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  • From ANON - Draza on August 10, 2005
    YAY!!! new chappie!! oooohhhh..a twist!!! a secret revealed..why do i sound like a movie announcer? *giggles* great chappie!!!! please write more soon!!
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  • From takkycat on August 10, 2005
    Heh...I know a fight between two girls over a boy is called a "cat-fight" but what is a fight between two boys over a girl (even if she dresses as a boy) called?? Another excellent chapter!!
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  • From Wicabeth on August 10, 2005
    Uh, oh, love triangle!

    And I hope that Joey gets to punch Duke again *snerk* That'll teach him. And I hope things are going to work out!
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  • From ANON - Kittie on August 10, 2005
    I loved it and I really want to read more. I've been reading this thing since chapter 3....it wouldn't let me review so sorry on that. But it's letting me and stuff. so please more soon.
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on August 10, 2005
    Seto and Joey in the boys’ bathroom I can totally see happening. Interesting plot twist with Tristan. Perhaps he thought that he’d be Joey’s only choice for a partner and decided he could afford to wait on making his move. Or maybe he just didn’t want things to get too weird for Joey. Either way as Seto said, they’ve been insulting each other for so long that they do have quit a history together. They also understand each other’s natures quit well which lead to good non-verbal communication. I liked how understanding Seto’s being once he realized what was going on with Tristan. Even if he feels a bit alone at the moment.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2005
    ohh wow..thats a turn!!!
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  • From ANON - yami990 on July 30, 2005
    oh more please. hehe having sex on the first date is far from the worst thing that could happen. being raped on the first date is much worse. here's cookies and hot cocoa to get you to write faster.
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  • From ANON - tash922 on July 30, 2005
    oh please don't make this a short story its to good to end so quickly
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  • From ANON - dramaelf on July 30, 2005
    I read a fic were Jou and Seto got married while drunk and woke up the next morring didn't even know it happened. the athor never finnished the story though. this was a fun chapter I really liked itwhen Jou hit Duke.
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  • From ANON - Draza on July 30, 2005
    YES!! I've been waiting for someone to write about Duke getting punched (or beaten) THANKYOU!!! That bastard had it coming!!

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  • From takkycat on July 30, 2005
    I most certainly didn't mind! Heh...As I said before, I'm not much into het but I think you pulled this off slendidly!!
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  • From ANON - vampslyr on July 30, 2005
    Yea Joey! Show Duke what for. I’m glad you showed us why Kaiba didn’t interfere with Duke stealing Joey. Poor Kaiba must feel a bit insecure when it comes to dating if they’re all tramps looking for a sugar daddy.

    The two of them having sex seemed pretty abrupt, especially with how slowly you’d been building the tension between them. Talking about Joey and Tristan together helped transition it a little, but it was still sudden.

    vampslyr
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  • From ANON - Kodachi on July 30, 2005
    That was cute, but sex on the first date?? That was kinda fast, I believe...

    However, I thought Otogi getting beaten was hilarious, and he deserved it for that kind of attitude (I mean Duke).
    Kaiba getting jealous of Honda is funnier, too. *laughs*

    I like this plot. I can't tell where it's going, and that is a good thing. I hate predictable plots sometimes.

    Kodachi
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  • From Wicabeth on July 30, 2005
    *chuckles* Guess Duke finally got the hint XD

    *whistles* And, damn.. Joey had quite a fun time, didn't she? *grins*
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  • From ANON - PW on July 27, 2005
    She can't stay in the arms of Devlin! Why didn't she slap him, or do something tomboyishy? Well, I like this story, and definately will be checking up on it.
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