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Reviews for Full Moon Lover

By : Yamima

From ANON - madmaggie on May 11, 2005
this story doesn't have aa really good plot. it has basically no flow in it. for one thing the first chapter was a little weird it as like you didn't know how to start the stor so yo just made the werewolf to coincidentally go up to yugi and do that? try startng out a story by find the beginning, rising action, climax, lowering action and the resolution. remember, resolution doesn't alway have to be happy. so try some rough drafts before you actually start writing. hope you at least try one of these suggestions so you won't have such a hard time writing the next.
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From ANON - Akela on May 07, 2005
this story is rather odd....
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From ANON - Zafiro carrillo on May 07, 2005
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!! more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
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more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
well hope to ess you soon bye bye
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on May 03, 2005
Oh god...Yami will not kill Yugi? Right?!?! Please update soon. Ja ne
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From ANON - Sarah Costa on May 02, 2005
So seto is a werewolf too...interesting...what happen next? Please update soon. Ja ne
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From ANON - Zafiro carrillo on May 02, 2005
hope you up-dated soon
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