weird-ass ideas on how to "romance" a girl! Someone needs to whisper three words to him: candy and flowers.

Love it.... wait. Who else has ideas??

Kat

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From ANON - satisfied_frog on February 02, 2005
More soon I hope. And hey, Jou's got the right Idea here..Let's trade cramps for eating without gaining!
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From ANON - Satanic Mechanic on February 01, 2005
I remember reading the first chapter...and then I kinda forgot about this fic. Then, low and behold! I had 6 chapters to read! They went by too fast for my liking. I enjoyed pms Jou muchly. More please!
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From ANON - akuchan on February 01, 2005
OMG that was just too funny. For a genius Kaiba sure can be stupid sometimes. Great chapter can't wait til the next.
Akuchan
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