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By : Mitmiya
  • From ANON - Maggiemay on May 23, 2005
    Hi...I thought I reviewed this earlier...but Meh! I am so sorry. I love your idea. It is a good read. Good journey home...
    Oh my name...Maggie is my name...and I may or maynot depending on my mood..lol.

    Keep up the good work.

    Maggiemay
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  • From ANON - nicky on May 23, 2005
    okay...
    1) i liked the chapter, it was short ok, but I like Jou climbing trees ^_^ and Seto thinks about him and knows him, yay!
    2) my username doesn't mean anything, actually. It's just a name. It's not even mine, lol... I use it for some of my email accounts, so my real identity remains hidden. yeah, mysterious me, hehe
    3) I'll think about sending you an email with ideas... but I can't promise anything yet, because I have quite a lot to do this week. let's see.
    I can promise though to keep reading this fic! It has a lot of potential...

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  • From ANON - vapidbreath on May 23, 2005
    Very original. It is often hard to write a story with a plot that hasn't been done before. Yes, your chapters are short, but they end well and don't leave the reader hanging on. I'm not saying that it doesn't have suspense. The readers still want to know what will happen next with Joey, if he'll find the camera, and Kaiba's reactions to what he'll see. So, good job and good luck on your fic.

    BTW: My screen name is supposed to mean lifeless breath. Breath is often a metaphor for life and vapid is defined as without life. I love contradictions,oxymorons, and conundrums. I actually use the word wrong because it doesn't exactly mean death as much as it does dull or without zeal. However, no one really needs to all that, so I just keep it as Vapidbreath. If you could, please e-mail me when you update. Thank you. Check out my stories please!
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  • From ANON - J.S. on May 23, 2005
    i really like dis fic and think da idea is kl and original
    update soon id love 2 read more
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  • From Lennith on May 23, 2005
    Hurray, you updated! *throws confetti and cues the band* Nothing wrong with keeping chapters short! If it helps you keep the fic moving, then by all means go with it! Uwaaa, oh how I do love your story! I like that you're avoiding most of the cliches in the SetoJou fandom... Jou is still confused about his own orientation and Seto's interest is only just being piqued. It's just so refreshing, compared to the usual both of them already wanting to put on their birthday suits and do the naughty-dance. Mmmhmm, keep up the good work, I'll be cheering for you! Of course Jou will still manage to make Seto fall in love with him, he's Jou! Seto'd have to be rather stubborn and asexual not to get the warm fuzzies about him eventually~! Oh, and your username meaning request (thinks it's a fun idea) Lennith is the lead character for the Enix game "Valkyrie Profile," my absolute favorite game! She's basically a collector of human souls to train and send human souls to fight as soldiers for Valhalla. God it's a good game, and slashy too!
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  • From mistryl on May 23, 2005
    So many naughty things Seto can do, hehheh, anyways, this is turning out great.

    Anyways, for my name. I started as a Kaiba/Jou fan, until I discovered the Jou/Mokie pairing, I became addicted to it. So all my stories turned into either a battle between the two brothers for Jou, or just had a lot of Mokie.

    Of course I've expanded into other pairings and fandoms since then. My most recent obsession? Tyson/Ray from beyblade. Of course I haven't left my Seto/Jonouchi/Mokuba triangles.
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  • From ANON - icestar on May 23, 2005
    username - me an my friend took 'hawkbrother' names after a long stint of lackey... -.-

    as for this chapter, its very nice. just be careful about staying in tense kay?

    good job nonetheless. ^_^ :thumbs up:
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  • From ANON - Amaya on May 23, 2005
    Aaaw, I don't think I could hate you even if I wanted to ^.^ You bring me Kaiba/Jou goodness, after all! And although the chapter was short....*glomp* ^.~
    So uhm... my username means "nightrain" and comes from Egypt as far as I know. And me loves Egypt, so... my best friend more or less picked it out for me.
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  • From ANON - Jessica on May 23, 2005
    Best of luck going back home! Though the chapter was short, it was still very cute...keep at it!...btw, are you going to update your other fanfic, "What You See Isn't Yours", soon or are you working on one at time because that story is original and has me captivated to no end! I love Jou's sister but I love Jou even more! I'm really rooting for our fave couple!
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  • From ANON - celeste on May 23, 2005
    very good,it's perfectly origonal.(my spelling sucks ass,sorry)if i could,i would give you a medal!oh,and do please try to put kaiba-boy into more confusion with his emotions. (i'm sorry,the nickname stuck to my tounge when pegasus said it, ^_^) but i think jou will have some competition,after all.how's he gonna compete with the hugs stick shoved up kaiba-boy's ass!XD gomen gomen,lol.anyway i hope you continue the chapters!
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  • From ANON - Celestial Angel on May 23, 2005
    kewl!! I like it. alot. its funny, and cute. update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2005
    Wow, great, great idea you've got going here and, thankfully, the writing skills to back it up. You caused a lot of wondering with the Seta and Jou thing at the school after Seto started getting all suspicious about it, and it was nice in this chapter to get a look into both of their minds in regard to each other. Since you asked about our names, Rache Dracon is actually the name of the first character I ever role played with, and she's basically my original character, the one who means the most no matter how many other characters I use in role plays. Great chapter, even though it was short, and I can't wait to find out what happens next! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Jessica on May 12, 2005
    Keep it coming! I definitely want to see how this voyeurism develops...hehehehe...
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  • From ANON - Terry on May 08, 2005
    GREAT PLOT IDEA! I can't wait to see where this goes!
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  • From ANON - Hezzer on May 08, 2005
    It's a really interesting sounding fic....Hmmm, why is the teacher there?! Update soon!
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