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Reviews for Heartbreak

By : mercynre
  • From ANON - Rock\'n Cherry Blossom 612 on October 14, 2005
    OMFG!!!!!Seto USED HIM!!! hope u rite more soon^-^
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  • From Saka on June 23, 2005
    *sniffs* Oh wow how sad. Definatly beautiful though. I really love the ending when Seto 'n Mokuba were together. Just such a sad fic. But then again, those are usually the coolest. Great job, I really loved it!!
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  • From ANON - Kaiyori on June 23, 2005
    Oh wow...This story was just...wow...So tragic!

    My only criticism is that the whole story felt a bit rushed, the lemon scene, as well as everything else....I guess slow down is what i'm trying to say ^__^

    All in all, I love the basis for the story, and you're a very detailed writer!
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  • From FuKouHei on June 21, 2005
    dude. you killed mokuba.you.killed.mokuba.you.......killled.......MOKUBA! OMG! HOW COULD YOU KILL MOKUBA! *cries* DON'T WORRY MOKIE I'M COMING FOR YOU! *grabs a knife and tries to cut her wrist too. throws down the knife* damn plastic knife. it looked so real.
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  • From ANON - Vapidbreath on June 02, 2005
    Well, I don't read many SetoxMokuba stories because I just don't like Mokuba. I've only read two or three, but I like your story because it portrayed Mokuba as the young boy still learning about his body and sex that he is. I hate when authors make him a little nympho who knows more about sex than his hot brother. Anywho, what I'm saying is that I enjoyed your fic and would like to know if you plan on adding to it or leaving it as is. Good job and good luck on future fics.

    BTW, sorry about your cat. I hope you'll be okay.
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  • From ANON - DoT on May 29, 2005
    Continue!!!

    Dude, that was creepy at the beginning, you mentioned Suicide Club... which I just finished watching, like 6 minutes ago.

    When the girl's boyfriend jumped off the building, and the girl was just walking away... I saw Yami Yugi on a shop window, and I shouted Atemu... my family stared at me like "What the fuck? Somebody just bloodily jumped off a building and you and more interested in somebody from an anime that you are obsessed with?!"
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  • From Saka on May 21, 2005
    Oh wow... *mischievious smirk* Great story. Ok ya have gotta update this story. Really great writtin! *smirks again*
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  • From PasuterEnogu on May 11, 2005
    Wow, I really enjoyed the story so far. Very intresting in the events. I will be looking foward for the upcoming chapters.
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