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Reviews for The Rain Shadow Vacation

By : YamiJounochi
  • From ANON - ... on June 23, 2005
    still funny as hell ^^.........well, i can't wait for the next chappy.........or a nice, juicy lemon^.~ .........*hugs you* i liked how you put in that part at the end about them being so overcome with hunger/disgust, that they didn't notice a grocery store ^^.....it was awesome^^..........i can't wait for your next update^^........ stay healthy and don't overexert your awesome imagination (for anything other than your ficcys at least ^.~)............ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Angel Kawaii on June 06, 2005
    lmao This is some funny shit! I like it a lot! I can't wait to see the future chapters! Hopefully they'll be funny and I'll be looking forward to the 'group bang' if I recall the name right...ah well please update soon!! Ja ne!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Zoe on June 03, 2005
    Awww, that sucks (about the grocery store). XD Poor little yaoi slave bois. ^^; This is very good, I like it much! *dances*
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  • From Sisco on May 30, 2005
    *busts a gut* I must admit I wasn't expecting that last part about the coffee. However, I was half expecting that jello thing. I've had that happen to me before. Ew!!! But not with the fruit salad...yet. Oo; I hope it never happens. I can't wait for the next update! WooT!!
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  • From Kugatsu on May 30, 2005
    finished reading, tips for you!

    remember to seperate dialogue! you don't always have to put he said this person said, but we need to know who says what! ^w^ me likey! it's funny! however, I warn you against trying to include everyone all the time, it thins out chracterization and plot. do some focusing!
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  • From Kugatsu on May 30, 2005
    don't ask questions, just do it! if people flame you , they suck! you have creative control my friend! write on!
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  • From ANON - ... on May 13, 2005
    *starts to giggle* that was cool *has to put fist in mouth to keep from guffawing* i really liked the part where ryou threatened bakura with no sex for three months! *can't hold it in any longer, so starts rolling on the ground laughing* this is so awesome so far! is something going to happen at the diner? are they actually going to get to eat?! will the diner be out of.... god forbid..... PIE?! *nearly faints from the thought of that happening* anyways..... im going to definately keep tabs of this story so keep 'em coming, 'kay? if i have any ideas for you i'll let you know, too. thanks.....bye
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  • From ANON - Bakura on May 04, 2005
    Write more Ra Damnit!!
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  • From ANON - yellow bastard on May 03, 2005
    glad you liked my suggestion.
    Today I had the worst day: I had to run from the police because of some stupid revolutionary student's movement at college. I almost DIED (I'm exaggerating) with those bombs that make you cry (I don't know the word in English, sorry). I just wanted to get home and read some light, funny, nice fanfiction.
    I was glad you updated and I hope to read more soon. I mean, what can possibly come out from a situation like the one depictured in your story: chaos and lots of fun!


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  • From ANON - Yukiko_xAkuma on May 03, 2005
    i think you should use honda and otogi. i like them better oh and the first chapter is good keep going

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  • From ANON - Ghonchi (not logged in) on April 28, 2005
    could turn out good...really good...
    why not make them have a big nice gang bang? you are the author so you are god-like
    nah, no need to use first name
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  • From ANON - kadhal on April 28, 2005
    dat was really gud
    and u can go ahead and use otogi's and honda's first names....
    write more!!!
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  • From ANON - J.S. on April 28, 2005
    yea i really like it so far
    and r honda+otogi and yu-gi+yami da only couples already in a relationship?
    update soon
    id love 2 read more
    ;)
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  • From ANON - yellow bastard on April 27, 2005
    hey,

    I don't really know if you should use Honda's and Otogi's first names. Personally I think you should stick to their last names because they are... less horrible. But of course there's the issue of making the story believable. Evidently a couple wouldn't call each other by their last names. That's not the sweetest thing. So, in conclusion, use their first names when they interact with each other only.

    I've liked the story so far, though this chapter was just an introduction. I really want to read more. I don't want to wait until you get 10 reviews! Update asap! I think that when you develop this story a bit more, you'll get more reviews.

    Bye
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  • From ANON - Akela on April 26, 2005
    Ha! that was fun, do s'more!
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