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Reviews for Thin Line

By : Rroselavy
  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2011
    Awesome story. I'm just sorry I don't have anything useful to say right now, but it was really good. I'll be reading your others now.
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  • From Animom57 on March 12, 2010
    ok so ... you've said that this was your first story.

    And you know? it's true that it's WAFFy and swoony and kinda girly, but it's also sweet and well-enough written that I STAYED WITH IT for all 16 chapters. ~ That definitely counts for something, and I look forward to seeing how your work progresses. :)
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  • From GudenMulle on September 17, 2009
    This was great!!
    Poor, poor Jou! Though, I was wondering why he didn't 'just' steal some food?
    Mokuba was fantastic, and Kaiba's reactions to his own emotions were great.
    Love Jou, but that, I always do XD
    Thank you so so much for the fic!
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  • From ANON - Luca on December 29, 2005
    Damn. That was lovely.

    So well done, you made me cry on three separate occasions in the fic.
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  • From ANON - Shinia on November 20, 2005
    That fic was just.... wow! I HATE and LOATHE when fics are about rape and all that stuff but... that one was the most beautiful and cute story I ever seen! I wasn't able to stop reading even with the rape parts, and that's not me at all. Usually, I'm just not able to endure it, too much pain I presume! Anyway, you really are a awesome author and I hope that you will continue your good work!

    Shinia X3

    PS: Sorry if you see some mistakes, I'm French! ^_^ But I'm almost bilingual! (almost...)
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  • From ANON - freewater on November 15, 2005
    I should be sleeping right now but your story kept me awake, excellent work on this. Pepe, sounds so cute. And they're getting married. I love angsty stories like this and you kept the angst up all the way through. Wonderful
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on August 27, 2005
    OMG!!! that is the most happiest ending I have read for a while!!! but it was full of twists and turns tso that byou couldn't guess which way it went...
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  • From ANON - Jodine16 (not logged in) on August 22, 2005
    My expressions throughout this fic:
    O.O

    O.o

    ^^

    ^o^

    :'(

    ^^

    O.O

    BEAUTIFUL!!!! I LOVED IT!! WELL DONE!!!!
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  • From nocturne on August 22, 2005
    oh, this story was fabulous! so sweet. ^^
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on August 09, 2005
    Gomen nasai; I know you wrote this a while ago but I have just recently delved into the yaoi world of Yugioh and I must say this story was beyond fabulous...this was well-written, sensual, and just fantastic...it is probably one of the best J/S yaoi I have read!!!....catti
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  • From ANON - zombiedarkelf18 on June 24, 2005
    What a great story i'm glad everything worked out in the end.
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  • From ANON - kuraiseiryuu on May 28, 2005
    that was the most beautiful and coolest yaoi story i have ever read keep on writing you rock
    i am in love with this story
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  • From smalvina on May 27, 2005
    sweet story.
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  • From ANON - Nocturne22 on May 06, 2005
    Whoa. You've given Jou a brand new and totally out there past. A little grittier than what I normally like and kinda cliche',but I still really liked it!
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  • From ANON - kura on May 06, 2005
    that was just *sobs* wonderful!
    i adored this fic. You write beautifully.
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