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Reviews for Kiss and Run

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  • From ANON - Jessica on May 23, 2005
    This is really funny! Though there were a few grammatical errors, I really liked it! I can't wait to see how Seto plays this off!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on May 22, 2005
    hey u can't just stop there noooo.
    great chapter update soon
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  • From ANON - yeah, yeah on May 22, 2005
    Blue: *pushes Carrie out of the way* And that's all from the beta, and know for our final verdict!

    Laughs hysterically at the reviewer who pointed out all the spelling mistakes in the fic (of which there were many) and then makes a very careless one herself. The above line should have read: Blue: *pushes Carrie out of the way* And that's all from the beta, and now for our final verdict!
    Know is to be aware of something, I think the word you were looking for was 'now' meaning to happen in the present.

    Oh about the fic, it was very cute but it would be much better if it was handed over to an experienced beta before it was posted.
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  • From ANON - BCM&CF&Arion on May 22, 2005
    Blue: Great start!
    Arion: We loved it!
    Carrie: *bonks them both* Sit down! But you had some BIG spelling problems.
    Arion: Let's roll the clips...
    Carrie: In the summary you put acidity, which refers to the strength of an acid on the pH scale, it should have been 'accidentally'. Then you wrote 'seconded hour' when it should be second hour. Lastly, when you substituted in words for the names 'Jou' and 'Kaiba', you put 'blonde' and 'brunette'. Those are both French words and if you have ever studied any of the Romantic languages you would know that all adjectives have a masculine and a feminine form, you used the feminine form and both are male so this is clearly incorrect. Those words should be replaced with 'brunet' and 'blond'.
    Blue: *pushes Carrie out of the way* And that's all from the beta, and know for our final verdict!
    Arion: 7.9
    Blue: 8.4
    Carrie: 7.5
    Blue: And that's all folks! No not the cane!
    Arion: *drags Blue away* Ciao, and happy writings!
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  • From ANON - yukiko on May 22, 2005
    so what will happens next ?
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