Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Dance on the Friday Night

By : SarahCosta
  • From ANON - Ayeshagirl on October 04, 2005
    Was this translated? I mean it would have been good but the english was wrong.... i spent the whole story noticing the bad english rather than enjoying the lemon! You need to get yourself a beta reader to correct your spelling and grammar.

    It was a good story... it just was badly written
    Report Review

  • From FlufftheMagicPharoh on April 23, 2005
    I'm such an id, I forgot to review this, It's soooo cute,
    Mim couldn't right anything this sweet with out a side
    of filth to go on the side. And I wonder what happened to
    oni, she never finished 'the Bet'.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Yamima on April 23, 2005
    Had to come back and read it again it's so sweet
    Report Review

  • From ANON - yami nefertira on March 31, 2005
    i like this, i like this, wow great ,well done.
    Report Review

  • From on January 15, 2005
    I'm with Gaia...Me Like It. Me Like It
    Report Review

  • From Yamima on January 15, 2005
    Sweet I love it!
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!