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Reviews for Sleepover

By : lemontree
  • From ANON - morty on August 27, 2005
    howdy. Me likey the story tis of much funnyness.

    lurve ya an leave ya
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  • From ANON - Cutn on August 09, 2005
    Hilarious. *amused* Nicely done. I love all your little conversations with your Hikari at the start and end of chapters *giggles*
    Very funny.
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  • From ANON - Patrick on February 27, 2005
    I absolutely loved the story, I mean loved it. So funny and witty, I can't wait to read Brotherly Love now, I hope you keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - nicky on February 23, 2005
    hehe.. I liked the sign!
    Nice ending^^
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  • From ANON - ToonMistress on February 22, 2005
    Waiii!!!! *prays to Ra* Please bring Loezzy back! PLEASE!!!!
    HM: Well now that it's over, she can stop reviewing.
    *glares* How long do you want to live?
    HM: ^^ As long as I can!
    Then keep quiet about my reviewing! I still love teh fic like I love you both! I wish it was longer. I'll miss Pegasus and his drunkeness.

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  • From ANON - Sol@ris on February 22, 2005
    Hey... already over??? ;__; ... that's really sad... sigh... I enjoyd this Fiction very much! ^^ Oh... but you kinda left an open end, didn't ya? So, maybe you will right a nother Party-Fiction... and, who knows... with which guests??? But I am looking forward to your SetoxMokuba Fiction... and, please, try to make the chapters a little bit longer? If you both may... that is... this is only a suggestion... nothing else! ^^
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  • From ANON - Sol@ris on February 22, 2005
    >.< this is the third and last time, I am trying to get my whole review up... if it doesen't work... don't blame me! Well, I love this story... but I'll miss it, when you two have finished it! So, here goes nothing! ^^
    O.O
    .... oookkkyyy ....
    either I have been almost asleep when I was reading your story ^^"""""""...
    ... or I am getting to old for this >.< (meening my blindness ^^""""""")
    ... but I really didn't see the option of reviewing your story... so I'm very sorry for bothering you with an e-mail from me! ^^""" Now then... I'll try another little review this way... hope you don't mind! ^^ The idea of a sleepover is very amusing, I think... what for multiple opportunities the chars have to do the strangest things is really great... and the game truth or dare is a perfekt start... and the punishment for not completing the dare or telling the truth is very interresting! ^^ I liked most of it the scene, where Seto had to lick Jou's face and act like a dog! That part was really good... but the bet the boys had going for if Yugi and Yami where a couple or not wasn't that bad either! ^^ Marik's stripp is good too. The Karaoke was a good idea ... and letting Seto sing the first song *grin* I would have loved to see that! ^^ ... the chapters with the magazines/mangas were really chaotic... strange... and funny! ^^ Especially where Jou reads the special manga that Seto has... The lemon scene was okay... but to short... I would have liked to read some more (and a bit more detailed ^^""")! ^^ And how Jou woke up Seto the next morning was interesting! ^^ I'm really looking forward to your next (and last... sigh...) chapter of you story! The only critisism that I have is: the chapters where way to short! A such funny and chaotic story could have been much longer! ^^
    ... that's it from me now... hope I didn't bother you to much with my e-mail and this review! ^^"""
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  • From ANON - Sol@ris on February 22, 2005
    okay... second try... first one didn't go all to good! >.
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  • From ANON - Domleo on February 22, 2005
    This story is very funny... I'll miss it when its all over!
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  • From ANON - Sol@ris on February 22, 2005
    O.O
    .... oookkkyyy ....
    either I have been almost asleep when I was reading your story ^^"""""""...
    ... or I am getting to old for this >.
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  • From ANON - ToonMistress on February 21, 2005
    OMG!!!! I feel so special!! I was added to Yami Loezzy's MSN list! *glee* I'm also on AIM, I'm on there more often due to my MSN loving to kill itself on me! *looks rabid*
    HM: Oh jeez. Now she's on a killing spree. *runs to go get chocolate*
    *look violent then reads the part with Pegasus and Marik looking for the naked little boys again* ..... *giggles* Oya oya Pegasus. You never cease to amaze me. Anyway. My AIM is cyta27 if you have it, you can grab me on there sometime. More Yaoi! More Pegasus!
    HM: *hands TM chocolate* I'd be happier if Harpy Lady, Mai, and Dark Magaician Girl were in the story. *avoids a glare from TM and holds up Gourry Gabriev from Slayers*
    O.O ...... *drops the chocolate and tackles Gourry before ripping his clothes off* WH00T!!!!! NAKED GOURRYNESS!!!!!
    HM: Ummm..... She'll be busy for quite some time. Maybe she'll be ready to read the next update.
    *loud moaning can be heard*
    HM: >.< Toon! I'm your boyfriend and you'd rather sleep with him?!
    You've had your chances. Ooh! Gourry! You've got some talent with those sword weilding hands!
    HM: *sighs* Well, I apologize for her.
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  • From ANON - nicky on February 21, 2005
    cuuuuute...
    Yeah... give us that last chapter! pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!
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  • From ANON - Katie on February 20, 2005
    BEST YORI STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!!! Juset out of the back of my mind what is it like in Holland? Have you ever been to America? Lots of stupid questions I know but I am Scottish and Swedish by name only and I nknow or think (looks around the room scratching back of head) that they are all around the same place . Let me know we might have a lot in common. Katie
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  • From ANON - anidark on February 20, 2005
    and again...i really liked it and think it's funny...(i really suck writing reviews gomen -_-')
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  • From ANON - roby-chan on February 20, 2005
    this is such a cool story ^^ I love all the chapters, I hope you will update soon =3
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