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By : ThEKiDDo
  • From ANON - ThE KiDDo on February 07, 2005
    It's okay, Rayne. I understand what you're saying and I love that you've taken the time to point that thing out to me, but I want you to understand that it was meant to short and to the point, it was more like those short stories you find in the mange where you don't see alot of action, emotions but you still get the whole point. That's what I was trying to create here, and the lack of the emotions... it was on propose because I wanted it to be as similar to your beloved Seto. I wanted to create that atmosphere he creates when he's around, you feel everything is detached and unreal because of his attitude.

    BUT since you wanted more action, I decided to write more chapters for this story... I mean, what the heck. Let's see how I can torture that ol' boy. And it's okay if it was a falme, I mean, I'll still kick your a$$ and beat the sh** out of you, but hey, I'll read them! I'm just KiDDing ^^;;
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  • From ANON - Rayne on February 06, 2005
    OK, before you read my review know that I am a huge Seto fan. BUT, I do love the idea of this fic, as I know Seto goes overboard with trying to defeat yugi. (In the manga he actually tried to kill yugi) As a Seto fan and a YGO fan, I thought it was good. The idea was great, but the fic itself was. . .well, boring. It just happened; no emotion, no action, nothing. Perhaps if there were more to it, such as what happens next, it wouldn't be so dull. Please don't assume that this is a flame because I never flame. I'm just calmly telling you what I thought. Sorry for rambling.
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  • From ANON - Felidae on February 04, 2005
    *Claps in applause*
    So I'm not the only one thinking Seto has one big, god-awful problem with becoming DuelMonsters champion, ne?
    Poor Mokuba, it was quiet easy to relate to his pain-oh and Yami Bakura was very, very sly-just like him to cause massive pain while making sure he'd get the lion's share...
    Good writing style, except for one typo; where the thief enters the office to bring Mokuba the present, you wrote 'Jounouchi' instead of 'Bakura'-but that's the only one I saw.
    Nice one-shot, and great potential for a story, perhaps a look from the various character's povs at what happened to Kaiba-or just leave it as it is, because it's good all by itself!^^

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