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Reviews for Of a friend and boyfriends

By : Bonsai
  • From ANON - Good grief... on October 24, 2006
    Who are these people and what have you done to the real Ryou, Marik, Seto, ect?

    Seriously, this fic is a holy mess.
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  • From ANON - Tink on October 06, 2005
    OMG! AND THE PLOT THICKENS!!!!!! XD I really like this fic! Ryous got some seriously bad issues to sort out. I wish Yami would fuck off and leave him alone after what he did. Poor little Ryou diddums. ^^ Im glad Baku is back.. or actually IN the story i should say. When you wrote in one of the first chapters "and lost his yami" i was like "OMGWTF?!?!" LOL! Yey for Baku.
    Hmm, somehow i cant see Malik being happy Bakura is back though. lol.
    Poor Ishizu ;_;
    POOR MALIK! =(
    I hope your beta gets back soon. Cant wait for updates ^-^
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  • From ANON - yaoiboy on October 04, 2005
    It is getting better and better every time i read a new chapter

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  • From ANON - Cravesuicide on June 27, 2005
    I love this story best one i have ever read........................................................................please update soon

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  • From ANON - Kyle on June 18, 2005
    Hey you shouldnt be sorry i cant even fine your typoes and that person doesnt like them the maybe he/she shouldnt read your story

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  • From ANON - kupo on June 08, 2005
    Dude, I feel sorry for you! I just finished Finals at my school. Anyway, good luck and update when you can!
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  • From ANON - Rachel Dracon on May 20, 2005
    I don't know if you care about your writing, some people who post online don't, so if you don't care about your writing just disregard this review.

    I only got about halfway through the first chapter, simply because of the grammatical errors. It's a massive turn off to have mistakes in your writing everywhere, though a few typos are excusable. If you want to have quality writing, start proofreading. If that doesn't help or you already do, get someone else to proofread your stories; a beta would work wonders. At the very least watch out for things like the difference between 'there' and 'their,' there is nothing more annoying than reading something and coming across a 'to' where there should be a 'too,' or a 'there' where there should be a 'they're.'

    This is not meant to be taken as an insult, just to be taken as advice for improving your story, what reviews exist for in my opinion.
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  • From ANON - kupo on May 13, 2005
    woot updates! I think Yami's trying to get his boyfriend back. So is he going to the party?
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  • From ANON - kupo on May 03, 2005
    Yay!!!! WE got a lemon. That was great! But I got upset when he got that phone call. Oh well update soon!
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  • From Yamima on May 02, 2005
    what happens next???

    (Waiting paitently)
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  • From ANON - kupo on April 28, 2005
    This story is soo cool. I have nothing bad to say right now. (which is pretty good) update asap!
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  • From ANON - LaRieaux on April 17, 2005
    Oh I meant to tell you good job so far...I'm not really familiar with yu-gi-oh but I like where this is going. For the record, I'm a girl ^_^
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  • From ANON - LaRieaux on April 17, 2005
    Hmmm...I still saw an error, want to send it back to me? So I can correct it? Oh and I saw that you didnt thank me for betaing your story. How rude. Just kidding but you can send it back if you want.
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  • From ANON - Bishojoshadow on April 15, 2005
    HEY! i recognized your fic the moment i saw the summarry and i'm lovin it ^_^ btw i'm a girl not a guy ^_~ jus so we both know this :P anyway keep writing i'll be chacking up on thsi fic!
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  • From ANON - sakamui on April 04, 2005
    It's a great story mate.

    P.S: ik ben haar zus, maar het is echt goe. Dus allemaal lezen.

    You really should read it.
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