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By : SpiritVampire
  • From ANON - Essentielle on July 27, 2005
    you've written it very good, and I like how you made Marik and Malik to act, but for my taste, there wasn't enough Marik/Malik in it xD
    I just love this pairing... and I don't like Silver.
    I never like other characters.
    must be a desease or something like that xD
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  • From ANON - SilverWingedSeraph on March 24, 2005
    Mmm... nice. ^^ I'm the friend that Silver is based on, btw. I recently came to the realisation that I was bi, and oddly enough, it's thanks to Malik that I realised and accepted it. Yami Seirei offered to write this for me, and of course, I gladly accepted the offer. :D Thanks for writing it, Yami-chan. *hugs* Good luck with your other fics. Can't wait for the next chapter of 'Chance Encounter'.
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  • From ANON - Rachel Dracon on March 24, 2005
    Interesting. I had some questions, since it was an OC, but the story was a lot of fun. I'd say your overall writing needs a little work, but it was still an enjoyable read. You said Silver was based on a friend of yours, if so (I may just be remembering something you in fact, never said) did he think he was straight and actually have an experience like that, or do you just think he might be bi?
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