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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on April 15, 2005
    RD:no i was quite happy at taking a crack at that sick twisted fuck of a man thats for sure hehe and im happy to help ya KITG and do tell me bakura how did u like my lil torture session with pegasas and yugis uncle quite impressive huh guess it goes to show you piss me off u will regret it and now that yugis uncle is out of the way i can focus my attention on that GOD DAM STRAIGHT NUT CASE PREMADONA FRUITCAKE(hehe i got that straight A nut Case and premadona part from joey cuz he fit pegasas to a pin)*pulls out her whips drags pegasas over to her torture chamber then chains him to a wall then she pulls a rope that sends a horde of Scarabs down on him till hes nothing but bloody bones she then brings him back to life but the pain of his death before still fresh in his mind heart and soul then she puts a finger on his forhead and sets his brain on fire then brings him back to life with the pain still there then she rips off his hands and feet then then rips off his nose cuts off his mouth and then rips off his head then she brings back to life for one final time then she summons up her magic to slowly and painfully rip his mind and body to pieces and to keep repeating the process for a solid three hundred years then leaves him to her magics devices while the room is consumed by his screaming*ah i feel much better now that i took care of those two bastards hmph ive said before and ill say it again those dam haywired fuckterds think that yami is a monster AT LEAST HE DOSNT TAKE HIS ANGER AND FRUSTRATION OUT ON AN INNOCENT KID U TWISTED GOD DAM MOTHER FUCKING SCUM SUCKING DEMENTED FUCKERS (sry for the foul language) huh ok im done yelling now but pls KITG get yugi back he must come back he must cuz if he dosnt ill oh i dont know maybe ill just have some "playtime with bakura and marik and pegasas and darts and semi so for yami and seto cuz they were totally nasty to yugi but they still need to be taught a lesson and ill teach them that lesson myself so if u DONT want to see yourselves in MY torture chamber boys i highly recommend ya tell KITG to see to it that yugi comes back CUZ IM ON A TEETERING EDGE HERE BOYS huh gtg now keep up the great work KITG and update soon JA NE ^__^
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  • From ANON - fercoity on April 14, 2005
    WAIT A MINUTE !!!! GODDAMNIT!! I DID REVIEW YOU!!!!! *damn toaster for brains*

    luvs
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  • From ANON - Yana on April 14, 2005
    please save him Yami
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  • From Enma on April 14, 2005
    OH MY GOD!!! THAT IS SUCH A GREAT STORY!!! I hope to see more soon!! ^_^ I just totally love it!! ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - ... on April 13, 2005
    as i have said before... this is the first vampire yaoi i've read *tear* im so happy.... and i really like the little things you put in after and before each chapter1^^ they're so damn funny! (had me cracking up for evers) oh.... and thank you SO MUCH for torturing yugi's evil unworthy horrendous.... *trails out with calling him bad names and stuff* anyways..... thanks! ......oh..... and when are they gonna 'make it'? (lol) [can't wait for the part on getting yugi's soulk back, too!:)]
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  • From ANON - OwaranaimonoAite on April 13, 2005
    Once again, a wonderful chapter. But I've been noticing a lot of mistakes in both spelling and grammar. Those make your wonderful plot hard to read. It takes time for someone to get through them. Usually when I find a story like this I do not read it. Your plot has intrigued me, but I would reccomend that you find someone to beta your work. If you can't find someone, I am more than willing to do so for you. It's a great story, and it will only get better with some corrections.

    OwaranaimonoAite
    ChibiKenshinHimura@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - StormyHaven on April 13, 2005
    Good chapter! I'm on the edge of my seat now! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Hearth on April 13, 2005
    I like it so far, please continue

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  • From ANON - Sarah Costa on April 13, 2005
    OMG!!! What happen next? And Please don't hurt Yugi at least not in this fic anymore...Poor Yugi. Please update as soon as you can. ja ne
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  • From ANON - janet on April 13, 2005
    Oh my gosh how could you end there!!!!!!!!!!!
    evil cliff hangers!!! god knows why authors love cliff hangers!!!

    update soon please!! i beg you!!!

    bye
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on April 12, 2005
    RD: permit me to warn you all before i proceed this next few seconds will be filled to the brim with violence and gore and just plain nasty stuff so if u have a stomach that is not fit for this kinda of thing i highly suggest you not read my review i repeat "DO NOT READ MY REVIEW" thank you *grabs pegasas by the neck then yugis uncle then she chains them to the walls and grabs two metal barrels containing pure 100% raw acid and jugs it all down there throats burning there organs and what not to mush then grabs a pair of gack guns puts its at point blank range to there heads and fires the gun till they have bullest comming out of there ears and eyes then she grabs a finely sharpen dagger and skins off every single piece of flesh on there bodies then shoves it all down there throats then she rips out there eyes hair chops off there feet and hands chopps them up bones and all into tiny pieces then crams that also in there mouths then pulls out bothe there hearts and puts them in a container for later then she breaks open there skulls pulls out there brains and also keeps that in another container for later then finally launches devestating diseases to turn whats left of them into skeletons then she takes pieces of there broken skulls to use for controling there bodies to do her bidding then she rips out there souls and takes them there minds and hearts and fills them with all the hurt and suffering and pain they put yugi through but a thousan times more severe so there hearts spirit and minds would know what they put yugi through and made sure there bodies felt every last sting then she locked up there brains hearts and souls to be tortured with later*hmm that should do it for now and like i said everyone if u are not a gore lover then do not read what i just wrote i only gave those god dam scum sucking sobs of the worst sort what they so richly deserve to put yugi through that hell and they have the nerve to call YAMI a monster thats nothing compared to what those two did huh talk about greedy selfish dirty wrotten scumm sucking GOD DAM FUCKING PIG ASS SOBS sry i know harsh language but what can i tell ya im FUCKING PISSED NO ONE DOES THAT TO YUGI AND LIVES as u saw if u did read my review i wll SLAUGHTER any and all who dare lay a hand of harm upon that boy hehe hell i would make bakura and marik very proud with how violent i can get huh well KITG keep up the great work oh and boys here try this one on for size * hands them a blue glowing crystal the size of a water drop*just plop that down her throat and she will be back up good as new well update soon KITG gtg now JA NE ^__^
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  • From ANON - Shadowcat on April 12, 2005
    this is really good I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Akela on April 11, 2005
    I DEMAND MOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - StormyHaven on April 11, 2005
    Great chapter!! I can't wait to see what will happen next! I hope that you post soon. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - kenz on April 11, 2005
    I wish for more! please I love it !!!!!
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