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Reviews for Kimi ga Iru

By : Kugatsu

From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on May 23, 2005
RD: well i have the tendency to get highly graphic and violent when someone harms my yugi huh its sickening how much that boy is going through i mean really, come on jou honda you betrayed his trust you should have know anzu was going to do something like this with the fact shes so gaga over that prissy little wash out grr just thinking about it makes me soo mad i could scream

*her dark sinister powers erupt forth and drag yami anzu and solomon and bakura into her chamber then she straps them down ignoring there pleas to be released she goes up to yami first then slaps him in the face hard thus silencing his pathetic whinning*

RD: you make me sick yami how could you to your own hikari does he mean nothing to you now my god and u want him to forgive you for what were does he begin if it wasnt for him you wouldnt even have a body right now and as soon as you get it what do u do turn your back on him steal his very life AND humilate him by invading his privacy its called PRIVATE FOR A REASON YOU GOD DAM SON OF A WHORE

*shes uses her powers and strips him of his masks and disguises showing the world in live cameras world wide what joke he is a total wash out good for nothing but failing then she turns to Solomon*

RD:well well if it isnt the olf senile fart of a geezer how does it feel gramps, knowing that deep within your very soul your destroying your real grandson. Yami is a fake and imposter hes not real he could never be your real grandson last time i checked he was NOT BORN AS A MOTOU NOR WILL EVER BE SO, i wonder how the world let alone the hospitals would ever react if they knew he has no past no family no nothing his own blood isnt even related to you hes a lie thats it just a disgusting lie and so are you mr. oh so great game master PAH ya right i wish you had died in that stupid tomb you dont deserve to be a grandfather after how badly youve hurt him you and yami bothe are not yugis family nor could you ever be

*use her magic and strips him of all his memories of ever being a good grandfather till he is smothered in guilt and leaves him in that guilt then turns to Anzu aka the bitch from hell*

RD:so anzu down to you now the most disgusting horrible pig ass slut ive ever had the dishonor of knowing your a disgrace a filthy disgrace you were yugis friend since the day he first met you and this is how you show him that just because some stupd ghost makes his appearance u want nothing more to do with yugi what the matter slut no more friendship speeches i guess ppl got tired of listening to your whinning bullshit you go on and on and on about friendship but when something better comes your way you start going on and on about it sheesh your worse then any bitch and or slut ever you hog everything that apeals to you friendship yami and popularity whats next slut money power were is it going to end u slut you care only about getting more like the stupid fucking slut queen you are well i hope you wrot infact ill do that for you

*launches hundreds of sinister spells killing slowly and painfully till she cracks then slowly decays into nothing then she moves onto to the last person the son of a fucking bitch bakura*

RD:well well bakura got kicked out of ur home tough shit yugi got kicked outa his life you moron and its all your fault he could have dealth with his yami being a fucking life stealing slut and hell if u hate yami so much take it out with him jeez ppl you all just treat him like hes nothing and u expect him to forgive you or show sympathy tough fucking shit you bastards all of you yes including the so called girls so he gives what u want and u say thanks for nothing shirmp then toss him out huh he gives you a life yami and thats all u want then u treat him lilke a fucking baby anzu the slut u get the man of your dreams and destroy yugis life i hope you get aids you slut solomon i guess when an older grandon came along you didnt need yugi any more huh well FUCK YOU OLD MAN I HOPE YOU DIE OF FUCKING CANCER and finally bakura you filthy scumbag so you hate yami cuz his daddy unknowingly took out your citties residents then TAKE IT OUT ON YAMI AND HIS FATHER DIPSHIT leave yugi outa this jeeze you all got what you fucking want now leave him be you shit faces huh well author keep up the great work and pls let me get angry again im looking forward to our next meeting gtg now JA NE ^__^

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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on May 23, 2005
i'm absolutely loving this so far! please tell me that this will be a marikXyugi pairing. if you do, i would totally love you for life. that is one of my favorite odd pairings and it is so hard to find fics about it. i mean, can nobody see the greatness that is marik and yugi? *sighs and shakes head* on with the review, umm... i like yugi's way of handling things so far but does he ever plan forgiving his friends or are they just S.O.L? personally, i'd do the latter. anyway, nice work so far. i am definitely interested in seeing how this plays out. (hopefully, with the end result being: marik and yugi banging each other out while plotting anzu's demise. ^__^) so until next time, ja!
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on May 22, 2005
what can i say? yugi, i know this hurts and two wrongs don't make a right but shit they deserve to be shunned. and i'm sorry ryou, but if i were you i would keep kicking bakura in hte damn balls until he puked htem up, then i'd beat his pea-sized brain out with a baseball bat. anzu, can i please run her over with a steam roller?? plz plz plz!!!!! as for yami... part of my wants to tear off his reason for being a man but another part whatns to scar his face so everytime he looks at a mirror it'll break, but hten i jsut want to smack him around until he comes to his senses.

i love this fic i really do!! yugi is pissed and yes it's cliche to have yugi geting hte abuse but shit he's pissed as hell and the others are taking what they deserve. anyway, i hope u update soon ^^
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on May 21, 2005
RD: oh btw ryou mailk marik bakura and solomon and Marik i left you boys outa "fun" didnt i *grabs them tosses them into her automatic torture chamber that auto matically restores and keeps them consious and alive while the pain and scars are still there till time runs out and she sets the time for two weeks of solid physical mental and emotional torture and puts in her desired torture session with included all sorts of physical tortue insects and toxins included nasty lil necro curses the poisoned there minds to no end along with some other tortures to make em cry there head out then finally turn there hearst into unrecognizable scraps of meat that even the otopsy couldnt decipher what happend to there hearts then leaves the room to do its job* there no one left out and my list will keep growing guys so go ahead keep screwing up ill be waiting so please author send more my way ive still got plenty more ideas up my sleeve and pls do update soon like i said earlier gtg now JA NE ^__^
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From ANON - Red Dragon Of Egypt on May 21, 2005
RD: ok pharaoh ive been nice you seemed to redeem yourself after your duel with darts but this has gone on LONG ENOUGH (FYI peeps and author if by any means what so ever u dont or cant stomach graphic violence i suggest you skip it k its not for the faint of heart ty) * grabs yami marik bakura ryou joey tristan tea and all the girls who hurt yugi then straps them to the walls turns them over to there backs then whipes them with her diamond coated whips and she dosnt stop she keeps whipping them until they have 10,000 lashings then she turns them around and walks up to each every one of them and pumps them full of lead till there heads are fit to burst then she grabs barrels of scarabs and sends the swarm of scarabs and a barrel of killer bees to utterly destroy them then she brings them back pain and scars still there then she grabs her scimitars and starts cutting them open keeping them fully consious of their pain then rips out each piece of meat on there bodies then rips out there bones then grabs there skulls breaks them open grabs there brains and smears them all over them then grabs there hearts and takes out a red lightsaber and cuts them all into tiny pieces still keeping them alive and fully consious she restores there bodies again pain and scars still intact then she attaches masks atached to tubes to their faces and then consumes there bodies with toxins poisons acids and miasma till there bodies melt from the inside out then restores them again again pain and scars still there then finally she tortures there minds has anzu raped a thousand times over (not really but her memories claim so this is all in her head) then she gets laughed at school cuz she such a sissy brain dead twit she stumbles into everything shes fugly and shes the most disgusting slut on the face of this earth jou and honda always torture her ushio consantly takes her to have some "alone time" and yugi just watches and laughs while yami is in his arms him also laughing at her till she cracks then repeats the same thing with other girls each more painful then the last until they all crack then she moves on to yami and makes his the worst by far hes forced to watch his hikari get made love to by Marik and Bakura watch as his 'precious hikari turns from him and looks at him with nothing but hate in his eyes he destroys atemus rep leaving him a disgusting degraded joke all girls hate him all boys beat him up and all his histroy is told in jokes and his life is literally hell till he also cracks and starts breaking down asking his hikari for forgivness she slaps him in the face then says* its what you deserve you pig and i wont stop there all of you will know pain and he will come out on top like no other mark my words you son of a god dam pussy of a bitch and dirty filthy disease infested sluts i will make you all PAY every scar every scrap of pain u put on yugi ill give back to you at a THOUSAND times more intense then ever i WILL NOT SEE THAT BOY HURT GOT IT *grabs all of them by the hair then straps them to mind washing machines that destroys there confidence breaks their wills and eventually will show on the outside and at the same time all they see is the one who could have saved them all had they not been so mean* hmm well Author good story though i cant say im to overly fond of yugi getting hurt like this huh but w/e its ur story dear im not gonna jump down your throat about it at leat yami and the bitches from hell are another story TRUST ME but none the less good work and keep up the great work and dont worry bout all that torture i vowed yrs ago to never put the author in them cuz its not them im mad at its who im SUPPOSE to be mad at that im well hehe mad at hehe now ill repeat myself one last time dont take this to heart author this has nothing to do with you its just yami and the bitches im mad at and remember if by any means this is too graphic pls skip it hehe no need to lose your lunch/breakfast/dinner over this gtg now JA NE ^__^
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From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on May 21, 2005
YUGI!!! *huggles him, slaps Anzu REALLY hard, kills her, cuddles Yugi a bit more, burns ALL the copies, sends Yami back to the showdow realm, brings him back, Yugi forgives him, Yami and Yugi make out? *
well something like that anyway can you please continue???? PRETTY PLEASE!!!
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on May 17, 2005
thanks sometimes i get so caught up. ooh look another asshole to feel mywrath! *big stupid grin on face asi smash grandpa's face in wiht a baseball bat and tries to shove motocycle up yami marik's ass* now he should be more kind i ishizu. if i were her i'd cut off his dick and balls and make him eat them with garlic spagetti ^^ *yes i'm still pissed at everyone* ooh i needed that nap. i hope you type a solution up fast. oh and for atemu, well like to see him get any more endorsment when all his fingers are smash, his body a living network of stichers like my fav villianess in a old comic and stripped bald. and i'll do it jsut say the word and i'll hurt him for asking like such a poppuse peacock *grins happily while weilding a bloodied bat*
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From ANON - ecristy85 on May 17, 2005
kick bakura's ass, kick everyone's asses please >_
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on May 17, 2005
*is crying but grabed giant hunting spear with twin blades and a silver gragon carved into the blade* i'll kill them... i'll kill them all where it hruts the most!! even ryou will suffer for his insolance!! *images of cutting all teh guys' d*ck flashes in mind as well as stabbing them repeatedly and melting their items in a volcano* and anzu and her bithces... i'll skin them alive!! *goes hunting*

whew i jsut had to get them off my chest. this story is so, damn!! i actually do feel like crying though. i really hope you update soon!!
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From Reyn on May 16, 2005
wah! this is so sad!! And I'm loving every bit of it! I hope to see frequent updates ^_^
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From ANON - Camille on May 16, 2005
There is so much missing this, but I will continue to read.
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From ANON - yukiko on May 16, 2005
awww no .... Jou is nice hein ? I love Jou ... or Joey but ... poor Yugi ... must ... torture ... Bakyura ... and ... kill .... Anzu .... soon.
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From ANON - Lady Laran on May 16, 2005
Oh poor Yugi! I can't believe his friends would do that. If Bakura stole it and made copies, how did last night's entry get there? Sheesh...I can't wait to see what more will happen! Update soon, please!!!
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