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From ANON - Sarah Costa on June 09, 2005
Is Yami ok? I'm glad that you back. Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on June 09, 2005
RD: hey KITG glad u could update its been awhile oh hey question mind if i finish Rui off after hearing all the horrible things that bitch did to yami and galen well its safe to say im not happy and you know how i get when im not happy KITG oh and as for those nightmares of yours here * hands her two insent holders plus a special insent she made herself* these should help its ward off all negetive auras around while u sleep its very strong hehe not even demons could haunt ur dreams its that strong now speaking of warding off oh Rui my darling bitch were are you*turns to see Rui running* oh my dear im hurt were just going to have some fun *snatches rui and chains her to a wall* fun for me that is *grabs her diamond coated steal whips then gives rui fifteen lashings then grabs a bucket of salt and tosses it on to her wounds making them more painful then grabs some barbed wire and ties it around her writs and forhead (sorta jesus crucifiing if u will hehe go figure its what she deserves ya know* then ties her to an egyptian Ankh* huh how does it feel getting hurt by the very weapon you used on galen bitch *then she grabs her daggers and tosses each on impaling her hands and feet to the ground and floor and then sends out huge waves of plauges each more painful then the last then invokes the powers of necromancy to torture her mind riddle her with the guilt of betraying the true son of ra just so she can be a slut and the guilt gets so strong she practically sreams with its pain then she rips out ruis beating heart out of her chest with her bare hands then sends massive lighting shocks through it till it burts but she still keeps ruia alive and fully consious of the pain shes going through then she leaves the room and presses a button to let killer bees scarabs and all sorts of insects have at her still shes nothing more then a mere memory* i was debating using acid on her but its been done unfourtunately hehe well gtg now KITG keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
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From ANON - kenz on June 09, 2005
GRR cliffy
I hope this is update
sooon!
I wants to know if the kill ruia ...
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From ANON - dragong1rl4 on June 01, 2005
What a cool vampire story I love it! Yugi gets that cool dragon pendant, does it have any powers? Is Joey going to become a vampire or what? update please I want to know what happens next.
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From ANON - Arainaina on May 17, 2005
Ohh very good please update soon
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From ANON - catti-dono on May 04, 2005
Hey kit what did you think of the pic I sent you? Great story, love it, or I would not continue to review..laughs....catti
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From ANON - K.c on May 04, 2005
WHY'ED HE SAY OH RA!?!?!??!!? TELL ME TELL ME TELL ME TELL ME TELL TELL!!!!!!!!!! ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on May 04, 2005
RD: *giggles* dont u get it jou hears a hint Seto and jou sitting in a tree k i s s i n g first comes love then comes marriage then comes a new vampy in the night time carrage hehe seto loves ya boy loves ya to death so he does hehe now weres that bakura *watches Yami chasing after a fleeing bakura then goes chasing after him to speeds up past yami grabs bakura and beats the shit out of him*there ur punishment wont be a severe as yugis fuckterd of an uncle or pegasas or that snotty wrotten to fucking core slutty whore trained bitch ruia but still ill give u a warning no amount of shadow magic and or EVIL will save u from my wrath if u disturb KITGs rest one more time GOT THAT*tosses bakura into a wall then flies over to KITG gently picks up her sleeping form and places it in the protecting crevic of her arms allowing her to sleep warm and protected and hands her some of her specially made hot choclate with rich milk and hearty chocklate to put her to sleep and hands a mug of hot chocolate to yugi and yami as well but gives not to bakura cuz hes been a bad boy then with her magic forges and temple worthy of that of the great isis in honor of Galems child (did i spell his name right correct me if i didnt ok) and places a heavenly shine from heaven and ras domain combined to honor the precious child who bravely scraficed her life so her father could be spared betraying his friend* ur name will be remembered child and i thank you myself for what you and ur brave father have done i guess the desert not only breeds stern but righteous souls at least once in awhile well KITG after ur finished ur hot chocolate and gotten some rest pls update soon and keep up the great work gtg now JA NE ^__^
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From ANON - Yana on May 04, 2005
aww poor Jou, Yami look after Yugi
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From ANON - Akela on May 02, 2005
h-hey! i....i want a hug.... please....
Galen get hurt by bad lady! No! send bad lady away!!
*wonders why the hell she is acting like a pathetic pup*
hmph, enough of that, then....
but i would like a hug... and an update...

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From ANON - maxwell16 on May 02, 2005
this is very cool i love it but will Joe be in it more i like him please pritty please lol
keep it up and i will tell all my little friends about this story
love maxwell16
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From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on May 02, 2005
reading the little conversations before and after the story is as much fun as reading the story itself ...group hug hhaha... anyway love the story and glad yugi didn't have to eat a bunch of people ot stop the blood lust wouldn't fit with his character very well... anyway just wanted to say enjoying the story keep up the good work and thanks for not making us wait forever for updates sounds like you are having a great time writing the story! *hugs for the good writer!*
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on May 02, 2005
RD: pls KITG grant me permission to have full custody over Ruia I WILL KILL THAT BITCH FOR HURTING GALEN AND SPOUT MORE HENIOUS LIES GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR THAT DOES IM NOW OFFICIALLY PISSED OFF*the sky darkens as clouds form over head red lightening spews from the heavens in deathly fast pace her aura of power surges beyond the hights of normal range she shifts her form to become the arcangel of vengence her entire outfit wings and eyes blood red with her hate and desire the slew the worms who inflict harm upon those she cares for in a might sweep of her wings she plumets with the speed of a falling meteor then she grabs ruia by her hair and takes her down to her domain in the heart of pandemonium there she chains ruia to the walls then she grabs her most sinister necromancy spells and unleashes spells to torment her mind and soul and she slows down time for us and speeds it up for ruia (so in other words whats thousands of years to her is only a minute in RL time) then for 15,000 years she torments ruias mind and soul till she barely even recignizes herself then she burries her into one of her ritual graves and pours the powers of necromancy into the grave she resurrects ruia as her obediant mindless slave and orders her to remove her eyes and skin and all things but her bones and she wans ruia to scream every minute of it while ruia is acomplishing this task she uses a gem to call upon Lanys Tvyl the Daughter of Hate himself and together they fuse there powers together and curse ruia and her entire army of vampire hunters from now till dooms day they will know true pain and suffering so much so it will drive them mad and even when they are begging for someone anyone to kill them still they will never seek the solace of death they will remain in the limbo of pain forever trapped and unable to escape the fury of the archangel of vengence then she restores ruia body and orders her to become the infinite blood bank for all vampires everywere for her blood will not dissapate every time a vampire sucks her dry her blood is restored her life now remains in my hands and i will let her be fully consious of what is being done to her but she will have now will to fight for i broke that will and will see to it she knows the pain she put yugi and yami through* well KITG how was that torture session and im not done like i said i seek vengence i will NOT REST until my thirst for vengence is completely quenched well gtg now keep up the great work KITG and update soon I MUST HAVE THAT WENCH FOR MY OWN SO I CAN KILL HER hehe JA NE ^__^
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on May 02, 2005
Poor Galen...What happen next? Please update as soon as you can. Ja ne
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From Yamima on May 02, 2005
SWWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!

I DEMAND THAT YOU CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!

When you can..Teeheee

"I will protect your heart."

THAT DID IT, I'M IN AWE!
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