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Reviews for Brotherly LOVE

By : lemontree
  • From ANON - Naomi Naejire on July 12, 2005
    OMFG! >
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  • From ANON - Sol@ris on May 29, 2005
    This chapter was interesting ... the two of them watching a movie and Mokuba turning to his brother when it got scary. And then the chocolate that Mokuba offered to Seto ... mmm ... that was yummie! ^^
    I was a little surprised about Mokubas question at the end, that he wanted to sleep in the bed of his brother ... but Seto kept cool (for now ^^).
    The next chapter could get very interesting ... I'm already looking forward to it! ^^
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  • From ANON - Patrick Outman on May 21, 2005
    Great chapter, it really impressed me. You have a lot of potential in my opinion, and if you just keep working at it, you could blow us all way. Keep up the wonderful work
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  • From ANON - emi on April 30, 2005
    wonderful story can't wait to see more of it.. update soon
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  • From ANON - Patrick on April 21, 2005
    Hey. Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile. Great chapter, it really got me. I hope you do play more into the Evan angle, something like blackmail or the such, it would really add a whole new dimension to the story. Wonderful work as always, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Sol@ris on April 16, 2005
    mmm... interresting Chapter. Alltough not what I thought would come next. XD
    And it seems to get more mysterious... @_@ ... Mokuba got a Millennium Item? Oh Gods... why do I get a bad feeling about that???
    Well, I'm glad you are continueing the story. And I am already really curious about how the story will continue. ^^
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  • From ANON - Sol@ris on April 03, 2005
    That was a good way to get them to confess to each other... alltough I would have enjoyed it, if Seto hadn't remenbered so quickly why he had fainted... that would have been interresting. ^^

    But the way Seto interrupted Mokuba, when he tried to explain the song, was really good. And the kiss that followed... aww... could you make it a little bit more detailed next time? Please? I liked the idea, though. ^^ Because first, Seto sounded as if he wasn't very happy about the song... but it ended in a kiss... great!

    ... mmm... I'm not so sure, if the chapter was longer than the previous where... you could still make them a bit longer, I think. I really do enjoy your writing! ^^

    And I almost can't wait for the next chapter... and what happens next! So, please update soon, oky? ^^
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  • From ANON - Dark Mistress on March 28, 2005
    you must write more. I am soo glad they confessed though
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  • From ANON - ToonMistress on March 27, 2005
    *glee* Seto and Mokey!
    Augustin: *glares at Toon Mistress* I can't believe you! I'm Seto's true love!
    You're a paranoid vampire that crys at every chance.
    Augustin: *whimpers and starts crying*
    See? Anyway! I loved it! I agree with Seto on the lemon. Only because I want to see Mokey all hot and bothered. *grins*
    Fiend Overlord: Pedophile.
    Harpie Master: *nods in agreement*
    It's not pedophilia until I'm 18! And Mokuba wouldn't object!
    You must continue!
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  • From ANON - NanashiRa on March 25, 2005
    That was so gr8...i wonder how mokuba will react when he realizes that seto heard him...^^...and i'm glad that you love GW...^^
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  • From ANON - nightland on March 20, 2005
    Would you please please continue?
    I'd like to know how Mokuba will react now.
    They are so cute...
    *admiresthemwhilewaitingforthenextchapter*

    CU nightland
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  • From ANON - lemonlemonlemon on March 20, 2005
    :YOu. Suck. TH:e sex is nice so you can just skip to it and have them spend a very long chapter together.... The song was kinda funky though ( i really shouldn't say anything since i wouldn't have done any better) But anyway make it more *INTENSE* Lots of moaning and kissing and ...... yesss *pants* uke mokuba.... yummm!
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  • From ANON - Sol@ris on March 12, 2005
    So, you finally got enough reviews to update, great! ^^
    The chap is neat... Mokuba singing a love song about Seto, and him listenig to it... and then collapsing. I would love to see that... *grins*
    BUT... the chapter was WAY to short this time! Really, you should write longer ones!
    Until now, though, I like the way the story is going. Hope, you get your reviews soon so you update again! ^^

    cya, Sol@ris
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 12, 2005
    lklkl;'k
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  • From ANON - anonymous on March 11, 2005
    Just update, dammit! It's a pain in the ass when authors obviously have a fic ready but won't upload the chaps because they want more reviews.
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