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Reviews for Broken Darkness

By : Crystal56
  • From ANON - huntershivers on April 14, 2005
    so... well... I kinda really liked that part very much ^^
    especially because we can see some of yamis thoughts as well *smiles*
    And I am thinking about whether or not teh "dream"-Yugi is totally out of Yamis thoughts or if ther is a little bit about the link, too!

    ARGH! I hope you understand what I mean... though I'm reading very much english by now, my writing sucks... last english lesson was at least 6 years ago -_- *glomps herself to a little ball ans sobbs quietly*
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  • From ANON - YaoiPimp on April 10, 2005
    Sorry I'm revieing sooo uber much! I'm just now reading it and I'm putting things as I go along. And now for mai review:
    WHYYYYYYYY? I heart Seto soooo very uber much! that is all.
    FANCY
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  • From ANON - YaoiPimp on April 10, 2005
    Ahhhh......Yami reminds me of Chi from Chobits! That's so cute!
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  • From ANON - Cherazz on April 10, 2005
    Awww! I love this chapter the most! The much anticipated lemon, hehe, even though it wasn't real, it was still nice *evil grin* That was pretty damn good for your first Yu-gi-oh lemon;) I'm so glad Yami has almost all of his memories...to be honest, I thought the pace was going a little too slow...I'm very anxious for their relationship to begin:P Great work!
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on April 08, 2005
    Great job!!!..^^
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  • From ANON - Cherazz on March 30, 2005
    Awww! That little kiss at the end was so kawaii! I really enjoyed this chapter! I'm so glad everyone now knows that Yami is back and understands why Yugi kept it from them;) Great work and update soon;)
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  • From ANON - StormyHaven on March 30, 2005
    Good story!! I like that Mokie knows that Seto has a crush on Jou. LOL Please post another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on March 30, 2005
    YAY! Happy to see an update!! ^__^ So was Yami awake enough to know Yugi kissed him??!! ^^ I can't wait to find out!! Great job!
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on March 30, 2005
    MORE!!!!!!! Great chapter, although i would have liked to see a little more with Yami's reactions to everyone. No worries though, I still enjoyed reading it!

    DracOnyx
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  • From ANON - Cherazz on March 25, 2005
    I panicked when I couldn't find this in my fanfiction folder! My pc has been eating some of my favorites lately:( Luckily, I was able to find it again:D *cheers are heard* Yay! There was some Yami and Yugi interaction in this one! And Yami didn't have to go to sleep! I'm very psyched for the smut, or even just a little citrus! And I'm very excited for the gang to see him, haha! That should be good;) Great work!
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  • From ANON - luvingYAMI on March 24, 2005
    gods I love this story. Yami is so, so sweet and he seems so...helpless at times. I am WAY thrilled and anticipating the moment they realize that they feel the same for each other!! They just have to be together! I can't wait for the next chappie. YAY!!

    Oh, THANK YOU for being so consistent with updating. I truly appreciate it. If authors only fully realized just how many more people would completely read their fics if only they updated regularly, there wouldn't be so many wonderful, but abandoned fics. It' so sad!!

    Thank you again!!
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  • From ANON - yami nefertira on March 23, 2005
    this is good, i like the idea, please update soon, i hope yami and yugi end up alright in the end, well done and keep going ^_^
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  • From Yamima on March 20, 2005
    Yes yes good good, what happens next?
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  • From ANON - Yana on March 20, 2005
    i love that chapter
    they are so cute together
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on March 19, 2005
    Sweet chapter!!!! Yugi just needs to kiss him and get it over with!! *L*..preferably before Anzu starts throwing herself all over Yami!!! Update soon!!
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