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Reviews for The New Girl - Perfection has Landed!

By : Whytney
  • From HellraiserMomma on April 23, 2008
    I found your insights on the Mary-Sue rather funny. What am I saying, they were down right hysterical. Though not all Americans write or like Mary-Sue characters. And believe it or not, they actually serve a purpose. They show us how NOT to write a character! ^_^

    ~J. Hellraiser
    "I'm not crazy, I just appear that way."
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  • From AkizukiSakura on July 01, 2007
    And now that I have my breath back...

    This reminds me of an Avartar: The Last Airbender misting site.

    Well done.
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  • From Unolai on February 16, 2007
    I'm sorry, but I couldn't even read the entire first chapter...It's just so darn annoying!! >.< And not to mention completely true...

    I have better grammar skills than most of those authors and I'm not even English!! *fumes*
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  • From ANON - Foeofthelance/Reddragon on January 06, 2006
    It shames me to admit this but...I want to save this misbegotten piece of trash. If you folks could email me the original chapters, I want to take a crack at rewriting it so that is not only legible, but makes sense. I so hate to see a good plot die...even if the characters are crap.
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  • From ANON - jadefeather on January 06, 2006
    Quite frankly, I wasn't able to actually read the entire story. I just skimmed through those parts until I came
    to your comments. It was hilarious! Stories like the one you parodied make me kinda sick to read (although,
    I do occasionaly try if I can't find a decent one I like) and many of your comments are ones I've said to myself
    as I've read some of these...things. (I shudder to call them stories.) Thank you! Thank you so much!
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on January 06, 2006
    *cries* it's over!!!!! NOOOOO!!! Well, hopefully you guys will do the sequel. If you need a hand on it, I can see what I can do. ^^
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  • From ANON - kitten on January 04, 2006
    *tackles and huggles* i adore the both of you *nods* this needed to be done *huggles again* i wasted all of the time i had for cleaning reading this which shall get my ass kicked but i still love both of you ^_~
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2006
    this was great hehe I couldnt stop my laughter from pouring out
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  • From ANON - Soul to Avenge on January 03, 2006
    okay i just had to comment because i really like how you're bashing the shit out of this person but...i just can't read anymore, of course i love the in between comments and i'll slowly continue but to much of these errors at one time.*begins pulling at eyes*...IT BURNS!!!!!

    who in their insane fucking mind writes this?? and why?? i mean even they have to see how pathetic it is...

    but i really really like the humor in between and that's what kept me reading this far
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  • From ANON - Autumn R on January 03, 2006
    x_X i'm only on chapter two and i can't take it anymore...i do mary-sue esqu fics all the time when i get board...but i always end up killing my characters....^_^ cause thats always fun!...and..a crossbow? dude....did the egyptians even have those? i dunt think so...o.- and how can you have two past egyptian lives?...._. and how can a yami eat suger?...WHAT IS WRONG WITH HER?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2006
    "Guys! Yugi's been hit by a bus!"

    ...Oh...fucking God...hysterical laughing must--STOP. I swear. That got me falling out of my poorly-constructed chair in mad giggles. I pray to my lord and savior--who happens to be a patched sock puppet--every single day for this to happen.

    Ah. Yeah. Best regards to your merry band of friends. I would have dropped dead if I had to deal with just the first chapter. Most of this mindless drabble was just too embarrassing for me to read, and so I decided to mostly skip through to the comments. It was that horrible. However, I'm not afraid to say that I adore you for this small laugh.

    I love ranch dressing.
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  • From LokiStories on December 30, 2005
    Funny stuff ^^

    Pregunta...did you write the original fic or did you find it? Sorry if you answered this already, but I wasn't sure.
    Also, it'd be less confusing if you put your comments in parenthesis or something...there's alot of disconnect as it is right now.
    Otherwise, it's hilarious ^^

    ~Loki
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  • From ANON - Erelyn on November 24, 2005
    Omg, just...omg. The story alone was, wack. Your comments made my day. I seriously didn't expect a any writer, who would post something like this...no, let me retract that statement...why would someone bother to post that?! And how old is that writer?! The grammar is atrocious, the story is bland, and it seems that the person has no common sense whatsoever. Anyway, I loved that bash. It made me think about how 'stupid people are blissfully unaware of how stupid they really are.' Ever got corrected in grammar by an idiot? "No, you should say more better." ...w/e, this review isn't about me, but about your hilarious reaction to this peculiar form of writing. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on October 28, 2005
    *squishes you and hands you Seto plushies* YEAH! I missed this story alot!I'm glad to see it was updated! You rock.....seriously. ^^ *hugs*
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on September 26, 2005
    *snickers* Yami fell to the ground panting.....Yami was masturbating...but it wasn't written into the scene. I guess maybe the pharaoh needed that to give him some morsel of pleasure after reading this lousy fic. Poor Yami.
    Anywhoo....great, funny chappie like usual! You guys rock!
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