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Reviews for Kimi ga Iru

By : Kugatsu

From YamiKuro on April 09, 2009
This is a drive-by review, since i plan to keep reading the rest.

Mariku carving his name is Yugi's chest would have kicked ass.

Kuro
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From nikki7716 on February 19, 2008
Okay, prepare yourself for the longest review of your life. I keep meaning to write this and just haven�t been able to figure out exactly what I want to say. Plus I wanted to wait until I had reread the kimi ga iru universe.

Alright, I am absolutely in love with these stories, I cannot express to you how much I have enjoyed reading these. I have never read a fanfic that has come close to doing what these have for me. How can I tell you enough how amazing of a writer you are? You made me feel for the characters in a way I have never done in a story before. After reading one I will find myself thinking about it for the rest of the day. I even find myself analyzing why characters did what they did, I get angry when I read what a character has done as if they really did it! lol

Now, I swear to you I am not insane nor some craze obsessed fan, even if this review sounds so. You have just done an astounding job. I was so upset and angry after I finished reading make me new. I don�t know why but I just got so angry about dartz and seto cheating on bakura and ryou. i couldn�t believe they would do that after they both had felt what it felt like to get cheated on. Plus it was bakura and ryou! how could you ever want anyone else. I felt so terrible�when got dartz I smiled like a crazed loon forever cause I was so happy he finally had someone. And then when dartz started coming over less and less it just killed me and the fact that ryou was just in such a deep denial about it. bakura and ryou�s relationship in this story is just so wonderful in its complications and mysteries. I wanted so bad for them to be together until they found others and found it so interesting and crazy when ryou wanted to be with him during summer time magic. The fact that he also loved bakura...whew. that was intense.

I�m sorry if this is rambling. I enjoy when people ramble in my reviews so I�m hoping you do too. :D

Although each of the couples had their problems I was happy to see that marik and yugi stayed together. They made such a wonderful couple, it was terrible what yugi had to go through and I have never hated yami more in a story. when they started forgiving him I was like �no! he�s an asshole!� but I�m glad it worked out enough. But that you didn�t make it like everything was okay because after something like that it would never be okay which worked so nicely.

It astounds me that you didn�t have the entire series planned out in advance as they all seem to go seamlessly hand in hand.

Malik and otogi together is just pure sunshine. I adore it. I adore the characterizations and the lemons between them and every single pairing are so hot. many times when random lemons come to my mind while I am daydreaming they are from your stories. Like the first time malik and otogi are together, ryou and dartz in the bathroom, ryou giving bakura head in the alley way, shadi and rishid together the first time, bakura and seto in the living room the first night advances are made, and many many more. I love love love your lemons!

I couldn�t believe that you made me enjoy to the extent that I did your weevil/rex and shadi/rishid ones. both are pairings that I never had even the slightest of interests in reading and yet both ended up being some of my favorite stories. They were written SOOOO well and were able to give justice to why they acted the way they did. I am interested to see a hot Haga. lol. I also adored the sexual tension in lion of Egypt. It made when they finally did get together that much more fantastic.

I also cannot believe how much you have written for this. I am studying in London this semester so I printed off all of the kimi ga iru stories so I could read them while traveling and it was about 500 pages in size 6 font with no margins! But I have enjoyed so much having them to read!

I am so impressed by the fact that you were able to make every pairing work so nicely and be believable. I never believed or thought of peg and raph together but I loved it. you also had pairings that I already loved such as seto and bakura. Which you made a wonderful relationship for. Before it ended. : ( . ryou and dartz together is another I have always loved and malik and otogi. Heck, all of them are my favorites now that I have read your stories!

There is not a bad word I can say about your stories, even if I became terribly sad or depressed when relationships ended or hearts were broken it just made your story that much more endearing and memorable to me. I am completely dumbfounded to the fact that you didn�t have hundreds of reviews for each of your stories. I find stories out there with the craziest summaries that will have hundreds upon hundreds of reviews that are about joey being an alien or yami being pregnant and then ones like yours which are so beautiful and real that can have less.

I know that its been forever since you wrote these stories, I�m not even sure if you check your email for reviews anymore, but if you do get this, I just wanted you to know how I love them so! And how you have been able to make me laugh, cry, become pissed off and go crazy analyzing. I won�t go in to all of that I have done or this review would be REALLY long! I want so badly to find out what happens between ryou and bakura and everyone else. I hope that someday you will get the encouragement or drive to finish Make Me New. I would be eternally grateful and beyond ecstatic.

if you have the time I would love to hear if there is the slightest chance you would ever finish, if there isn�t then that�s okay too, I�d just like to know so I don�t check for updates all the time. Lol. : ) my email is nlharpel@bsu.edu

well I hope this long review hasn�t made you think I�m a nutter or anything. : )

-nikki

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From nikki7716 on November 21, 2007
loved loved loved this story! I just couldn't stop reading it!

saddest thing EVER with Bakura's reaction to Ryou saying he loved him and then him holding back tears!

so good though! can't wait to read the others!
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From ANON - tinkle time kelly on July 20, 2006
Just have to drop a note of thanks. I'm rereading this for the umpteenth time,the whole series. I still enjoy it. I always seem to turn to this one when I'm in a Yuugi/YMarik mood. It's one of the best I can find. Please keep writing.
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From ANON - tinkle time kelly on January 06, 2006
this is the eighth time I've read this fic in the last three years and I still find it a pleasure to read. This pairing(marik/yugi) is great if not difficult to write. But I love the way you're able to do it. By the way I like your other fics in this series. Would like to see more of what you could come up with for this pairing.
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From ANON - darkmistressofyaoi on January 05, 2006
Whoaness! I just can't get enough of this story! I must've read it like a million time already. Marik Yugi stories are hard to find...and this one is SOOOO hot! It's totally droolworthy. Ja!
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From ANON - Andrea on January 02, 2006
It's all great! May I suggest a title? I don;t know if you like Green Day, but in their CD, Warning, they have this song called 'Blood, Sex and Booze' and I think it really fits! Bye! Please keep writing it and make it long
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From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2006
It's AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Some parts of it are funny, others are (sorry) just plain little bit gross, but it's excelent!
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From ANON - BEWD Sorcerer on October 29, 2005
I'm laughing so hard I'm crying.... or am I crying so hard I'm laughing. This is the best shit I've read in a long time. I love it! Please continue.
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From ANON - Velvetina on August 09, 2005
Wooo I'm back to haunt you! Well actually I got bored and decided that I wanted to come back and re-live this wonderful series so here I am and I just wanted to say that I love it as much as ever! LOVE IT

Velvetina xx
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From Lorilei on July 07, 2005
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read, on AFF or just Fanfiction.net. You have a real knack for writing. I've been reading, and am proud to say I have read all of your Yu-Gi-Oh fics, and hope that you update the unfinished ones soon. I read in your profile that you want the chracters and their feelings to become real to the reader, and I must say, you succeeded...in my case anyway, can't speak for anyone else. Keep up the good work!
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From ANON - aspiker on June 13, 2005
Just found your story --> pretty good! I like the twist of Yugi finally growing a set. The pairing is good too: it's refreshing to read one that is not Yami X Yugi.
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From ANON - setosgirl (not signed in) on June 11, 2005
Wow.... I just read this whole thing, and now am off to see the sequesls. Beautiful. Seto and Yugi... not so much. But I love the Bad Boy Yug thing. It was awesome. And Marik.. Gods, I loved him! This was one frekin awesome story!!!
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From Yamima on June 09, 2005
Just Awsome! I just read this a second time just for fun
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From ANON - cinnarolls on June 07, 2005
u bitch!!*wipes away tears of anger* I can't believe you put my little Yugi in so much pain!! What did he ever do to you?! I can't believe his friend would do this to him!! Oh and by the way I was pissed when you said Yami was a better dualer that not true Yugi is just as good as yami and if you'd watch the show you'd know that!!* falls down and cries* i can't believe anyone would want to hurt my sweet, wonderful, little Yugi...I am so gonna kick that Anzu's bitches ass!! Don't worry yugi AVENGE YOU I WILL!!
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