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Reviews for Invisible Me

By : LadyLaran
  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on May 31, 2005
    Yes! Now that they have the problem solved, they can get the solution. The only flaw I can find is the phrase 'pull the pharaoh's head out of his ass'. Apt as it may be, it is kind of overused. Other than that, great chapter and I can't wait for the update!
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on May 31, 2005
    Okay....that was sad, poor Yugi..its a great story update soon..catti
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on May 25, 2005
    *whistles* I have to agree! *ponders on Tea's outburst. Hm, looks like someone've been spending too much time with Bakura and Marik! Pls throw Marik and Malik in this! I'm certain that Marik and Malik might have some ideas on how to torture Sachi!
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  • From ANON - Kitsune Spyk on May 24, 2005
    this is a really good story. i like it i can actually see the pain yugi is in i hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - MARMangaFan on May 24, 2005
    I am a newbie to both anime/manga fanfic and to writing reviews, so please excuse my writing. I would like to thank you for sharing your story and encourage you to continue it. I really enjoy your writing and the story line; it has really drawn me in. I like the use of Yugi's drawings to show his state of mind. I also like your depiction of Tea -- she is not the most exciting of characters, but most YuGiOh fanfics I have read are quite unkind to her. One thing you might address -- how has Yugi been able to keep his thoughts/feelings secret from Yami? Is he simply repressing them or is it that Yami has been neglecting the link? I hope you write more soon -- at this point I want to kick Yami for his treatment of Yugi -- I'm looking forward to seeing his POV and learning why he is so lost.

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  • From Reyn on May 24, 2005
    Poor Yugi! wah!

    Hey, if you have a mailing list going around for this story, can I be put on it? I like to try to keep up with the stories I like here on aff.net
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  • From ANON - Arainaina on May 23, 2005
    Go Tea, she really kicked butt out there. I sure hope the others are able to help Yugi and like bakura said get Yami's head out of his ass. I so can not believe Yami's behavior around Yugi. Poor Yugi. *sniffs* Anyway, very good I really liked and I hope you update soon for this is very good and exciting that I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Cody Thomas on May 23, 2005
    Oh this is such a cool story, please update ASAP. This just SCREAMS dramatic angst which I just so happen to love, and there is the promise of shounen ai/yaoi in the future, which I am a total slave for. I avidly await an update! More more more!
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  • From ANON - MinuetLove on May 22, 2005
    Fantastic beginning! The characters are always fun, but the details you employ really help the reader see them! Keep up the great work, I hope to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on May 22, 2005
    Still going great!! I think you got my muse going *LOL*..or at least out of the damned pool! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Cherazz on May 21, 2005
    Great chapter and way to go Tea! Put that bitch in her place! Lol:P And wake up Yami! *slaps him*
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  • From ANON - catti-dono on May 21, 2005
    That was quite nice....it is well written....you can really feel Yugi's pain....I like how you have the other hikaris and yamis actually helping Yugi out....hope to see another update really soon....catti
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on May 21, 2005
    Oh wow, that was great! I especially love how you've written Tea. I've never understood why so many people want to bash her in their stories; seeing her being supportive of my favorite couple and in such a spirited way is a real treat. Hehe, personally, I would have slapped Sachi's face the moment the bitch opened her mouth in the first chapter (nice way to establish the bad guy btw). 'Course that could just be because I love reading so much. Being a geek rocks. This chapter was definatly worth waiting for and I can't wait for the next.
    -vampslyr
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on May 21, 2005
    Beautiful, hun, as I said. Absolutely loved it.
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on May 21, 2005
    Well,this is interesting. I'm glad you finally updated, and I am SO pleased with the charaterizations. I hope the muses keep their end up!

    Update when you can please!
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