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Reviews for WAIT FOR YOU FOREVER (A.K.A. SLEEPLESS II)

By : nixwilliams
  • From ANON - Mishiko Shinsei on February 09, 2006
    Excellent!

    This is the first Mokuba angst story I've come across where he 'goes off the deep end'. And you keep him in character the whole time! Thanks for sharing! Any more to this series?

    'Ko
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  • From ANON - praiseofshadows on September 14, 2005
    Hi! This isn't so much a review as a request -- I'm putting together a small archive of Seto/Mokuba fics, and I was wondering if I could archive this and your other Seto/Mokuba-ish ficlets? ^_^ Anyway, just tell me what you think, okay?
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  • From ANON - obsessionprof on April 28, 2005
    Hi! I'm from over at LocketPair on lj. Got a link to read this, and it was really interesting. I haven't read Seto's side of things yet. Just wanted to say that I enjoyed the story that you wrote here.
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  • From nixwilliams on March 22, 2005
    =) ta for bothering to write reveiws, even though i've finished!

    i'm really glad you liked the ending - i really wanted to keep the "dreamy feel" (as you put so well), and also leave it open... not necessarily for a sequel, but because the whole mokuba/seto thing is very ambiguous anyway. i wanted a sense of closure (they're reunited), while also having a sense of progress (it's a bit of a mokuba-coming-of-age thing, i guess), but not having either of them really confront the large issue of UNRESOLVED SEXUAL TENSION... and i like that we don't -know- if mokuba still wants seto in a sexual way (or if he ever really did) because -he- doesn't know himself. and seto's actions are not -necessarily- intended in a sexual way... AAARRGH! THE AMBIGUITY!!!

    anyway, again, THANK YOU for reviewing. i can not stress how BRILLIANT it has been to receive feedback and encouragment. i hope this is a story that sticks in your mind (there are fics i remember occasionally at inappropriate moments - they're the best ones!).

    nixwilliams, over and out!
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  • From ANON - praiseofshadows on March 22, 2005
    Oh...but what a way to end it! =D That was _marvelous_ -- it kept the dreamy feel of it and everything! So very very lovely!
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  • From ANON - Sunny on March 21, 2005
    My, I go away for three days and you finish! the story. I really liked it though, Seto's reaction was great...much better than parental style. And I also liked that the end wasn't all sappy. You are right, I do lile angst, yet I am happy that you didn't end the story with Mokuba leaving Seto for good.
    Now talking about you not ruling out a sequel or a new story, what can I say, I am glad I don't have to come after you to make you write more^_~
    Thanks again for the great read! Can't wait to read more.
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  • From nixwilliams on March 19, 2005
    heh heh... no, i think that's the end... *rubs hands evilly* *and with glee* ... can i just share with you all this fantastic quote from a random comic sheet i got in a booster pack of cards (ah HA! a fic writer who also has CARDS! unheard of!)... Anzu/Tea is talking, saying (and i quote VERBATIM) "YuGi... You must help Joey! To save his sister from bling!" LMAO!!! Save Serentiy From Bling! it's my new campaign!!! badges, posters, flyers, RALLIES! it'll take over the world. ... ... ok, maybe not.
    NOW, to business! thanks for reviewing some more. hope gorging went well for you ;) ... yeah, i think the blue eyes thing is a bit cliche, because GOSH DARN i am sick of fic-seto-eyes... but the blue theme has twined throughout the story, so i guess that validates it somewhat. "Sleepless I" is not related to this story, really. I'll post it sometime, i guess.
    ah, praiseofshadows, all good things must come to an end. although i have a feeling that people are somewhat unsatisfied with this one. *grins*...

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  • From ANON - praiseofshadows on March 17, 2005
    Another wonderful few chapters!!!! Yay!!! And don't end it...that would be sadness incarnate! (unless you were planning a sequel *hint hint*) Anyway, great job as always! =D
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  • From ANON - whitesakura on March 17, 2005
    So, I disappear for a while and when I come back ::bam:: whole new chapters! ::gorges on fic:: Love Mokuba's swirling thoughts as he breaks down and cries. Blue eyes that can never compare to another person's or anything else. How romantic, but not in a too mushy way. I wonder what'll happen when Seto has to confront Mokuba's feelings? As for Sleepless I, you should post it. It'll probably add to the story. If you're unhappy w/ it, it's okay to re-write, ya know? ^_~

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  • From nixwilliams on March 17, 2005
    Oh, and you're not blind - "Sleepless I" has not been posted here. It's a long one-shot, same pairing, written about Mokuba in some sort of institution... If you guys want, I'll post it, but it was the first YuGiOh fic I wrote, and it's ... well, not as good as this one. =)
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  • From nixwilliams on March 17, 2005
    thanks everyone - you know you're great! i never expected that people would actually bother following this story, let alone be so nice about it! lucky, lucky me! sooooo, the next chappie should be up today or tomorrow... sunny, you have a point - do you think seto (at, what, 22? 23? years old) would be a bit parental? i mean he's been looking after mokuba (sort of) for most of his life, so i think he would be... if -my- little brother/sister dissapeared without a trace, -i'd- be upset and angry, and a bit parental... but also fucking relieved when s/he turned up. then again, seto and mokuba have that -thing- between them, which (as i'm sure all here agree) is not entirely brotherly!!! so maybe seto's trying -not- to act like he's in charge of mokuba... oh, btw, you said you wanted a happy ending - heehee! come off it! you LOVE the angst! =) i'm not giving anything away! see you soon guys, and thanks again!
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  • From mercynre on March 17, 2005
    Squeal! I can't believe you reviewed my story (Protesting the Conflict in Iraq)... that totally made my day, because I am such a fan of this one...You're a great writer and very creative... I love the angst... though I'm soooo sad that Mokie cut his hair. Mokuba/Seto is my favorite pairing of all time, can't wait for more updates!
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  • From ANON - Sunny on March 17, 2005
    You are my hero; the last two chapters were great. Poor Mokuba, that sure wasn’t the homecoming he had envisioned, will Seto make it up to him? I actually would like to see Seto do the whole parent routine with scolding and screaming…na, not really^_^
    Why was Jou there!? Ah well, at least poor little lonely Yugi has someone now.
    And the Seto side story, very nice, I really liked it, thanks for taking the time to write it!
    Oh, and one more question, maybe it is just my own stupidity, but when this story is Sleepless II, were is part one?

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  • From nixwilliams on March 15, 2005
    Thanks for reading, reviewing etc. Thanks for the link. Thanks for following the link. THANK YOU ALL!!! Now... to serious business. The SETO QUESTION, i.e "What the fuck is he doing?"... Well, Mokuba is a missing person, ergo someone must have declared him missing. Given that Yugi seems to be in no state for doing such things, I would say there is a good chance that Seto is the culprit. Once again - in this version of this story, we don't get a lot of info about Seto because it's Mokuba's journey. BUT *wards off the howls of discontent!* BUT, since you're all so interested, I think I might write a short one-shot or drabble (mmm, I love drabbles) of what Seto is up to while Mokuba is on his quest... mission... thing. So, thanks again for reading etc... Here is chapter 9 (do I need to say, I'd love a review?!)... Very close to the end now - only a couple more chapters!
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  • From ANON - Sunny on March 15, 2005
    I came here via your link on locket pair and gods, I love this story(I also liked the God drabble, that was really sweet), I don't know how I could miss this, seeing how I love Seto/Mokuba to bits...but oh my you made Mokuba cut his hair! AHHHHHHH, how will Seto react? Hell, what is with Seto anyway, don't get me wrong, I like how you write Mokuba but I would love to know if Seto is worried sick, or trying to compensate by working himself to death, or...Please tell me there is a happy ending, on Nedjem Netsuai there is so much angst these days, I need some happy stuff!



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