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Reviews for Broken Darkness

By : Crystal56
  • From ANON - ecristy85 on May 22, 2005
    so yami has only one month??? man that sucks
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  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on May 22, 2005
    Oy! Very good chapter! I am LPGurl from MediaMiner.org You said the formatting was better over here so here I am... I can't wait for the next chapter! What's going to happen! Aww! Please update soon! Ja ne! ^^
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  • From ANON - EVilmiko21 on May 18, 2005
    UPDATE!!! Email me when you do!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cherazz on May 13, 2005
    Wow! I don't know why you think it sucks, I thought it was great! I'm so glad Kaiba and Yugi are working together:) They make such a good team:) It's always neat to read stories such as these...were Kaiba progresses from being a creepy jerk to an ally:) Hehe, more Yami and Yugi please though:P Great work!
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on May 12, 2005
    Well, the whole thing with Kaiba did seem a little rushed, but that's okay - I want to see what's going to happen!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 11, 2005
    why thank you, it was a little corny the way Seto spoke, but i think i like it more than him being a frigging bastard ^^
    Don;t make Anzu like Atemu or i'll hate you forever (dont make them kiss NONONONONONONONONONONOOOOOO!!!!!!!!)
    no more Atemu/Yuugi moments?? T_T
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on May 11, 2005
    RD: its not that bad a chapter actually cuz im just relieved that kaiba is finally dropping that whole i MUST defeat yugi no matter what just to get some stupid title huh come on kaiba havent you noticed yami never once cared about his title not at duelist kingdom not at the battle city tournament nor at the Grand Prix he didnt care he had more pressing matters to attend to then that such as getting his grandpa back at duelist kingdome saving the world from mariks dark side and stopping that german dude i forget his name in the grand prix from making a scheme out of what should be fun like duel monsters because since joey and yugi are so used to playing the game with high stakes on the line they forgot what its like to have FUN with the game cuz thats what it is its a game a complex challenging test that tests your knowledge of that game and challenges you to do and be better strive for higher achievment in it but still is and always will be a game nothing more or less huh i wish ppl like kaiba and that german dude would remember that there gaming companies there job isnt to just simply destroy each other no there job is to make games more exciting and more challenging thats all but luckly in your story Crystal kaiba was able to see that we can only hope he continues to see that later on and wish with all our heart and soul that the real seto kaiba got that message through his thick as iron head huh well keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^_^
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  • From ANON - huntershivers on May 11, 2005
    well well...
    little, nasty I'm not the highpriest and Yugi will work together... now I am surprised... and amused ^^ *chuckles evily*
    I love the way this story turns now *smiles brightly*
    And I hope it stays on that line cause to get yami and yugi together is mostly an easy thing, but to put a stubborn highpriest and a puppy together is always... amusing *sh just loves to laugh about that proud CEO*
    Hope to read your next chapter soooooooooooon ^^
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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on May 11, 2005
    Very good...Seto admited that he's a jerk and now he will help Yugi...I hope they get what they want...but what will happen next? Please update soon. Ja ne
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  • From ANON - huntershivers on April 28, 2005
    cooooooool! This chappie reminded me of my last sunday... amusement park with my best friend and her three little cousins at the age of 10...(they're triplets) especially at the rollercoaster I had the "colossus" (for the ones who know ist ;) ) in my mind. Not that I thought of the YGO Crew anyway when we startet to crawl up the largest Wood- Rollercoaster (actually I don't know if it is still the highest in the world, but it was)
    But I lose grip to the story... I really enjoyed reading about what I just had last week ^^ and I guess the both did too!
    And by the way... as we like to say in the last days... Yugi's got some self confident of a ... my dictionary doesn't have the word... damn it -_-... soup bag (just put the two words together... please don't kill me if it is not right)
    I'm looking forward to sunday ;)
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  • From ANON - darkness_of_angelic on April 27, 2005
    oh my god!!
    i love this story!!^^ nice work^^
    plz, update soon.

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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on April 25, 2005
    I hope that dream doesn't mean that Yami only has another month in the living world with Yugi; that would suck. I hope it means he has to do something (like admit his feelings) within a month or he will have to go back to the underworld.

    Anyway, great couple of chapters, and I'll look foreward to your update on Sunday!
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  • From ANON - Cherazz on April 24, 2005
    Wow! What a fun chapter! They had a blast at the park! And I'm so excited that they have their connection back! *squeals* Yugi said he loves Yami! *dances around happily* I can't wait until he really hears it:) That ending kind of creeped me out:( I hope nothing bad happens to poor Yugi:( Sniff, I can't wait til next Sunday! Hehe, I wanna know what happens now! Great work!
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  • From ANON - Yana on April 24, 2005
    Yugi tell him
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on April 24, 2005
    Worth the wait!! Great chapter!!!

    Ohhhhhh...time to guess!! WOOT!
    Okay..I'm guessing Yami was allowed to come back..but he and Yugi had to admit their feelings for each other before a month was out or he has to go back..and not having his memories when coming back makes it harder..^^..okay..that is my guess!

    I can't wait to find out how close I am!!
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