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Reviews for You Have Always Belonged To Me

By : AutumnRose
  • From ANON - tk04 on September 09, 2012
    What......! What happen to the rest? It been a while since you update please don't end like this.... i wanT to know what happen? Please continue the story....
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  • From ANON - moonflower on July 13, 2006
    that was hot and seto nose he likes jou and joun likes seto keep up da good work and can't wait for the next one

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  • From Iyasu on July 08, 2006
    I love it! Update as soon as possible! I'm dying to see what happens!
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  • From ANON - Kireania on October 11, 2005
    I love your stories they are now all in my favs list on my home page so please add more i love this pairing. keep writing yay
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  • From ANON - Richard on August 03, 2005
    Hi Darknova!

    That was a great story! Now, I don't know anything about Yu-Gi-Oh, but I LOVED the Egyptian setting, and the risks associated with "Seth" and "Jono" being caught. And the encounter itself was very hot indeed. Also, that was a nice "twist" at the end - both guys having the same wet dreams...heh, heh. Overall, great first chapter - a great "base" to build on if you decide to do any more chapters...

    I can't really offer you much in the way of criticism...just maybe a few ideas you MIGHT have liked to have used IF you wanted to make this first chapter a lot longer:

    1) Maybe you could have made the beginning (Jono sneaking into the palace) more "suspensful" - like maybe he very nearly gets caught a few times, and only escapes detection by the skin of his teeth. And maybe you could have added a few funny moments in here too.

    2) The sex was excellent, though it could have been longer (but that's just me - I just usually write long sex scenes).

    3) Maybe "Seth" and "Jono" could have almost got caught out while they were actually having sex (another opportunity to add some humour and/or suspense ot the story).


    But yeah, like I said, you couldn't really do any of these things without greatly increasing the length of the first chapter. And there's not much point in doing that :-P

    So overall, GREAT WORK! I'll definitely read some more of your other stuff as well, now.


    Richard :-)
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  • From ANON - jou_belongs_to_seto on May 07, 2005
    i love this story please continue
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  • From ANON - seto4jou on April 30, 2005
    more plz...plz update soon.....^_^
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  • From ANON - Momochan on January 15, 2005
    Eeee! Yummy! Yummy! I really like where this story is going! Can't wait for te next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Kalena on January 14, 2005
    Im not a big Joey and Kaiba fan but this seems to have lots of potential. :)
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  • From ANON - DAISEY on January 13, 2005
    Excellent first chapter; please post more soon!
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  • From ANON - Kupo on January 12, 2005
    I like this story. You left us all like right at the begining. Update asap!
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  • From ANON - mistskeeper on January 12, 2005
    Wow I really liked your story so far! I love the part where Seto argues with himself ^_^ I hope you update soon I can't wait to read more and see what happens!!
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on January 12, 2005
    Wow....that was really good! Gotta love Seth x Jono...*hands Seth plushies*
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  • From ANON - take-chan on January 12, 2005
    Ohhh very interesting story so far, hurrah for smuttiness!! Also, the whole seto fighting-with-himself part was amusing... I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Misori Chan on January 11, 2005
    Oooo.... this story seems very interesting.

    I skipped the lemon 'cause I don't feel like reading one today. -_-;; Maybe another day when my parents are yelling their arses off at my brother. Pfft....

    But it's still a very good story. ^^;

    -Miso
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