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Reviews for Thin Line

By : Rroselavy
  • From ANON - Lizzy on May 04, 2005
    Great story, great plot, great pairing!

    You did a really amazing job with this, and I'm glad I read it. I hope to see more from you!
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  • From ANON - Kerurie-dono on May 02, 2005
    Awww that was wonderful! I loved every second of it! Your writting style is wonderful and i loved the concept you used! You should write a follow up to this story! Have the wedding or after they are married! It would be just so kawaii! ^__^ Think about it okay?

    JA NE!

    ~Kerurie
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  • From ANON - Tani Barton on May 02, 2005
    I think I love you for writing this. Seriously. Reading this story was the best thing about my entire day yesterday (not that that's saying much considering the day I'd been having), and it really helped to cheer me up. I particularly liked your realistic portrayals, not just of the abuse and such, but of the relationship itself by not making either one of them into a clear dom or sub. They're really not like that, and it was very refreshing to see that you didn't fall into that trap. ^-^ And beyond that I don't really have anything constructive to say. I just really liked the story. So thank you for writing it!
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  • From ANON - Adam on May 01, 2005
    SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!! That ending screams, no demands that you make a sequal. You have to for the sake of my sanity, your writing style is one of the best I have read and I wanna see a sequal to it!!!! PLEASE MAKE A SEQUAL!!!!!

    ~!~Adam~!~
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  • From ANON - Sparx539 on April 30, 2005
    Holy. Crap. This was seriously, one of the best Seto/Jou fics I've read. It goes right up there with some of the best fics I've ever read. Your writing is amazing, the way you can write emotion and twist storylines around. Everything was incredibly realistic too, unlike many fics out there. I just hope you continue to write like this; you have amazing potential. All I can leave you with is that I'm sorry to see this end, but it made my really horrible week so much better. Please, write more!
    -Sparx539
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  • From ANON - DarkRoseBlood on April 23, 2005
    Ooh, that was an awesome story! Full of ups and downs, angst and love. Extremely enjoyable read. Loved it!
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  • From ANON - maggiemay on April 22, 2005
    Very very well told story. Thank you for the great read.

    Maggiemay
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  • From ANON - Nite Nite *not logged in* on April 22, 2005
    *cries* OMG THIS WAS WONDERFUL! *tackles Seto and Joey* YOU TWO ARE SO FREAKIN CUTE TOGETHER! Now...all I need is kids from you two and I'll die happy!

    Joey: *blushes* Ummm Nite..

    NN: Ah hell, Seto has all that techonolgy I'm sure you he can think of something!

    Seto: *grins and strokes Joey's ass*

    Joey: HEY HEY! *Smirks* You wanna piece?

    Seto: *growls playfully* HELL NO! I WANT THE WHOLE THING! *tackles Joey*

    NN: ^_^ I must say your story got a lot of emotion out of me, which is rare for stories to do, congrads on that! Lol I keep yellin at Seto and then he would do something nice and I'd be like awww...ok...never mind..all if forgiven...same way with Joey. I like who you put Duke into this and the things with Joey's family, amazing, wonderful. Seto was nicely potrayed and I like how you did his life as well. I enjoyed reading your story very much and...hey...hey! His leg is not suppose to bend that way! *Sees the glares and goes back to trypin* umm...anyway...I loved Joey's atttitude, at some things I was like yes, that is so Joey. Also for a second I thought Seto said something like No silly that's not what I want...I nearly freaked out in laughter...I can picture Seto sayin something like that...and it cracks me up! >< Once again nice job with this!
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  • From ANON - ... on April 22, 2005
    i almost started crying right now.... that was such a good story!!!! *wails* the ending was so kawaii!!!!! ..... *stops a second and gets a thoughtful expression on her face* now if only i could convince some of my friends to do that......... oh yah! im writing a review! *snaps out of daydream* anyway.... good one & keep 'em coming (or cumming in some instances^^) lol! bye bye!
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  • From ANON - kaibasbabe on April 21, 2005
    when i started reading the story i just teared up b/c of joey, while i read i pictured him in that situation, poor guy. but i am glad that he is happy now that he will be mr. jou kaiba. love your work
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  • From ANON - Ivy on April 21, 2005
    This story is just incredible, I loved every single part of it. I wanted to read the whole thing right away but as the chapters slipped away I didn't want them to end.

    You told us a new story of Jou's life in away that works, not an easy thing to do I might add. Many have tried only a handful of people have ever done it successfully.

    My favorite part was the visit with Jou's grandfather, I knew it was coming and I really wanted Jou to be with him, but the way you wrote it was just as satisfying. It touched a special part of my own heart, (I know that feeling of loss) It had me in tears..

    I don't think I have read anything that has brought tears to my eyes like this since (freewater's An Innocent Joke... Read it?....DO it's here on Aff.net it's awesome the best fan-fiction story I have ever read in any fandom)

    I Hope to see more of your work and hopefully a sequel. I'm adding this to my own list of REC fanfiction.
    Thanks, ~IVY~
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  • From ANON - Terry on April 21, 2005
    Damnit! I'm swooning! What have you done with your incredible writing skills. That was very sweet and sappy, but good. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Lee on April 21, 2005
    Wonderful story. Sweet and bitter, just like a great dark chocolate. Characters seemed slightly off, but the plot was tops. I loved the Otogi bashing even if I do like the character.
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  • From ANON - Kodachi on April 20, 2005
    That was one of the most beautiful and perfect stories i had read.... It was so good. I was so enraptured in the story. I can't wait to read more of your stories later on.

    Oh, by the way, just out of curiosity, chapter 3 seemed to be cut off at the beginning and i was wondering if that was intentional. It felt like something was missing from the begining of that chapter. If it isn't, well, never mind. But I do hate to miss out any part of this story.
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  • From ANON - koalared on April 20, 2005
    WOW! What an emotional ride. The right amount of angst and love. Great job. Thankyou.
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