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Reviews for Mela en’ Coiamin (Love of my Life)

By : Ravenx
  • From ANON - janet on May 01, 2005
    Hi there another great chapter!!!
    Glad that the writer block is gone!!
    Hmmm i am glad that there is no 3some for yami and yugi....for some reason i just cant stand it maybe i am just a hopless romantic hehehehe....

    Cant wait for de next chapter and i got a feeling that it will be ryo and bakura turn .....
    I sure hope that malik is able to get over the past soon and learn to trust marilk as poor marlik i am sure it must feel terrible for him not being able to be fully accepted by his love!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on May 01, 2005
    *muses* Hm, 3 chapters left, enless you got something up your sleeve...*winces* Ouch! Poor Ryou! He tripped over Yami and Yugi! *pauses* Okay, Marik/Malik lemon pls! Along with Bakura/Ryou!
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  • From ANON - Kodachi on May 01, 2005
    Serves you right... You didn't even have any warnings... of threesomes or incest. I noticed many will accept yaoi, but not incest. As for threesomes, not many likes it, either. The only reason I didn't object too much to the threesome in the previous chapter was that it was pretty good for a threesome. However, I must confess, I didn't like the fact that it had Mokuba in with Seto and Jou. I don't really like incest too much. Not only that, I am a diehard SetoxJou fan, so I don't really accept Mokuba with them.

    Anyways, on with this chapter. Hmmm... I like how it's going, but there wasn't much action going on, except for the teasing of Yami and Yugi, Seto finding out about Tristan, and Marik's moping. It seems a bit short, compared to other chapters... *shrugs* Also, i noticed that you wrote it in present tense. I have to say that it doesn't seem to fit right. Usually, stories are written in past tense. Oh, well...

    Kodachi
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  • From ANON - Camille on May 01, 2005
    I hope Seto rips Tristan apart. HEHEHEH!! Cool chapter!

    Bakura: You're finally mine!!!!

    Ryo: Oh yes! I am...so...when are you giving me a ring?

    Bakura: A WHAT!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bondage0queen on April 30, 2005
    great threesome. glad u updated, really great chaps ya got goin. i will try to wait patiently, though i dont know if i will seeing how well you write, its like a mini addiction, and i LOVE IT!!! continue.
    ciao
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  • From ANON - Natz on April 28, 2005
    I'm BAACCCCKKKKKK!!!!!! Miss me? I didn't miss me. Me can get so annoying some times. I'll make it short and sweet.....LOVE IT!!! LOVE IT!! LOVE IT!!!. tHAT GOES FOR THE ENGULFED TRILOGY TOO. anyways i'm sick and just took my meds.....so....yeah. keep me informed for more ok? and the letter's coming.....eventually ok. works a bitch.

    love ya babes

    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

    NATZ
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  • From ANON - Alexis on April 27, 2005
    I love this new story as much as I loved the Engulfed series. Please keep writing. ^^
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  • From ANON - Gaia on April 27, 2005
    Wow...Now I need a cold shower. That was great but will Mokuba break up with Duke and then find a new lover? Will something bad happen? I have this in mind for some time so here it go: Will Tristan discover about Jou and Seto? Or Tristan will find some one? And will this story have mpreg on it? Please update soon. Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Nymphadora_Tonks on April 27, 2005
    Hey girl,
    Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while... -_- my stupid computer has been messing up yet again... but now I have a new one... so I can get on and review more.... YAY!!! All I have to say about chapter 6 is... I really need a cold shower Oo;;;. Oh and can elves have kids too like in the Engulfed stories? I know your not going to go back to the engulfed stories any time soon... but when you do, do you think you could to a side store about the twins have some "fun"? >> and any of the the other kids for the matter. Is Bakura and Ryou going to be the next in line to get some lol? Hope to hear from you soon, and to get a nother great chapter. ^^

    Love,
    the REAL Tonks ^^
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  • From ANON - hatochiisai on April 27, 2005
    The threesome lemon was just fine.... >.> I'm just not crazy about the incest... That always kinda bugged me. But other than that, I do like the story. I had my doubts at first, but I am enjoying it! Keep it up! ^.^
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  • From ANON - yamiyugiforever on April 26, 2005
    WOW!!!! seto on joey on mokuba that was hot. Im sure If I were a guy I would be so hard u wouldent belive. um...yea that was ackward well update soon.
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  • From ANON - chelsey on April 26, 2005
    hey its me from along time ago (i reviewed a couple times for the engulfed trilogy) do u rember ?
    anyways cool story elves are so cool!!
    i'm gald duke and mokie are having trouble hopefully they will brake up?
    one thing i didnt like and thought was a little werid was seto and mokuba thire brothers i like jou and seto together but not the three of them but thats just me (dont take it personal or the wrong way and please dont hate me!) anyways awesme story its werid havin mokie grown up but cool anyways update soon?
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  • From ANON - chelsey on April 26, 2005
    hey its me from along time ago (i reviewed a couple times for the engulfed trilogy) do u rember ?
    anyways cool story elves are so cool!!
    i'm gald duke and mokie are having trouble hopefully they will brake up?
    one thing i didnt like and thought was a little werid was seto and mokuba thire brothers i like jou and seto together but not the three of them but thats just me (dont take it personal or the wrong way and please dont hate me!) anyways awesme story its werid havinmokie grown up but cool anyways update soon?
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on April 26, 2005
    Thanks for the warning! But pls go in deeper detail next time! *blinks* O.O I certainly didn't expect a scene like that when I read the warning! More Marik/Malik!
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  • From ANON - takky on April 26, 2005
    This was my first SXJXM that I've read and all I can say is...VERY, VERY NICE!!
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