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Reviews for Shower me with your Love

By : nickylein
  • From on July 21, 2005
    Me once again, Nicky. I was right about you... You're a very good writer. i kept wondering if someone was going to walk in on the couple though... That would have been very close to hell for both of them. It is funny when you think about the fact that everything seems to make sense when you leave Logic out of it... Even though it doesn't... Uh, you wrote it so I bet you get what I mean. Well... Let's see if you have any more of these fics...Hmm. Awesome story, once more, definately worthy of being on my best author list. See ya round.
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  • From ANON - Rienna Hawkes on June 18, 2005
    I loved it! The scene where Jou asks Honda's advice is great; I laughed my ass off. Perfect. Also, I loved the whole thing with the soap--who would have thought Jou smelled like apples? It was hot and well written, I thouroughly enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - Lightning Sage on June 13, 2005
    I liked this. It was short, but well-written and completely understandable and cohesive. I liked how you had Jou circle around back to that whole 'sex-before-date' thing at the end. That was pretty neat.

    By the way, I thought that was very mature of you to note that what happened in this story is not the way the world works. Most authors neglect to mention that, and after reading hundreds, if not thousands of fics where two of the characters get together and have sex rather quickly, it makes the whole sex-right-away thing seem realistic. Thank you for pointing out that these fics do NOT portray the real world, because I am sure that there are some people who do not realize this (especially if there are underage kids on this site [which there probably are] who were never taught this).

    Overall, awesome job! *two thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - satanic mechanic on May 22, 2005
    Oh yeah...I've been drifting away from the yugioh fandom (I miss it I do...) Anyway I stumbled upon this and I am so glad! Really cute premise, and the lemon...hot. And I don't even read that many lemons, nevermind enjoy them, but this one was just perfect. Good job! Mmm...I miss my Seto/Jou. *sigh*
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  • From Ykarzel on May 18, 2005
    ^____^ Heeheheee. Not my favorite - that one hasn't been released yet - but i still always love it. I'm not around this site very often so it took me a while to come see it. But as always, your writing makes my stomach do that little twisty thing. lovies always kitten
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  • From ANON - :-) on May 15, 2005
    Ha...i get it...have sex frist and then go out...i liked this story..very well written too.
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on May 13, 2005
    aww...seto x joey lemon!!!! This was really good. I think i remember reviewing something of yours before...I think. It's been a while since I've had a chance to read anything thanks to work and doc's appts. *sigh* Very well done
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  • From ANON - Maggiemay on May 13, 2005
    Thank you for the wonderful read.

    Maggiemay
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  • From ANON - Jessica on May 12, 2005
    LOVE IT! Seto and Jou (Joey) are so HOT!
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on May 12, 2005
    Wonderful story hun..I liked the warning...though I doubt 'kids' would of heard of this site anyway..lol
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  • From ANON - rroselavy on May 12, 2005
    HOT HOT HOT!
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  • From ANON - kaibasbabe on April 24, 2005
    great story, damn if i had a shower scene like that i would die happy
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 23, 2005
    That was great! I like how Jou ran to Honda, babbled, confused the hell out of him, and then Jou ran off
    (like the hard headed lovable dork he is) to find Seto. I laughed really hard when Jou said 'Wanna share my soap?' because I could just imagine the way he might have said it- it cracked me up. ^___^ -Shadow Wings
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  • From ANON - icestar on April 21, 2005
    heh, amusing. ^_^ good choice jou!

    anyway, nice story. ^_^ imagine if honda actually figured it out :sniggers:
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  • From ANON - Lee on April 21, 2005
    The moment that I read Honda's statement of disbelief of having sex first, I knew what was going to happen between Jou and Kaiba. I'm so happy that you didn't disappoint. I loved this story. Not the best lemon ever written, but it certainly hit the spot. Good luck with the rest of your writing.
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