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Reviews for Broken Darkness

By : Crystal56
  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on June 08, 2005
    Oh my gods!! Yes!! I wanted Yami to get pregnant it came through! I don't think I put that on my review though...Ah well I'll be waiting for the next sequel and I just cannot wait to see what you have planned! Oh Ra!! lmao I'll see ya then! Ja ne! ^^
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  • From ANON - Zoe on June 08, 2005
    OMG! XDXDXD That was great...poor Yami...and I just got done reading a story where -Yugi- had gotten pregnant. o__o; Can't wait to read what it is/how it happens! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Tal on June 08, 2005
    Hi
    Good ending ^^ I always looked foreward to reading this, Keep on writing. And I vote for number 2 This story was good and all, but I would much rather read Kaiba's and Jou's story then a sequel to this one, a KaibaxJou sotry and a nice epilogy would be good. ^_^" well that is my vote. So 2 for me.
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  • From ANON - K on June 07, 2005
    Thankyou for a wonderful story. I was dreading, at some points, that it was going to have a sad ending, & so glad it didn't. I love the way you write. BTW, in response to ecristy85, on the subject of guys having babies, I was unsure of how the baby could be born, also. However, I read one story a while back, where Inuyasha got preg, & when the baby was due, he turned demon, ripped the baby out with his claws, & it went flying through the air!!!!!! Can't imagine Yugi or Atemu doing anything quite like THAT, though!
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  • From ANON - Kizutsuita on June 07, 2005
    Start the sequel on a separate story and put up and epilogue here ^^
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  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on June 07, 2005
    2!! I want #2! It's a lot better If I say so myself. I enjoyed this story so much! I can't wait to see what you have planned for Seto and Jou! I'll be waiting for the last chapter of this and the next story!! Ja ne!! ^____________________________^
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on June 06, 2005
    It sould be a separate story. Too many chapters in one story can be hard to plow through. It would also give those of us who can't stop reading something 'til the we come to the end a stopping point so we can get to bed ;-). BTW, thanks for giving Atemu his Egyptian body; I think he's at his sexiest with tanned skin and khol highlighting his eyes.
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on June 06, 2005
    For the record, I vote that you start a new story for the sequel.

    Interesting conditions for Atem's return to life - I thought the first might be it, but I wasn't expecting the other 2. At least she let Yami and Yugi get away with a techinicalitly....

    Thanks for all the hard work on the story, and I'll be looking forward to the sequel!
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  • From ANON - ecristy85 on June 06, 2005
    number 2!!!!!!!!!

    ....

    MPREG... uggghh.... @_@ (not that i'm against it, but i don't see where the poor baby would come out) well, no, i have an idea but still...

    i really liked this fic, and i think that time witch was a real pain in the *ss. >_
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  • From on June 06, 2005
    sequel in another story!!!
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon oF Egypt on June 06, 2005
    RD: just do a sequel seperate from this one if u will like how Dragondreamer and Yamidragon did for there stories or how any author to a story does sequels gtg now keep u the great work and UPDATE SOON pls ^_^ hehe gtg now JA NE
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  • From on June 06, 2005
    whoah! this is a stunning turn of events!!! way cool!!!

    MR
    (oh and it is NOT MR as in Mr Soandso because im a girl, it's MR for mysteryreaper!)
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  • From on June 06, 2005
    cool idea, draws the reader in, i already want to read more!!!
    keep writing!!!

    MR
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  • From ANON - Lady Phoenix99 on June 06, 2005
    I just had to come over again and see what was left out lol... I worte my main review on ff.net but I will say again I was really inmpressed with your work as an author and look forward to the next part. I won't vote second time out of fairness, but I will most definitely be waiting for the sequel...
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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on June 06, 2005
    Wow...I love it. Yami make a deal with Kana interesting... Who will carry the child? I hope is Yugi and not Yami. It seems more right that Yugi carry the child and not Yami. Make a epiloge to this story and make the sequel separate please. Ja ne
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