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Reviews for Closets and Car Crashs

By : nickylein
  • From ANON - anubiset on January 28, 2005
    That was a good ending. I would do a lemon, but I`m working on several fanfictions and am no where near done on most of them.

    anything you want to know just e-mail me and I`ll tell you all I can and probably can give you other sites that would help too. I have three e-mails to choose from. anubiset@sbcglobal.net, haglerlinda@sbcglobal.net, and anubiset@hotmail.com. Just go to any of them I check them on a daily basis except on Sunday, that is my day off and I just sit around writing down plot bunnies for stories. So you can get in contact with most days. I do have yahoo messenger, but I still suck at using it. Anyway, just e-mail me and I`ll help where I can.

    About the font thing on here, you might try notepad. I found that some of the text on the sites that I put stories on don`t do well unless it is in text. So notepad is the best for that.
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  • From mistryl on January 28, 2005
    Another great chapter and I think I'll take you up on your challenge. Right now I'm closing down on the other challenges I was doing. And my opinion on Mai? Well, don't say I didn't warn you.

    I absolutely despiese her character. Personally I think she's a selfish bitch always using her looks to get what she wants and
    only thinking of herself. And I think Joey's an idiot for always going after her. Her character is what gets me and I get so pissed off at the show with Joey being so frantic to get her back and trying to turn her 'good' again in the Doom arc. Anyways to sum it up I despeise the pairing and I will never be positive on Mai's character because I hate that too. That is why I write Yaoi. Because in my opinion Kaiba and Jou make a far better couple than anything else I've seen that they point at in the show. Now I'll stop ranting, I could go on for a while about couplings I can't stand.

    There you go, you got my opinion on the Jou/Mai couple. Well, you asked.

    Anyways, love the story and I'll try to get one for the challenge. Won't promise how soon cause my last one shot took me a
    month to write.
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  • From Reyn on January 28, 2005
    LoL. My imagination tends to run off when left at a cliffie. That's one of the reasons I hate them so much. Cuz then my brain goes into overload of all the possible scenarios and I go temporarily insane with ideas. But I like your ending. No long wait and a nice happy ending. ^_^

    If I had the time, I'd write for your challenge, but I'm piled down with my own stories. I still need to update my own YGO ficlet, and I'm in the middle of a Harry Potter fic, and my head is swimming with so many oneshots/short stories that I can't concentrate my time on anything! Gah!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 28, 2005
    my pleasure! ^^ ooh hte end was sweet. and yay the two get together!! and man everyone is an idot forjumping hte gun. in fct, lemme borromw hte mallet. time to knock some sense into those so called friends *chses hte cast around wiht the mallet*
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  • From ANON - Terry on January 27, 2005
    That is the cutest ending i've ever read! I love it! This is the sweetest Joey/Seto fic I've ever read! Please write more fics!
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  • From ANON - Horizont on January 27, 2005
    Moin!

    Die Sprache des Reviews ist mir absolut egal, solange die story (in meinem bewusstsein nicht viel mehr als ein Synonym für lemon) auf Englisch ist. ^^;; Wobei... ich schreib gern auf Englisch... -.-;;

    Die Idee mit der Challenge ist nicht schlecht (hab auch schon mal dran gedacht, so das Rating meiner Geschichten hochzusetzen... ^^;; ). Schade, dass der vierte Teil nicht länger war... du kannst so schöne Kuss-Szenen schreiben, also schreib viel davon! ^^x

    Ähm, du hast oben geschrieben, dass du Karten hast - aus reinem Interesse: Spielst du? Und wenn ja, Banned oder Traditional...? ^^;; sry, nur so ne Zwischenfrage.

    Ciao!
    ~Horizont
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  • From ANON - Loki on January 27, 2005
    Hiya! Sorry! I didn't realise the story'd been reposted and you hadn't got my email....oh well. Loved it anyway! And the beta offer is still open, if you haven't already accepted someone else yet, of course. But anyway, very good story. Seto and Joey...*glomps* Cute as can be! Well done.

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - Rachel Dracon on January 26, 2005
    Hey, that's really cool! (the story, not Seto being all angsty) Yay for Mai, doing good deeds! And poor Seto, being so insecure. Great story, can't wait for more, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 25, 2005
    most definately... tristen you giant dork!! *hits him with a mallet* i should kill you for ruining such a great moment between the two! and joey, you better go after kaiba if you know wht's good and healthy for you! *holds giant mallet threateningly* BTW i love this fic!! and personally, i =despise= Mai Valentine. my own reasons but you gotta hurry with the next chapter plz pretty plz with sugar on top!!
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  • From ANON - YamiRynEnjeru on January 25, 2005
    Aw...very good so far XD
    Can't wait for an update.
    Poor Kaiba...but he deserves to be the heartbroken reject for once ^^
    Well done.
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  • From ANON - Horizont on January 25, 2005
    Moin!

    *ROFL* Ähm, okay, da eh niemand andererleute Reviews liest schreib ich jetzt einfach mal auf deutsch... also auf Englisch ist mir die Geschichte lieber... klingt einfach schöner. *find* Deutsche Sachen les ich im Allgemeinen nur auf ausdrückliche Empfehlung hin und wenn eine hinreichende Menge Lemon drin is... :P

    Zu diesem Teil: Wow, wunderschön! *schmachend les obwohl's jugendfrei ist* Aber... SO KANNST DU SETO DOCH NICHT WEGLAUFEN LASSEN! Echt mal! *verzweifel* *kopfschüttel* *seto zurück schleif*

    Lemons... naja, ich kann meine eigenen an einer Hand abzählen... und die meisten sind nicht gerade aktuellen Datums. ^^;; Aber auf Englisch ist es imho leichter, geht mir zumindest im RPG so! ^^x (Schon mal im Unterricht mit jemandem ein Lemon geschrieben...? Immer mit der Drohung des Lehrers im Rücken, das von euch Geschriebene zu veröffentlichen, wenn er die Kladde in die Finger bekommt...)

    Also Lemon wär schön... *gewöhnlich eintöniger PWP-Leser sei*
    Ciao-ciao!
    ~Horizont

    Btw: Die Story ist auch vom Schreibstil her sehr gut gelungen! *sigh* Irgendwann kann ich das auch, bestimmt. ^^;;;;;
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  • From mistryl on January 25, 2005
    Another great chapter, but poor Kaiba, or maybe not. I don't much care if there's no lemon, I'll still regardless and don't feel too nervous about never haven written one. *blushes* I've written Yaoi for two years and Deal with a Devil was my first lemon ever.

    Anyways, thanks for reviewing my story. Nice to hear you were converted too. I won't express my opinions on the Joey/Mai couple.
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  • From Reyn on January 25, 2005
    YaY! I made you dance! ^_^

    Poor Kaiba, jest when he stopped feeling so timid, they had to be caught. So what's he going to do now? (Other than struggle not to cry, I mean) Is he ever going to show his face around Jou again? Will he even go to school? Will he continue to challenge Yugi to a duel every other day?

    Will he even bother to admit that he was serious about what he was doing? Or will he end up playing it off as some cruel joke, jest to save face? That sounds like something he would do...

    And what's Jou gonna do? Will he try to comfront Kaiba about it? Gasp!! Is he gonna go up to Kaiba to admit his feelings only to have Kaiba say it was all a joke?! Oh gawd! not the unecessary heartache!! wah!!!
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  • From ANON - Nomalaz on January 25, 2005
    ::whines:: Why did that have to happen?? (classic as it is) I hope they get together soon.
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  • From on January 24, 2005
    Just gets better and better...am waiting breathlessly
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