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Reviews for Kimi ga Iru

By : Kugatsu
  • From ANON - Shizuma on June 04, 2005
    Wow....wow...wow...you roc~k...wow...wait You abused Yami and Yugi relationship you evil fuck....Sorry but you and this story still FUCKIN ROCKS!Next story make make sure it's YAmixYugi or MarikxYugi now I'm about to read the sequel and it better be good.
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  • From ANON - Kenz on June 02, 2005
    I like this story I just cant get into the sequel its to messed up....
    but you are a good umm novelist(is taht what it be?)
    anyways keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Rachel Dracon on May 29, 2005
    Heh, kitchen timer... Hot ending chapter! Although Ryou's comment Bakura was pretty painful, damn! I actually read the first chapter of the sequel before I wrote this, so, great sequel, and overall, wonderful story!
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  • From ANON - Zoe on May 28, 2005
    Awww! *snickers* Even though he'd never admit it, that was so sweet of Marik. ^^; He really is nice. :D That was so great...thankies so much for four chapters! ^____^ Can't wait to see the sequel!
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  • From Yamima on May 28, 2005
    I'll hold you to that sequal, great story
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on May 28, 2005
    RD: wooot DAM that is soooooooooo hot hehe yes Shwarz despite populare belief i can follow and enjoy and marik yugi couple hehe yugi needs it beyond past time he got some "fun" in his life after being screwed over by his so called yami and that FUCKING SLUT OF A BITCH *cackles* now onto lesson two now weres my pupil YUGI WERE ARE MY DEMON ANGEL

    Yugi: here Red and rdy for more torture lessons

    RD: ok now next up we work on mental torture now got ur victim rdy * looks at anzu aka her victim* i got mine rdy

    Yugi: yup yamis all ready to go and is it alright if add ryou hes starting to piss me off

    RD: sure more the marrier for us now mental torture focus on there weaknesses now for Anzu total bitch wants everything her way and if she dosnt get it she does what she does best bitches about it well lets see how she tolerates it going in reverse for her instead of her bitching others will bitch and complain at her watch * sends mental images at anzu were every time she opened her mouth shed get ridicouled sent to the principles office at school grounded for months at home and every just wants to tape her mouth shut to stop her bitching and tears start falling from her closed eyes* and vuala instant mental pain and ill do more to suit her ok now first up Yami now what do we know that he cant stand

    Yugi: well he hated what happened to me after his duel with Rapheal

    RD: correct hes hates hurting you so send him that

    Yugi: ok *sends images to yami were at every turn hes sees him being the soul reason yugi cries or gets angry for every scare and mental and emotional abuse yugi ever "went through" and it loads him with guilt and he groans in pain of his torn heart* wow that worked great

    RD: yup now ryou he wants more then anything to believe his yami is trustworthy and loving show him naught but lies then

    Yugi: right *sends images of Bakura mocking ryou about his love for him beating him up and treating him like a piece of rock stuck in his shoe rather then the so called "younger brother " thing ryou is going for and he starts screaming in pain* hahah hows it feel bastard

    RD: fun isnt it yugi

    Yugi: yes its quite fun what else can we do

    RD: watch and learn and be creative for example *sends rock music each more dark and sinister till shes utterly consumed by its negative message showing her to be the true witch she really is* now ur turn yugi

    Yugi ok *sends the shadow realm to feed yamis darkness to make him utterly grotesque and for ryou to fall into a pit of utter despair* hey that was fun so whats my next lesson Red

    RD: next we learn how to use necromancy to torture them now run along

    Yugi: ok Red thanks *leaves the castle (btw in my domain i live in a castle with several torture chambers*

    RD: later yugi ok now Shwarz keep u the great work and send more hottness our way we WANT MORE hehe gtg now update soon and again keep up the great work gtg now JA NE ^__^
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  • From ANON - Rachel Dracon on May 28, 2005
    Heh, the clocks are damn funny, and it's nice to see Marik taking Yugi's temper tantrum seriously. Heh, the reason I review so much is probably due to the fact that you DID say two chapters a day, so I check this story a lot. I really dispise waiting somtimes, so if I don't have to wait, why wait, eh? Or something like that... And I could just review every fourth chapter or something, but hey, I've got time (not really), and the fic is good. Should be working on my own three fics though. It'd be nice to be able to update as fast as you do. That really fucking sucks for Bakura though, not to mention I bet he's pretty pissed off. Weird that Ryou would kiss him and enjoy blowing him if he only thought of him as a brother though. Marik/Yuginess was hot, and I wonder if Yami's pissed about that.
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  • From ANON - Velvetina on May 28, 2005
    Major cool chappies. Damn I'm gonna miss so much, see I'm going away for a week and cos you update so often think how much I'm gonna miss cos I'm not gonna have access to a stupid bloody computer! Anyways untill I can read this again, thank you once more for a truely enjoyable read, I love this fic so much now and it is easily one of my all time face Yugioh fanfics!
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  • From ANON - Rachel Dracon on May 28, 2005
    Ah, Bakura and Marik are fuckin' hilarious. I like that none of them can cook, so they're down to microwave meals until Ryou's back. Man, I'm of the opinion that everyone should be able to cook, at least the basics, microwave food is just not nearly as good for you. My older sister taught me to cook a long time ago, and once I picked up the basics I watched her do the more complicated stuff, and now I'm a good cook. Shit just tastes better if you make it yourself. Heh, now Yugi's got Marik thinking about him. It was sweet when he said sorry to Yami, but damn straight he hasn't forgiven them! You can't just let people think they can get do shit like that and then all will be well. I like the relationship between Marik and Malik, it's kind cute and kinda fucked up. Malik seems pretty unstable, and I like they way you've got Bakura acting, makes it hard to tell if you've got an intended Bakura/Ryou thing or an intended Bakura/Malik thing. It's sad Ryou really seems to believe everything his yami has told him though. Dude, such fast updates; you are GOD! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Rachel Dracon on May 28, 2005
    Huh, Bakura got all worried (in his own way) about his hikari. Wonder what he'd say if Ryou moved out, lived with Yami or something. Gah! *glomps* Two new chapters! ^.^ The Yugi/Marik thing WAS hot, and I wonder what's gonna happen with Yami and Ryou (if anything of note is going to happen). Wish I could leave a longer review, but my time is limited, suffice to say, it was great, can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Magi Valkyrie on May 27, 2005
    Oh my gosh...that was so freaking awesome!! Yugi is totally bad ass! I love it! Please get another chapter out soon?
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  • From ANON - Liccy on May 27, 2005
    Hohoho!!!
    I'm loving this dark Yugi! Not that I'm surprised by it... as much of a "goodie-too-shoes" he may have been...he still had his quirks. (Full out asking Jou to borrow porn and all that). That's the side of Yugi I enjoy! XD

    Still, as much as I'd like to see Yami in the hot-seat... I do crave a bit of closure, so I'll be eagerly anticipating the next chapter to see how it goes! I'm thinking things will definitely turn out for the best!

    Keep up the most awesome work! Definitely got a new fan in me, despite the lack of Jou here... and that says alot! Till next chapter!
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  • From ANON - darkchan on May 27, 2005
    Kawaii desu yo! Okay... now I think that I might get cavaties from the end of the chapter. ^^ Might I also add, I love the Marik/Yuugi aspect of the story. Is so very good. So yeah. *coughcoughwritemoresooncoughcough* ^^;
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  • From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on May 27, 2005
    RD: hehe oh come on yugi surely you can think of something more twisted then that hell even i can do better watch and learn young grasshopper in the ways of torture now first things first we need a victem ill get anzu u get yami ok yugi

    Y:k*grabs his yami* now what

    RD: now we torture them first you chain them to the walls so they dont get the foolish notion to try and escape *chains anzu to the wall* now dont gag them its more fun to hear them scream and plus no one would ever think to look for them here so its safe

    Y: ok *chains yami to the wall* so what do we do next

    RD: choose your wepon of choice number one the benefit of being magical is i can keep them alive for years giving us all the fun we could ask for now watch carefully *grabs her two diamond coated solid steal whips and starts lashin all up anzus chest then turns her around and reapeats the process with her back side * now you try yugi here *gives him a whip forged of light*that should give yami quite the sting

    Y:*takes the whip of light and lashes yamis front then also turns him around lashes his back* hey this is fun

    RD:yup i know now onto the next one now personally i like to add in a lil supernatural just to shake things up a bit watch and learn* grabs her necromancy book and slowly and painfully infect anzu with the worst of curses diseases and poisons till her mind cracks from the pain and still she continues then she grabs a special crystal that turns allt he pain into excrusiating pleasure for yami so hes enjoying himself as well as yugi while shes in absolute agony the greater the pleasure for the boys the greater the pain for her then she places her hand on anzus ruined mind then brings it back then shuts it down then uses her magic to turn anzu intoa mindless soulless puppet under her complete control but fully aware of the humilation shes going through even though she can do nothing to stop it and forces her to get down on every single last guy on earth and to become the human toy for guys world wide* there now her body is slowly being killed by the very thing shes loves to do slut around now its yur turn yugi

    Y: ok *summons up the powers of the shadow realm and inflicts dmg upon dmg at yami then infects his mind with visions of submision forcing him to believe he has to submit till finally he does and is under yugis complete control then he creates a love potion so pumped with lust that yami would start creaming his pants just to have yugi look at him and makes him drink the potion till hes naught but a slave to yugis whims through the entire day you could hear sounds of absolute pleasure as yugi spends some time with his new toy* thanks red dragon now i get ya

    RD: not a problem yugi just have fun and speaking of fun great new chappies for this ficcy Shwarz i hope you update soon and sry for the cut off of my last review but unfortunately i had a storm come in that night well keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE ^__^
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  • From Kugatsu on May 27, 2005
    Yes, two a day. I must say I produce some lovely work in the early morn....THANX FOR ALL THE SUPPORT GUYS! I think four more chapters and this puppy will be done then i'll work on a sequel, but that depends on how much time I get with the computer. ^w^
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