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Reviews for Poison

By : IrukaYuywell
  • From ANON - celestial angel on March 10, 2005
    That is one damn awesome sweet lemon! I love it!! I love it so much, your on my favorites list!! Great lemon! Are you going to cntinue it?!?!? PLEASE DO!!!
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  • From ANON - Karimaru on February 14, 2005
    a very good one at that lol anyways keep up the good work and i hope to see more Malik/Marik Stories! anyways gatta go ja mata.
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  • From ANON - BBQ_Bandit on February 14, 2005
    Spelling...check. Punctuation...check. All in all, good..for a first timer. ;-) A note for next time, though- the ending is a little abrupt. Yes, they came, but then what? Adding a scene of the 'afterglow' (even if it's just a kiss or a "You were good.") helps bring the fic to a sense of closure.
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  • From ANON - Tia on February 13, 2005
    Whoot!!! *Cheers!* Lisha's first lemon!!! *Giggles insanely* >_> And hopefully not the last...
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  • From ANON - Kari-chan on February 13, 2005
    That was good! heheh. I like that paring. You did a good job, but it felt jumpy in some parts. It was great overall...I am realy craving for some BDSM right now and you just helped meh some... n_n! Thankies~
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