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Reviews for Blackwater Indiscretions

By : zehlyah
  • From ANON - Sarahmad13 on November 03, 2005
    Pretty please with a cherry on top will you update this soon. I have become a addicted to it. I love the how you developed each relationship by how the charectors interacts out side the partnership. It is a very interesting concept. Plus all the 'test' are freaking hot. I really want to read more.
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  • From ANON - Lady Laran on November 03, 2005
    I'm so happy to see that one couple managed to overcome the weekend! Hopefully, Marik and Malik will be able to patch things up. Really glad you updated this story. I've been enjoying it a lot and can't wait to see what more you'll come up with!
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  • From Elynia on November 03, 2005
    I love this story, it is really good. Keep up the excellent work! :)
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  • From ANON - ralphiere on November 03, 2005
    Baby, this was good! Not up to snuff? FEH!! You're doing a marvelous job messing with these guys, each chapter is unique and brings out a lot of character!

    Keep it up!! WOO HOO!!
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  • From ANON - Terry on November 03, 2005
    Oh thank you for reappearing. Great chapter, I 'm glad Ryou finally got a hit in. Keep updating!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2005
    Yay more updates!
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  • From ANON - Nancy on November 03, 2005
    Im so glad your still working on your stories, they are both great! it was weird to read a chapter with bakura that was so fluffy, but it was a nice break. Thanks for updating! Oh, there are a few typos so you may want to go over it again if you have time :P
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  • From ANON - Wicabeth on November 03, 2005
    I was missing this! I liked this chapter.. I'd write more, but my brain is mushy because of the flu..
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on October 24, 2005
    I've told you before how much i love this. Please update, don't leave us waiting much longer *smile*
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  • From ANON - Amethyst-eyed Koneko on September 13, 2005
    Oh boy. This was the chapter I was kinda dreading the most - the Bakura x Yugi pairing. Gods, Bakura is a FREAK!! :D Fisting little Yugi like that - uh ouch! Thank goodness there wasn't any more blood-letting going on. Whew! Squicky for sure! Update ASAP!! I'm dying to know who comes out on top - no pun intended!! ^_~
    Koneko
    P.S. I was surprised in the Yami x Malik pairing that Yami let Malik take him. It's weird but I never imagined Yami as being submissive like that. L8r!
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  • From ANON - Bloodbabe2003 on September 12, 2005
    o.0 wow, another great chapter. I'll cast my vote in with Bakura ^^o Keep writing.....please?
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  • From ANON - S. Chensu (of S. Chensu and Luff from the ff.net realm) on September 04, 2005
    Woah...that was...intense. Yes, that is the right word to use...

    It's nice to see this story update though, even if it was to make me very scared...I hope Malik's ok...but it was sorta cool that Marik mentioned Yugi coz they're always mean and nasty about him. I hope there's some more development between them though but not before you write about Ryou/Bakura and Yugi/Yami. I wonder what's going to happen with them...? Mind you, it's kinda obvious...

    Oh well, I hope you continue writing and hopefully I'll get to read another chapter soon.

    S. Chensu xxx.

    P.S. sorry about this being short, I've been at work today and have not been sleeping a lot lately. Plus the whole chapter did freak me out a bit.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2005
    That was a weird chapter on Marik and Malik. Is Marik going to go back to normal after this whole competition thing is over?
    Next chapter is Ryou and Bakura, right? Perhaps you should put some angst in there... or humor. It would be funny if Ryou locked himself up in the bathroom and refused to come out and have sex with Bakura.
    So, after this whole competition, will the story still be going on? I mean, is it going to turn into a whole story, with this just the starting point, or will it just finish after you've tied off all the loose strings?
    Please let me know!
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  • From ANON - Lady Gray on September 02, 2005
    Hot hot hot, that was awesome, you write the interactions so well. I can hardly wait for the update. AWESOME!
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  • From ANON - ralphiere on September 02, 2005
    Baby, you're the most amazing thing out there!

    That was an incredible chapter, but man, you are such a fucking tease!! I can't wait to see what else happens! You've painted them both so perfectly.

    I bow to you!

    ~Su
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