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Reviews for The XX Factor *completed*

By : Wicabeth
  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on March 18, 2005
    Cute chapter. Gotta love baby showers.

    One little thing, though...you have an inconsistancy. In the first game, Mokuba was out in the first round - then suddenly he and Serenity were the finalists. Just thought you should know.


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  • From ANON - jemu on March 18, 2005
    YAY !! you updated !! Yes! the baby shower commences.. and ooo, Marik and Bakura getting a little fresh there aren't they? HAHAHAHA, I like how Joey tends to get violent when he turns mushy.. keep updating !
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  • From ANON - jemu on March 17, 2005
    o yea, please don't name the baby Joey Jr. or Kaiba Jr. *_*
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  • From ANON - jemu on March 17, 2005
    HAHAHAHA, I love this. This is great, Jou a girl and PREGNANT!! ehehehehe, Kaiba is taking this awefully well. quick question for you, so Kaiba ISN'T attracted to Jou's female form? And aaaawwwwwwwwwe, the baby kicked !! when I read that I had a big sappy smile on my face.. so how many chapters are left? I'm itching to see what happens next !! hurry and update !!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 17, 2005
    i think the room was jsut beautiful!! i hope the baby likes it ^^ and as for mokuba, eee he was right on both ends! lol oh that was great. i wonder what hte baby will look like hwen she's born? ^^
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  • From ANON - kupo on March 17, 2005
    Yay its a girl. I knew it was gonna be a girl!!!!
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  • From ANON - daisey on March 17, 2005
    **grins** I loved this chapter... especially the last couple of lines. So perfectly Joey. Can't wait for more.
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  • From Crystal56 on March 17, 2005
    CUTE!
    This is KAWAII!
    (And yes, I am looking at this both on mediaminer and adultfanfiction...)
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on March 17, 2005
    Awwww....Joey and Seto are having a baby girl!!!! *squishes joey and seto*
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on March 16, 2005
    *snicker* Poor Seto. I think the poor guy needs earplugs! Glad to see the pregancy is going over so well, though.
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  • From ANON - Maggiemay on March 16, 2005
    Squeel. So...using my dad's computer...wheee...I love flying on airplanes...anyway, I like this alot...but you know that. I loved the Yugi/Yami in this chappie...I could just see the butt in the face thing. I am glad to hear your dad came through okay...now what else did I want to say? Oh yeah! No more excuses...update soon.

    LOL Hugs...Maggiemay or Maggiemaynot...*winks*
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  • From ANON - Hentai Houshi Miroku on March 14, 2005
    You had me worried and gasping at first, now theres a nice little turn around; nice to see its not all heartbreak. Though I do wonder when the baby is delivered who will be the one to get up in the midlle of the night to feed it. I know Joey sasid he wanted to nurse it for awhile but I have a feeling that will soon get old with the midnight runs and such. Ohh well, good luck with the rest, I gave this story the highest rating.
    Signed,
    Miroku the Hentai Houshi
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  • From ANON - Nomalaz on March 13, 2005
    ::ROFLMAO:: Oh this fic is great! Maybe those two should thank Marik and Bakura for the mishap then Joey can kick their asses after he changes back. If you need a milder strange craving for Joey, I suggest chocolate milk and pickles. Yes, I have had that combination before and no, I have never been pregnant.
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  • From ANON - maggiemay on March 13, 2005
    whoo...more Jou Mood Swings. Love the baby heartbeat. Ohhh....I'd just melt. Hmmm...but Seto didn't kiss his tummy...(small pout) but that's cool...he adores his Jou Pup...so if Jou is puppy...uuughhh what would that make the baby? A dragon and puppy hybrid? A draguppy? A pragon? A cuddly white puppy with black dragon dragon wings. LOL...huggles...great job wicabeth.
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  • From ANON - kupo on March 12, 2005
    update update update!!!!!
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