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Reviews for Pleasure is Business

By : Aaries
  • From ANON - nancy on June 16, 2005
    Thats pretty good for your first lemon, alot of the time they are realy poorly done. Im not to sure about next chapter, yuris not really my thing...but it you want to write it, i'll just skip that chapter. You guys are the authors here right? I hope you update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - RYOU MOON on June 16, 2005
    I love it!! update soon please and thank you!!!
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  • From Kugatsu on June 16, 2005
    ^w^ eee!
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  • From ANON - Zoe on June 15, 2005
    If you like, I'd be willing to try beta-ing the story for you. Please contact me at sailormoon@talk21.com to let me know if you would be interested.
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  • From ANON - Nancy on June 11, 2005
    At first I wasnt sure about your fic, what with them being so young and all...........but its horribly addicting!! I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kari on June 10, 2005
    That was a quick update, gotta love that. ^_^ You two(?) mentioned the word 'comphort' several times, but it´s really spelled 'comfort'. Sorry for bringing up these small errors, I´m just addicted to good spelling. XD

    Great second chapter, I love how we get to see the situation from everyone´s point of view. It´s a good way to get to know all the important characters and like them. ^_^ I´m looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - kupo on June 09, 2005
    This is cool!!! The different POV did make it more intrusting. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kat1132 on June 09, 2005
    I really like this story. I can't wait for more to arrive. Please post chapter 3 soon!
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  • From ANON - RYOU MOON on June 09, 2005
    So love it update very soon please and thank you!!!
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  • From ANON - Camille on June 09, 2005
    I know I've read this before. I never saw anything since. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - Kari on June 09, 2005
    You probably already know this, but you (accidentally) mispelled the title. ^_^ It´s 'business', not buisness'.

    *is in awe* That was an excellent first chapter, I absolutely -love- it. You have to write more, it´s too good not to be continued. o_o I can´t wait to see more action on Ryou´s, Yugi´s and Malik´s parts. *is excited* I´ll be waiting anxiously for the next part!

    I checked out your Favorites list and it´s almost funny, but we seem to have the exact same taste in fics. We certainly have good taste. XD
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  • From on June 09, 2005
    You! NOOOOOOOO stoppie! This story was good and entertaining. You shouldn''t leave a good story with 1 chapter! AH~øHell can't amount to the fury I holdø~
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