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Reviews for What Were You Doing??

By : YamiJounochi
  • From ANON - RayeMoon on January 12, 2007
    LOL, this was pretty cute, though I find it hard to believe any 15-year-old (or he may be older) like Yugi wouldn't know what sex is. Still, a very cute idea and I thought it was funny. Pity you don't have Seto Kaiba teaching that adorable creature just what they were doing. Jaa.
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  • From ANON - BEWD Sorcerer on October 29, 2005
    *lmao* And Seto Kaiba says, "Come here; let me show you." *cackling* I can't wait to read that. ^.^
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  • From ANON - HJ11 on October 16, 2005
    ahhhhhhh.......come on u gotta upd8 soon dis is to good!!!
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  • From ANON - Ima on June 02, 2005
    Love it! And it was good!
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  • From ANON - Millie Ishtar Motou on May 31, 2005
    THAT WAS TERRIBLE!! oops sorry just kiddin that was awesome sorry for the twisted sense of humour i was mean...er...will Yugi and Yami get together?? or is that just one of my deluded fantasies? continue?
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on May 31, 2005
    I like it, sorta.

    I am always up for a Seito/Yugi fic. Not too many of those.

    I read this one vamp au fic, with a dark Seito/Yugi pairing, and I can't turn back now. Dang.

    So when I find a Seito/Yugi fic, I am usually a fan. But like I said before, not too many of those. To find a good fic, I think I have found maybe five.

    Keep up the great work. Coolsa.

    So Yugi doesn't know about sex? Geez I knew when I was six (knew about the workings of it). Me and some other kids where the ones telling the dirty jokes, and I read medical books. Don't really give you anything on the stork. lol
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  • From ANON - Mr.D on May 31, 2005
    I love it please write more
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  • From ANON - Money Madness on May 30, 2005
    I agree with Critic, please do us all a favor and stop writing if you are going to put crap like this up.
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  • From ANON - critic on May 30, 2005
    u know that was jsut crappy. the lemon could have been written better and yugi coming in. look, if the kid is in what a freshman in hgihschool i would think he knows what sex is. even if it is between two guys. if this is your first attempt... then you need some more serious practice and i am being truthful. try getting a beta before you post something u suppsoedly call writing.
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  • From ANON - yellow bastard on May 30, 2005
    I forgot to point out another thing that called my attention. Why would Yugi ask Seto Kaiba? It seemed kind of random... maybe you should explain that in a following chapter.
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  • From ANON - yellow bastard on May 30, 2005
    the lemon was good, but I don't think that Yugi would be THAT innocent! How old is he anyway? 16 or something? At that age you know what sex is and how it is performed at least in theory.
    Besides that little detail, the story was pretty good.
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  • From ANON - ... on May 30, 2005
    the hell? No offense but don't you think that Yugi would already know what sex is? I mean 10 year olds know what sex is.
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  • From Kugatsu on May 30, 2005
    well YamiJ, it was pretty fast and you switched teh speakers voice around the third paragraph i think... i liked it but it was too fast, and why was teh school locked?

    YOU JUST WANTED TO WRITE LEMONY FRESHNESS! FOR SHAME! *giggles* it's okay! Ja!
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  • From ANON - J.S. on May 30, 2005
    ur joking!!!
    dat cannot b ur first lemon....it was amazing!!!
    keep up da gud work
    and update soon!!!
    i want 2 c how kaiba tells yugi bout da 'birds and da bees' ;)
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