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By : LadyLaran
  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on June 30, 2005
    lmao Oh wow! I loved it and can't wait till you update! I loved it completely! I can't wait to see what you are planning next! lmao Oh the sweetness of torture! lol Great chappie and please update soon! Ja ne! ^_______________________^
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  • From ANON - Kat1132 on June 30, 2005
    Bringing Isis in on the plan and making her Tea's lover was a wonderful idea. I would have mentioned it last time, only I forgot. I can't wait for your next update. Thanks for getting this one up so quick. I'm really enjoying Sachi's torture!! Great chapter! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on June 29, 2005
    It is good to see an update on this story....I am thoroughly enjoying it and cannot wait to see what happens next...Your right about the egg rolls and muses now Im hungry for chinese food...waaaa....catti
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on June 29, 2005
    [blink blink] Tea and Isis? I don't think I've seen anyone else do that pairing. Sounds interesting.

    I'm glad you listened to the reviewer and adjusted the story line. Having the characters make contingency plans and not just throw the two together but let them try to develop their relationship on their own shows real depth. And thanks fot not giving away what they're plotting, it keeps me on the edge of my seat :-D.
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on June 29, 2005
    you know damn well I loved it!!!!!! And I'm still rolling from that chapter title!

    Drac and the assembly
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 29, 2005
    suprisingly i like tea in your story and normally i don't. good job on that character development! hope to see more!
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  • From ANON - Sansi on June 29, 2005
    My heart goes out to Yami and Yugi! They both don't get what they want. Love is horrible when your love doesn'T know you exist!
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  • From ANON - OwaranaimonoAite on June 29, 2005
    Excellent story! I can't wait for it to be finished, or the next chapter to come out! Some great ideas, opinions and insights! I can't wait for the next chapter and what they all plan to do! Lovely story!

    I'd also love to be on the update list for this fic. My e-mail is ChibiKenshinHimura@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Maggiemay on June 29, 2005
    Thank you for updating. I enjoyed it very much. I can't wait for more. The only request I have...although I try not to make requests...can you show more of how YAMI is feeling. Right now we only have supposition and the bitch...but...well...I would love to know what yami is thinking and feeling...

    Maggiemay
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on June 29, 2005
    Heya, great updates and thanks for the heads up email. I guess my only comment besides "Loved it" would be that very early in this chapter, when Tea arrives, you had her repeat the phrase "keep you waiting too long" like three or four times... as much as I'm enjoying giving your characterization of her a chance, that just brought to mind the stereotypical annoying Tea we all know and loathe. Just trying to help! Anyway, ja ne, update again soon please!
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  • From ANON - AngelViper9 on June 29, 2005
    Poor Yugi!!!!!!
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  • From Kugatsu on June 29, 2005
    ahhh! I wanna know what happend! Yami needs to be beaten!
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on June 29, 2005
    An intellgent plot! Way to go, Laran! My hat's off to your muses and to you...this is probably the most realistic story where people are trying to get people together that I have ever seen. Excellent writitng, and well paced. I loved how real and dynamic you made the conversation. Please update when you can!
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  • From ANON - Kat1132 on June 29, 2005
    I love this story. I'm also getting into Unbreak My Heart but I haven't finished it yet. I will tomorrow though. I really hope you meant it when you said your muses were working overtime. I hope that you can get the next chapter out really soon, before I have to leave on the first of July. But don't stress out on my part. If there isn't an update by then, I'll just wait patiently for when I get back to my computer to read it.

    On to the actual review:
    Again, I love this story. I can't wait to see what you plan to do to Yami to get him to notice Yugi. I hope he feels really guilty for overlooking what was there all along. I can't wait for your update. Please make it soon!
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  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on June 29, 2005
    Wow this is something I can enjoy reading. Please update soon this is way to good to be stopped! Great story and chapter! Can't wait to see you chase away that damn Shachi what's her name. And I'd loved to be informed of when you update! ^^ Ja ne! ^____________________^
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