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Reviews for Dark Roads

By : DracOnyx
  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on April 29, 2005
    Wow. I love how you're balancing this - the way both Bakura and Atemu are slowly falling for each other, but neither are willing to admit to anything beyond the 'fuck buddy' stage.

    Loved the scene where Bakura is watching Atem doing the knife-kata - that was incredible, and I could so picture that in my mind. *sighs*

    Yami SSF: *smacks SSF upside the head* Stop daydreaming and get on with the review!

    Oh, right - anyway, thanks for the new chapter, and I hope you're feeling better soon...

    Your stalker,
    Silvershadowfire
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  • From Kugatsu on April 24, 2005
    Excellent! A crueler softer sexier kinder Bakura!!! *awwwwwwwww*
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  • From ANON - Lell on April 23, 2005
    *Giggles* Of course you're worth it dear - it was a lot of your writing that actually got me into fanfiction, so hush.

    I think my brain died from so much sheer cuteness - the Bakura and Atemu reconciliation was very touching, but what got me the most was Ryou and Bakura at the end. *Sigh* So...poignant. Just remember I'll be stalking you until the next chapter! *Snicker*
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on April 23, 2005
    Great chapter..as always...but hmm..I think I remember already saying that about this chapter..^.~...

    wonderful job beautiful! *huggles*
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on April 23, 2005
    I finally did it! I caught up!
    HOLYFUCKENSHITHELLYEAHWOWOWWOWOW!
    This is so addicting! That last lemon between Marik and Bakura was killer, great job!
    Looking forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on April 23, 2005
    I loved it. I mean I can feel exactly what you're explaining. I love all this angst too! Very good chapter hope you update soon and your life gets better for what I hear. I think that you deserve a better life. Ja ne.
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  • From ANON - shy and leighc on April 23, 2005
    Need you even ask? Of course your gonna get reviews love. You won't believe the blush you put on my baby one's face. It won't probably ever come off *chuckles* Wonderful chapter and thank the God for the update cuz we were about to go insane. You have such a way with this stuff. It's downright scary girl. Keep it up! *pulls shy out from behind her* Your turn and I won't take shy chibi looks for an answer.

    *blushes a thousand shades of crimson melting into dangerous purple hues* Um..you....you're more than shyly welcome and ...well....anyshylytime really. *shyly shuffles her foot* Um...ever so many shy and quiet yays for the update *shyly huggles the update* Poor....poor everyone. *blushes an alarming bruised purple while timidly placing a wrapped package on the ground before shyly dashing away to hide*

    ^_~ Oreo cookies, is there any better way to go? Probably but who cares, they're oreos!! *glomps you before jogging off to find the shy*
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  • From ANON - kit-kit on April 22, 2005
    aaawww the chapter was sweet i liked the kiss and the inner turmoil.
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  • From ANON - aspiker on April 22, 2005
    I wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying the way you are setting the relationships within this story. The underlying warmth and compassion being placed into Bakura is well written. It flows naturally, without the "awww" factor that could have easily snuck in.


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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on April 22, 2005
    It's me! As I said, lovely chapter - I loved the emotions before, during and after that kiss. It was just so wonderful and so real. I loved it, and I'm looking forward to how this changes their relationship.

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  • From ANON - ralphiere on April 22, 2005
    I've just realized that I read the last chapter a bit ago and never reviewed! I'm so flighty like that (of course usually it's because I get distracted by the beasties), and for that I apologize!

    Anyway, I digress! The last two chapters were both amazing! I loved how you did the scene with Marik, it was great insight into their relationship, and a wonderful contrast to what is brewing between Bakura and Atemu (and of course the whole lemon thing was incredibly hot!). I think that sometimes fluff is a good thing, and you delved into the potentially tender side of Bakura, and frankly no matter how big a hard ass someone is they have a bit of a soft side there somewhere!

    Great plot development, great scenes!! YAY!

    Su
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  • From ANON - Chaos Dragon on April 22, 2005
    *grins* I still have a lot of work to do and learn but thanks for the compliment! And your still my idol!

    OOh so they are beginning to realize they have feelings for each other! YAY! Such a sexy couple, if i thought i could write Bakura i would do more darkshipping than prideshipping but in the mean time i'll just read your amazing fics.

    Can't wait for more!

    Dragon
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  • From ANON - Nancy on April 22, 2005
    hehe, i dont mind fluffiness THAT much, and besides your plot and writing are both exellent!
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  • From LadyLaran on April 22, 2005
    First off, you are more than welcome. Our friendship means a lot and I'm glad to be there when you need help. And now..the story...GREAT!!! As always! More please!!!!
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  • From ANON - zehlyah on April 20, 2005
    This story just keeps getting better and better. I love your descriptions, your bold statements, your exploration of what others consider taboo, the whole package. I can't wait to read more and I hope you find the time to update very soon.
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