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Reviews for Unbreak My Heart

By : LadyLaran
  • From DracOnyx on March 31, 2005
    Would I do that? *pauses for a moment to look back at Bakura* Yeah, I would, wouldn't I? *grins* MORE! Don't make me crack that whip, oh Mistress of Rabid Wombats!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on March 18, 2005
    *snickers* Ryou was right! Bakura's bored alright! Since he just stole something from the gods! Bet Ryou didn't SEE that one coming! *muses* So what'll happen now? And pls bring the yamis back! Since their hikaris and friends miss them!
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on March 17, 2005
    So much for Paradise, ne? I wonder if Osiris and the other Gods are going to kick Yami and co out of the afterlife just so that they can have a break! Boredom+Bakura+Marik+Yami=trouble in paradise. :)
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on March 17, 2005
    YOU BET YOU'RE BEING HOUNDED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER, DAMN IT!!!!!!!!!!

    *sigh* although, i suppose this is payback for all the evil cliffies I leave you people with. I always knew my evilness would bite me in the ass one of these days. I REALLY loved the scene with Bakura, and as I said, you're more than welcome to the name.

    *glomphs and huggles, making sure she stays away from the wombat cage*

    DracOnyx
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  • From ANON - aspiker on March 17, 2005
    I'm enjoying your story. The character development, writing and plotting are excellent. The beta'ing is pretty good too. ;-)
    Definately looking forward to the next chapter... 8-)
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  • From ANON - anubiset on March 17, 2005
    I like this. I read one similiar to it some where, but this is definately different. I love what Duke said. That should hold true even without the circumstances.
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  • From zehlyah on March 04, 2005
    Can't wait to see where this leads. Please do continue
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on March 02, 2005
    Oh, wow. That was amazing. I was wondering which of them would snap first - I suppose I'm not surprised that it's Yugi. He had the closest relationship with his yami, after all.

    Excellent chapter - please continue!
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on March 01, 2005
    wonderful hun. what you added really finished off the chapter nicely, and I'm glad I could be of help! keep up the great work!

    DracOnyx
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on March 01, 2005
    Awww! *cuddles Yugi* Poor Yugi. Poor all of them, but it might not be wise to leave Yugi alone. This was just as emotional as the first two, IMHO, but in a different way. I enjoyed it - sitting here with my tissues. This is a real tear-jerker you have going!

    Please continue, and thanks for the chapter!
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  • From ANON - Rubi on February 28, 2005
    Awesome story...it has everything...glory, tragedy..and a well dressed guy running the show with a cell phone call.. I Love it~!

    I AM HOOKED!

    Rubi-san and crew.
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on February 27, 2005
    This is an incredible story and you're only on the second chapter! Thanks so much for updating so fast - I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From DracOnyx on February 27, 2005
    HEY! I had nothing to do with this! *looks innocent and fails miserably* Okay . . . well, maybe I had a LITTLE do with it! What can I say, when my muse starts hammering on me, I have to share the wealth!

    Another great chapter hun, as I said. Can't wait to see where you take this.

    DracOnyx
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on February 27, 2005
    Great start! I hope in Chapter 2 we get to see Yugi, Ryou and Malik's reactions. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on February 27, 2005
    I LOVE IT! You did great hun! keep up the great work, and I'll keep pestering you for more! *glomphs* just keep those rabid wombats in their damn cage!

    DracOnyx
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