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Reviews for The XX Factor *completed*

By : Wicabeth
  • From ANON - DracOnyx on April 01, 2005
    While I don't usually read this kind of thing, it was too tempting considering that you wrote it dear. Best part, I must say, was Yami's decision to tweak Bakura and Marik. I wouldn't do that to my worst enemy, and I've been through childbirth three times. Christ, those two are NEVER going to be the same . . .

    DracOnyx
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  • From ANON - jemu on April 01, 2005
    O man, that is SOO mean!! don't leave us hanging! Well, XX Factor is GREAT! I enjoy reading it, I like everyone's character and man, the part where Jou was giving birth with marik and bakura sharing the pain had me cracking up. I can't wait for the wedding so hurry and post!!
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  • From ANON - kupo on March 23, 2005
    lol
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  • From ANON - daisey on March 23, 2005
    Nicely done. Good chapter. You earned that bathroom break.
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on March 23, 2005
    Now THAT was a perfect punishment for Marik and Bakura. :) You have a twisted mind - I love it!


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  • From ANON - mofaf1 on March 23, 2005
    Love what you did to Bakura and Malik....they deserved it...and worse. (Especially Bakura for wanting to make it permanent in the first place). Poor Seto...I can guess who gets diaper duty and the midnight feedings. Love the restaurant scene and the boys reaction to the water breaking. Too bad Bakura and/or Malik didn't get closer to Jou during a contraction...I'd have loved the reaction when he got a deathgrip on their balls...They'd probably never go near him again....hahaha)

    gotta see how Seto handles fatherhood....and Jou too (as well as motherhood).

    Bet Mokie is gonna be glowing all over as the new Uncle.

    Bet Seto is gonna try to buy his way out of Jou's bad graces by filling the hospital room with so many flowers there won't be room for a nurse...just to show Jou how sorry he is for all the pain.

    Great chap.
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  • From ANON - maggiemay on March 23, 2005
    I LOVE what you did to the evil ones. Ohhhh....and Jou's still gonna kick Seto's ass. LOL. Liked the restaurant scene...I can just see that conversation in my head.
    *hugs* great work.
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  • From ANON - kupo on March 23, 2005
    Down to the wire! He's gonna be screaming his ass off when it's time! update asap!
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  • From ANON - mofaf1 on March 22, 2005
    I agree with Nomalaz about the most painful day he'll ever experience. I also like the idea of Malik and Bakura fainting....but I'd prefer if it was because Yami made it so that the two had to share Jou's pain while giving birth...whether they are physically in his presence or elsewhere (like maybe at the arcade in the middle of a dance game or at the movies....or even in class) when the labor pains start. Let them think they are being turned inside out through their precious manhood....litterally.

    mofaf1
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  • From ANON - Nomalaz on March 22, 2005
    Uh-oh! It's countdown to the most painful day of Joey's life! I liked the name for their little girl.
    I do have one personal request, if possible: Please have both Marik and Bakura forced to watch the birth as punishment for what they did to Joey. And if you have them faint, I will love you forever. Fainting yamis are hilarious.
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  • From ANON - mofaf1 on March 22, 2005
    I can hardly wait for the birth....Jou is gonna wanna rip off more than just Kaiba's head when he/she's in the delivery room trying to push that miniature elephant through that little cocktail straw (at least that is what it felt like when I had each of my kids). If his/her delivery is anything like mine he's gonna feel like he's being drawn and quartered from the inside out and the only one there is to blame will be Seto Kaiba...

    On the positive side...the pain is so great that Jou won't be able to do much more than blast Seto with his/her voice since the hands will be in a death grip on the bed and the feet will be trussed up in the stirrups with everything else open to public view of the doctors, nurses and daddy to be....

    Of course afterwards Jou will be overwhelmed with the emotions from seeing the new little bundle... (and it'll hurt too much to stand much less walk or run) so Seto will be forgiven and encouraged (by Jou) to pamper the pup and baby as much as possible...

    have fun.
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  • From ANON - maggiemay on March 22, 2005
    And it gets better and better. LOL...keep up the great work...and hurry would ya...I want seto to deliver the baby or cut the cord or something. >.
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on March 22, 2005
    At least when Joey's a boy, then he won't have to worry about it ever again. Of course, in a lot of ways this is the _easy_ part... Eh, keep going please!
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  • From ANON - Gina Lee on March 22, 2005
    Waiiiiiiit, if you're naming her after Asuka, where does her older brother come in then? (Asuka has an older brother in YGOGX, unless you're not following that story exactly)
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  • From ANON - DAISEY on March 18, 2005
    Another cute chapter. Nicely done!
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