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Reviews for Blackwater Indiscretions

By : zehlyah
  • From ANON - Marik_Ishtar on July 20, 2005
    This has GOT to be one of THE best Ra damn fic's I have ever had the pleasure of reading! You kick some major ass!
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  • From ANON - Soul to Avenge on July 19, 2005
    wow, this was an interesting chapter. but i liked it. very different and cool in its own way just like the other chapters. please come out with a new one soon
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  • From ANON - sglily on July 19, 2005
    There are no words to describe how hot Hot HOT this story is! Keep up the good work! Looking forward to the outcome... it will be very interesting what the 'lights' have to say about their little experiment...
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  • From ANON - Yami Yugi on July 19, 2005
    Yugi's been sitting on an ice pack all day. Bakura is a dead man!

    Bakura: No, shit...

    Grrr... just you wait til I get my hands on you, tomb robber!

    Bakura: Bring it own, chicken legs!

    Is this 90??? *evil grin*


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  • From ANON - Bakura on July 19, 2005
    Me again, I just wanted to remind you that I AM GOD.
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  • From ANON - Ryou Bakura on July 19, 2005
    Um... I love you? Please hurry up and update?
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  • From ANON - Malik Ishtar on July 19, 2005
    Hurry up and update so I can get my rocks off, woman!
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  • From ANON - Yugi Motou on July 19, 2005
    You hate me, don't you? My ass will never be the same after that! I'm not complaining though...
    What's this about 'Pricks'??? *giggle*
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  • From ANON - Bakura on July 19, 2005
    I fucking rule. *wink* The pissen Pharaoh has nothing on me now, does he! HAHA!
    Oh yes, I agree with that fiend Marik...UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Marik on July 19, 2005
    Update fast and I'll let you fondle my rod. Come on, honey, you know you want to! *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on July 19, 2005
    OOk that was pretty hot although I'll admit I winced but in a way I can see Bakuras point and Yugi enjoyed himself. I'm sorry I didn't get squicked by that chappie but my vote still goes out for Marik! Marik all the way!!!
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  • From ANON - Naria on July 19, 2005
    P.S.

    More hurt and comfort and consolation and EEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! *brain implodes* OW!!

    =_= I hate it when that happens...

    Okay, I just wanted you to know that I love how you've written Bakura as a hard bastard, but then he's really a loving and gentle master...SO GOOD! I almost cried WITH Malik after his trying endeavor! It was soooo FLUFFY in a sadomasochistic way, which, by God, is the best way there is! Fluffy bondage...that sounds so wrong, but you write it so hot! "It's okay to cry." *sniffle*sniffle* I want a master like that! I'm a sucker for hurt and comfort, and, my friend, you've written the best so far! I can't WAIT for the rest! Still voting for all three yamis! Arrogant bastards!
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  • From ANON - Naria on July 19, 2005
    Know what, Bakura isnt half as evil as you!! >o< But, I mean that in a good way! ^_^ Erm...I really, REALLY like this story. It's given me some....inspiration, to which my boyfriend has benefitted! AW GOD! THIS KICKS ASS!! I know what should happen! After the contest is over, they should have a mass orgy amongst the yamis so they can form THEIR opinions! YEAH!! MORE YUMMY SEX!! I have to say, I'm voting for all three at this point, even though I am a Yami hater! Sorry, I normally hate his badly dubbed guts, but you've made me actually LIKE him!! But of course I'm a pervy Marik and Bakura fancier...But man, these guys sure know how to treat a hikari! They're all so fabulously written that I forgot they weren't real! I wish I was one of the boys...but I'm not! *tear* But, I'd be deathly afraid of Bakura...He was so scary! I'm a sadist, not a masochist, but I sure as hell would have loved to have seen his romp with Malik for REALS! *drool*drool*pant* But, you have to update soon just becasue I wrote you an obscenely long and rabid worshipping fangirl-esque review....because that's what you've made me...A rabid fangirl of your creative and tasty writing! YAY!! Good times, you evil EVIL person you! But evil CAN be good! WOOT!!
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  • From ANON - S. Chensu (of S. Chensu and Luff from the ff.net realm) on July 19, 2005
    I was recommended this story because I've been looking for something like this for a while now and...well...wow. I was thinking of spending this whole review screaming my head off but that may not be a good idea, although I did feel like screaming a couple of times...

    Well, where to start... I suppose I should first of all say that so far, I am really liking the development that's going on here. With the characters I mean. For the moment I am going to reserve judgement on who should "win" in my opinion until I've read the Yami and Malik chapter (I think it's those two left isn't it?) but I wonder what could happen when they all stay with their boyfriends...it would be really great if they took the lessons they had learnt and tried something different. Like Yami not being so gentle with Yugi etc etc, blah blah blah. But it isn't up to me, it's up to you!

    I think the best scenes so far have to be the ones with Ryou because he's my favourite character anyway and it's quite different to what he's used to I think. But what's going to happen afterwards I wonder...will they just return to normal or will this affect them? Someone said something about wanting to be with someone else so maybe that's something I should keep in mind for the future...

    But anyway, I'm talking a load of rubbish now so I'll be going. But I'm pretty sure I'll be back for the next chapter!

    S. Chensu xxx.
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  • From Wicabeth on July 19, 2005
    *... pants.... * That..... was incrediblely hot and kinky o.o;;;;;

    *squirms around in her chair* I'm so torn now on who to vote for.
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