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By : Yamima

From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on May 01, 2005
RD: i knew it either had to be seto and his gang or ryou and malik responsible for the shooting well lets show them what happens when then the guns on the other side *grabs an AR43 and other rapid firing guns and had them set up to blast the two of them fifteen thousand times then drives them even more insane by sending pure pain rippling through there bodies then leaves them to be burned to the ground by the fires of necromancy* there short and sweet now yamimi update soon if u dont mind and i hope yugi realizes yami is not cheating on him huh i would hate to have to smack him one for being so silly i dont want to hurt him well yamimi gtg now update soon and keep up the great work JA NE ^_^
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on May 01, 2005
Yami is OK!!! YAY!!! Please update soon. Ja ne
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From ANON - Angel Kawaii on May 01, 2005
*gasp* Very good story! I love all this angst and violence. *sigh* Please update soon! Ja ne! ^^v
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on April 30, 2005
That was really serious...but why did they decide to make that massacre? Please update soon. ja ne
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on April 30, 2005
RD: heh i have to agree with you on that account yamimi guns are evil and means of a cowards way out hmph reminds me of creeds song bullet and the part were he sings "look at me when you shoot a bullet through my head* basically saying if really want to kill me look me in the eyes and do it cuz if u notice not a single person who shoots somone ever looks them in the eyes cuz they cant deal with it they cant deal with fact that there hurting someone they know its wrong but they cant stop themselves and they feel it wont be half as bad if u dont look them in the eyes hmm now i get the suspicion that whoes ever firing those guns are none other then seto and his cronies or malik and ryou speaking of wich i owe them a beating for what they did to yugi *goes off grabs malik ryou and seto and his lil cronies chains them all to the walls and beats the living shit out of them then gives them fifty thousand lashings with her diamond coated iron whips then has there counter parts (for malik ryou and seto case and for setos cronies just regular folks) marik bakura and joey tomrent them physically emotionally and mentally then sends shockwaves of pure vile magic tearing after them ripping there minds to shreds then she restores them pain still there then leaves the room bolts it down and has a tempered diamond coated windo open then she grabs her remot control and presses a button has a sworm of scarabs killer bees and carnivorous locusts and fifteen thousand colonies of fire and bull ants come out and sworm over them leaving there bodies completely mutilated then thanks to her immortal crystals they come back to life body restored but pain still fresh then she presses another button that has the ceiling fall down on them has the walls close in on them till there completly crushed then retores them again pain still there then she presses another button and sends 50,000 watts of electrcity go down there systems till there brain fry then she restores them again with the pain still there then she presses another button and has time speed up for her but slow down for them so for the next three thousand yrs(its three thousand yrs for them but for me its only an hour in our time) has them physically and mentally torn apart anf iled with her malice and evil and all the hatred that exists for them from me to every single last reviewer and finally after she has there bodies put back into place though resembling dark elves now she fill the room with a concoction of one hundred percent raw acid and lava come pouring in melting there bodies into nothing then finally after restoring there bodies again she sends them to her necromantic lair she buries them alive in seperate graves then starts a spell that turns them into mindless slaves that are ordered to torture themselves and obey all the wishes yugi has for the rest of there immortally trapped lives* well that was fun hope u liked that torture session yamimi hehe id loooooooooooooooooooooooove to see bakura top that one hehe well gtg now pls keep up the great work and update soon pls gtg now JA NE ^__^
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on April 29, 2005
That was the most interesting thanksgiving I have it seen ^_^ ... Please continue writting. Ja ne
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on April 29, 2005
That was a great chapter. I can't wait to see the next one. Please update soon. Ja ne
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on April 29, 2005
RD: huh i guess some ppl never learn do they Yamimi oh and before i begin i must warn you all im extreamly pissed right now and when i get pissed i get very nasty so if you have sensitive stomachs to serious gore i reccomend you NOT read my review i repeat DO NOT read my review if you are sensitive to nasty gore action thank you *charges at ushio panic and seto rams them into the wall then chains them down beats the shit out of them breaking jaws and giving them plenty of scars and bruises then she pulls out twenty machine guns and fires them point blank into there mouths till there popping ouf of there ear and eyes and everywhere then she pumps them full of one hundred % raw acid then shove gasoline and vodka down there throats and drenches them in it then lights them up and watches them burst into mine atomic mushroom cloud form flames then goes after the entire Blue Eyes gang and tears every single last one of them to shreds dumps them into the warehouse she left there leader barracades the entrances and windows with 50k thick solid steal with a hard diamond coat and an inner cachime metal core to make it in penatrable then she presses a button to have vodka gasoline oil and every single super strong alcohol imaginable then lights a match tosses it in and watches as the entire thing gang warehouse and all gets totally abliterated* hmph that outa teach you you mother fucking cock sukin BASTARD touch yugi again and ill do much worse oh i haven even begun to punish you all for this you my fucking toy slaves GOT IT from this day forward i will teach you pain like youve never been taught before ill give a full thorough lesson in pain physical mental emotional verbal and spiritual ill have you all begging for death and even then i wont give it i may let you wrot for all i care your asses are mine GOT THAT NO ONE HURTS YUGI AND LIVES YOUR GOING TO SUFFER AND YOU WILL SUFFER FOR EONS and i wont rest until this whole planet is drenched in your disgusting blood only then will u die only THEN will i truly be satisfied huh well yamimi despite that first ryou and malik NOW the Blue Eyes and seto in general have pissed me off to no end its an good story and i will warn u guys again im angry i wont stop being angry at those jerks for a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong while well keep up the great work yamimi gtg now JA NE ^_^
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From ANON - Anon on April 28, 2005
You've really got to stop posting chapters that just consist of "coming soon". Not only is it fucking annoying, I'm pretty sure it's against the rules. If you've got nothing, don't post!
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From FlufftheMagicPharoh on April 23, 2005
Stop stopping your torchering me!
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From cocksickle on April 16, 2005
Holy shit. I have yet to read your story, but, I just had to review after reading the summary. Could you have put anymore cades up? Dear lord, it was amazing. I thought that maybe my story was kinda overboard (though it probably will be soon since, as I'm writting it, my friends are influencing my 'evil' side), but this is insane!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! XD

Can't wait to read!

Love, Peace and Chicken Grease!!!!!
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on April 16, 2005
What happen next? That was good. Please update soon. Ja ne
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on April 15, 2005
oh my god...what hapen next? will Yami know that Yugi suffer from that disease that you mention before? I hope he does and forgives Yugi...Please update soon. PLEASE!! Ja
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on March 21, 2005
Wow...Ani and Yami are crazy!!! I glad that Yugi and Yami are together. What happen next? Ryou did that and grandpa want to do something to Yami. I hope in the end Yami and Yugi be together...Please update soon Ja ne
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on March 21, 2005
Jou save Yugi for seeing that...I glad that Jou open Yugi's eyes...Pleae update soon. Don't forget the other stories. Ja ne
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